Hey guys back with an OS..
1) I am not gonna write a sequel to it, so pls donot request..
2) credit of concept goes to Faria, sorry dear for being so late in posting this..really sorry ..
Hope u guys like it
N pls pardon errors
Doubtful mother hood
Pranav, Rahul…pls yaar bs kero. A lady in her mid thirties was running behind her 7 years old sons, n they were give her hard time to catch
Nupur: bs acho pls na….pls khana kha lo
Pranve: nhi hum nhi khay gay
Rahul: mom apny promise kiya tha yeah kiya baat hoi
Nupur: I know meri jan….but sum1 needs me na…
Rahul: is he important thn us too…he pouted
N Nupur heart was melted..but she knew she is helpless…..when it comes to her duty she cannot let her family cum in between
Nupur: koi meray rahul se zayada important hoskat hai…
Pranav: acha yahin mjh se zayda ho sakta hai…he pouted n she chukle…
Nupur: aray baba nhi…tum dono se zayada important aur koi nhi…mein bhi nhi….
Mayank: acha tu mein kaha jao…he said grinning leaning to entrance door…
N here Pranav looked at Rahul n Rahul return the look, mayank chuckled knowing wht is cuming next…they bth rush towards him, betting the one will reach first , n nupur shock her head n giggle
Nupur: aram se…
Pranav reach first n was taken up in mayanks arm..
Rahul: not fair yeah hamesha yeah kerta hai…
Mayank: cause woh fastest hai..mera champ..aur tum sab se intelligent ho…my head champ..
Pranav was a sports person from a very young age, n has always been a winner in it, while rahul was always the topper in his class….and thts y pranve was more close to mayank as he himself was an athlete in his colloge days…
Mayank bend down n picked him up to went near nupur giving her a peck at forehead…
Nupur: ab tu baba agy hain ..ab tu mein jao na pls
Rahul: yeah galat baat hai mama…
Mayank: kaha ja rahi hoo
Nupur: meri duty hai aj…night…
Nupur was the renowned neurologist, has specialized in children neurology..
Mayank: oh…
Nupur: ab tum bhi…mayank……acha idhar ao bacho…..they came stamping there foots near her n she pulled them in her lap..dekho beta jasay ap se mein buhat sara pyar kerti hoon asay hi ..mera jo patient hai us k parents bhi kertay hongay hai na
The nooded in yes…
Tu woh abhi pain mein hai na, ap nhi chaty mein us ko jaldi se thik ker do,so tht he can play n run n enjoy with his family….
Pranav: ya mama..
Nupur: so for tht I need to be there with him na, n I so miss u bth to whn I am away, paka promise we will go out 2morow no matter what ok….we will go n enjoy whole day 2morow…oki
Rahual: promise ..
Nupur: pakka prmise…now go to ur room n finish ur work..n dad k tang nhi kera
Pranav: we donot we r good kids..he said proudly n mayank chukled…
Giving her good bye kiss they rash up stirs..n she took her bag n things n went to maynk to say bye
Mayank: he pulled her close encircled his arms around her waist…not fair wife, yeah apki night mjhy bukil pasand nhi hai
Nupur: kiya kero pati dev..she said encircling her arms around his neck….bs pray k operation thik hojay….kafi young sa bach hai …
Mayank: he sigh..knwing it has always been difficult for her to face such things, so young children going though so much misery….he pecked her cheek….u will do it, I know….
She huged him tight
Mayank: tum kal subha se kasay bacho k sath jao gi….aao gi hi subha tu
Nupur: mayank rahul ka birthday waly din bhi mein ek ghante bad chali gai thi, woh buhat upset hai..so its oki im use too to such hectic schedule…but rahul ko itna sad nhi dekh sakti..
Mayank: he move a strnd of her hair….janta hoo..u love him too much
Nupur: mera beta hai….i love them both
Mayank: acha aur mein kaha gaya
Nupur: tumhain kiya koi proof chiay tht I love u ..she said irritated with is childish behavior wch sumhow she always adore
Mayank: han bulkily..i want a prof…lets see…
Saying he pressed his lips against her let her know how much he crave for her,she too respond to it with same love n affection pulling him near….
Nupur: tc..she said breathlessly….
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It was ver early in morning, when mayank woke up with his cell bused, to his surprise it was from house, no..
Mayank: hello
Pranve: dad..woh mera match hai..
Mayank: ohh…mein araha hoon…don't very bacha…
Sliding her head from his arm, n carefully placing it on pillow, he moved out side the room
Mayank: he champ..good morning
Pranve: good morning
Mayank: kiya baat hai ap tu hum se pehly ready, very good..
Prnave: ap ny tu kaha tha, practice make u won hai na…n I want to be like my dad..he said proudly
Mayank: he took him in his arm….n dad is so proud of u…dekhna ek din u will be at the top of the world ..im so sure abt my son..
Pranve: really dad..
Mayank: common we will practice
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Nupur: ok bacha , im gonna pick u form the skool, thn hum sab khub masti kerany chalein gay thik hai
Rahul: yaaa..mama ur the greatest…ab yeah pranve kaha hai…
Nupur: baba k sath hai….us ko practice kerni hai na apny competition k thts y woh aj jaldi uth gaya tha…
Rahul: oho…mama mjhy yeah nhi khana..he puted
N nupur smiled, she very well knew him and his tactics..
Nupur: hmm…khana nhi hai, ya khud se nhi khana hai….
Rahul: khud se nhi khana…..
Nupur: aao mein khelati hoon….she smiled n strt feeding him lovely…
Yahooo…pranve and mayank were racing in house, pulling each other to cum frst, prance who was trying on full and mayank who was pretending and letting him won, taking shower the both were cuming to dinning room
Pranve: dekha dad…I won..i won
Mayank: not fair u always one..
Nupur: good morning…
Mayank: god morning….acha tu tum is ko phir hath se khala rahi hoo…Rahul whn ur gona grow up….
Nupur: tu kiya hua , he is kid, agr khabi khabi kha liya tu…..
Pranve: dad humain tu khabi nhi khelaya
Mayank: so true pranve..HUMAIN tu khabi nhi khelaya…he said mischievously…
Rahul: dad ap tu itna baray hooo
Mayank: tu kiya hua….
Pranve: aur nhi tu kiya…tum bhi tu itnay baray ho…tu dad k bhi dil ker sakta hai….haina…n dad k hath per cut bhi laga hua hai …see.
He raised his hand n showed a tiny paper cut…mayank was at aww at him..he knew how pranve care for him..n was looking at nupur teasingly
Nupur: papa k chamhay…aaoo khelati hoon tum ko bhi…
Mayank: koi zaroraat nhi hai…hum apany betay ko khud khela day gay…haina champ…
The room was filled with giigles, teasing and fun, this was a routine of Sharma family. They were living a blissd life, enjoying evry bit of the life. But wht life was going to give them they did knew….
As promised nupur send the driver to bring children back from skool, and asked driver to bring them hospital as they will leave from her, mayank was also informed abt this, so he was also about to leave from there…
as the car was strted off from the skool, it strt raining heavily. driver was trying hard to concentrate on road, n was looking so keenly on road being as careful as he can, he turn the car to left n there a rushing track was cuming from the other end…he turned the car to other side, but the car was hited to hard by the truck…
Pranav/Rahul: baba….they scremed lound…ahh…
Driver : he looked back n saw rahuls head was bleeding a bit, he strt freaking out.whn he turn his eys back on road, a car was just abt to hit them
N driver tried to take control of the car, but due to slipy roads, n another car crashing them….they got hited with a tree from side n other side by the car….
As the whether was too harsh out, so the duty doctor wasn't there at the hospital, nupur who rushed out to see her children expecting them to rush to them n hug her, found them on stretchers drench in blood..her breath stoped right there seeing her beloved like this
She rush to them n spread her hand fanatically on both
Nupur: Rahul, pranve…utho beta..kiya hua hai in ko…WHT HAS HAPPENED..
She shouted at the top most voice, she was loosing her snse, the angles whom she left to skoll with smile in morning , were lying there almost lifeless…
Doc: dr nupur pls….in ko accident hoa hai, humary pass zayada time nhi hai..
Nupur: wht happen to them..wht do u mean
Doc: this an sever head injury, blood bhi kafi loass hochuka hai, they have been takig for MRI, but humain lagta hai operate kerna hoga..
Nupur: so wht r u waitng for dam it…do it…
Doc: we donot have a neurologist here available, n ur sons need to be operate as soon as possible, they r very critical…
Her whole world collapse right there she took support of the wall to hold herself, she her self can do operate them but can she, she looked at her hands wch were shivering with pain n fear, fear of losing herself, her beloved..she was sweating, her breath was uneven, she was going with a huge delima…
But this the only think tht can save them..
Nupur: I'll I am a neurosurgeon…
Doc: are u sure
Nupur: is ther any other option, prepare OT,
Doc: but whom ur goona operate first….as both of them needs u ….
Nupru; give me reports…she said with her voice shaking
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Mayank who was informed, with his heart stoped rushed to hospital, running through the corridor he reach near the OT as was informed, his heart was sinking just knowing wht can happen, nupurs shivering voice was echo in his ear, he was just praying endlessly nthing shud happen to his kids…
Doc: hum ap k ek betay ko tu bacha liya, dr. nupur ny operate kerliyan, magar
Mayank: magar kiya..his eyes were searching the doc face, n his heart was pleading nt to hear wht he is fearing
Magar KIYA..
Doc: apkay dosar betay ko hum nhi bacha pay…before we can strt his operation he lost the battle we r sorry…
Mayank: apka deemgh tu karab nhi hochuka hai…asa kasay hosakta hai…he is just 7, as kasay hosakta hia
Doc: dekhian mr mayank hum samhj saktain hai ap ki halata but hum sirf ek ko he baca pay..aur hum ny rahul
In a state of dead he rushed out of the room, ignoring wht evr doc was saying abt him, he just could register one think tht he lost his son…his son is no more with him, to play , to love, to adore…. he went out n saw nupur siting on floor, still in her surgery gown…with her head in her palms, cuddle up to her self crying out loud….
With snail step he went near her….guessing his presence n looking at his face, n tears she knew tht he knew all…she was herself loking dead, with gr8 effort she make her self stnd up, mayank was just looking at her completle pale n torn….mayank…his name escape her mouth as maon…..she was abt to move fwd to hug him, n cry with him but she was stop
Mayank: tum ny maar diya na us ko
Nupur: she looked at him nt getting anything but knew he must be in shock thts why saying so..mayank…..
Mayank:nhi wht mayank….. u did It deliberately hain na
Nupur: kiya
Mayank: u ..u saved Pranav ..n killed my son..hai na..u saved ur son n killed mine ..bolo..he shocked her from her shoulder n she was really numb to react on his words..wch killed the last live in her too
He was shaking her , n she was just looking at him numb n shocked
Nupur: mayank woh mera bhi beta hai..
Mayank: jhot woh sirf mera beta tha…akhir ho na tu sotali ma….tu tum ny apny beta ko bachya ..aur mar diya meray Rahul ko…bolo..tumhara hath nhi kapay us ko maraty waqt..kitna payr kerta tha na woh tum se, maa manta tha tumhain per tum ny….itni gir jao gi tu mein ny soch nhi tha..kasay kiya tum ny yeah han…kasay kerliya tum ny….
Mein hi pagal thaa….sab thik kahtya thy ….
She has already lost strength in saving her one son, n than announcing her other son dead killed are complete, but his words, made her body turning to ashes, leaving nhting behind she just kept looking at him with pain n lifelessness…she is no low n cheap, moreover mayank has tht much in his mind, this means he nevr consider her son his, the way she loved bth Rahul n Pranav equally…
Past:
Nupur was divorced 7 years back, whn Pranav was just sum months old, her husband was a pain n so when threshold of her tolerance arrived she left him. Mayank lost her wife when she was giving birth to rahul.. they meet in a frnds party, n few times more n found tht they can share there pains with each other, plus being parents themselves will respect n love the others child the same way
They got married n soon rahual n pranve find each other as bst siblings, thy love each other the most, ther day was incomplete with fight , loving teasing each other. They help each other , hold each other, they were the best companions.
Nupur always adore rahul as her own son, she has forgotten this statement tht rahul was not her son by blood, it never mattered. In fact rahul was much more close to nupur due to his shy n quite behavior, n plus he ws topper like her…
Pranav always had fun with his father, even mayank use to love him like his son, n always tried n maintain equality..
Pranve and Rahul were 4 when they got a dad and mother respctivky, in there lifes.though mayank was warned by his mother many time about nupur but he nevr took it seriously
MM: asali maa asli hoti hai aur sotali sotali..dekh nhi rahy hoo kitni chalaki se woh Rahul ko apny bus mein ker rahi hai, tumhara beta tumhar nhi rahy ga…dekhna ek din us k zaray tumhara sab kuch laylay gi woh
Mayank: ma kya hogay hai apko, woh us se buhat payr kerti hai, aur asay tu pranve mjh se zayda attached hai
MM: tu yeahi tu chal hai ….woh pranve Rahul ki jaga lay raha hai…dekh tay nhi ho tu…
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Mayank' friend: yaar wasy tujhy Rahul k future secure kerday na chaiy pehly , phir pranve k baray mein soch
Mayank: dekho neel..woh dono meray betay hian..n I donot like any one talking abt them like tht
Neel: yaar I know u love both equally, but when they will grow up, un k beech yeah baat khus nukaly gi..aur us din tu Rahul k liya buhat bora feel keray ga…cause chay kuch hojay, pranve nupur k khoon hai, woh pehly us k baray mein soch gi…maaahai uski , kasay nhi sochy gi its natural…
Present
Mayank; tum tu maa khelnay k bhi qabil nhi hoo…ek doc ki tarha hi soch layti ….tum ny meray Rahul ko maar diya…nupur..TUM NY MERAY RAHUL KO MAR DIYA, he was my life..tum asa kasay kersakti hoo nupur how can u do this…
With each word he slide down on floor, n was crying badly, with holding him self in his arms
He looked at back n found that they were shifting his son body to morgue, making his feet step up..he stood up n went near the starchier..
He moved his hand to see his son face, but closed his fist in pain of looking at him lifeless, he was jan of him, his giigles, his smile all was going through his eyes…thy way he use to call him dad, the first time he holded him , the feeling he gave whn he was in miserable condition after knowing his wife is dead, Rahul was the strength he lived for, evrying was moving in front of his eyes like a ree.l….with shaking hands he strt n covering his face….with his eyes half closed, he took deep breath n made him uncover
N his face from pain turn into shock..
Pranav: dad don't worry, till I am here rahul ko kuch nhi hoga..itni se tu chot hai he'll be fine
Mayank: I know son, my fighter will save his brother always…
He looked at him..n his breath stop right there, he felt his whole body paining and was feeling an urge to kill himself…He felt down on floor, in uter disgust of himself, it wasn't pranve whom she saved it was rahul whom she did….
His voice wasn't letting his cry came out, he cant scream , he cant shout
Silence was all there, n the two lifeless people were siting on floor on opposite side…
Nupur: I am mother mayank, a mother….i love my both sons, rahul has better chance of survival thts why I safed him, I knew it we will loss either of them, but I never knew tht I will loss evrythng….woh mera beta hai, yeah mera beta hai…mein tu dono taraf se hari na, aghir mein tu mein ny apna beta khoya hai, ya tu mein yeah beta khoti ya woh beta…
She try hold the wall near by, n stod up..came near pranve n kissed his forehead..
Nupur: sorry beta…mama could nt save u .she kissed him again….n moved out to see rahul n chk his reports, but fainted in between…
She regain conscious after sumtime, she was too weak mentally n physically…asking abt rahul thay told tht he is recovering…
Pranve's alst ruital were performed by mayank, his very mischiefness, his all protectiveness, evrythng was running in his mind, making him feel digused of himself…atleast pranve was better then him who fulfilled his promise of saving rahul till he can….he was standning in front of his grave, n was still feeling his tiny hands feeding him, kissing his hand where there was a scratch from stone whn he placed him inside grave, was feeling his hands wiping off his tears..
Pranve: dad im fine..ap rooh kyun rahy hoo…
He droped himself there n cried more…n was feeling diging a grave for himself too
At home…it was rahul who return back,
Mayank: nupur tum
Nupur: nhi mayank…mjhy mein aur sunay ki himat nhi hai…mein tumharay sath nhi rah sakti ..
mayank: nupur mein janta hoon, mein ny…..but rahul k lyan…woh tum se buhat pyar kerta hai
nupur: rahul…rahul se mein bhi buhat pyar kerti hoon..per tum ny mjhy se us ko beta kahany k haq bh lay liya….yeah soch ker hi mjhy khud se ghin ati hai…..tum ny meri mamta per shaq kiya mayank…tum nhy meray insaan hony per shaq kiya…tumhain laga mein ek masoom ki jan lay lo gi….
Us waqt apny beto ko asay dekh ker mjhy kasa laga dekha…phir ek ko mein ny kitni takleef di, per us ki saasein wapas ko dekh ker mery andar jan aai thi…per bhar aker mein ny apny betay kay ki saaso ko khatam hotay dekha..woh yaha mera hatho mein …
Tum ny kiya dekha hain…tum ny dekha tha undono k ….in blood pool, moan in pain, did u saw pranve losing his breath, did u saw his painful body shivering in pain….tum tu itna badnaseeb ho k akhir mein bhi us ny dad hi awaz di..woh jo akhir waqt tumhain pukara raha tha us ko tu yeah bhi nhi pata tht he never had a dad
Phir soch tumhar sath apni takleef share kero, per tum ny tu mjh se mera wajood hi lay liya…..
Mayank: nupur pls mjhy maaf kerdo…rahul k lyan mjhy maaf kerdo…pls….pranve
Nupur: naam maat lo us ka tu apni zaban se, jab tum ny us ko apan beta hi nhi mana, us pranve ko jo tum se mjhy se zayda pyar kerta tha, jo tumharay itnezaar mein aksaar khana nhi khata tha, k baba ay gay tu hum friends sath kahy gay…tum ny us ko apna beta many se inkar kerdiya..itna kamzoor tha tumhara rishta, ek incident ny thor diya….
Aur rahul mein meri taribiyat hai mayank, woh itna storng hai k sab bardsht kerlay ga…per tumhain mein bardsaht nhi kersakti…..
She left his room n a broken him to, his one sin left him all alone, but sumhow he knw he desrive it…
She reached rahul's room who was looking at his book trying to find colours, but he just gotten..
Nupur: rahul…he turn around n rash to his mother hugged him tight….mera beta ..ur strong enogh na…will listen to me carefully
He nooded in yes
I am going away from this home, he looked shocked at his mother, but I am nt leaving u, ur my son, ok , ur my son n nobody can take u away from me…I'll always be there with u.
Rahul: did I did sumthing wrong , y r u leaving me…he said between his sobs
Nupur: her heart pierce looking at her son..no meri jan..asa kuch nhi hai…ur my best son..bus mama needs to go beta..mama is helpless beta..pls understand.. u always do na…promise me u 'll be storng n nevr let anything effect u..
Rahul: promise mama…but u will meet me n
Nupur: yes ofocurse meri jan u think mama k can live without meeting u , whenever u want I 'll cum n met u..evryday we are gonna meet, will play…
Rahul : why I cant go with u
Nupur: who will takecare of baba than..han..only u can…u will na
Rahul: he think a bit , than proudly said..han mama I'll u donot worry…
Mayank who was standing at the door listening there talk, hold his mouth to control voice of his cry…he rashed from there n cried his heart…she still care for him, though he knew his own son will prefer living with her, n she can easily take him away from him, but she didn't tht…
She strt steping down proceeding towards the door, evvry step away from his house, was letting evr memory of steping in this house…
Mayank: sorry nupur ..there is no one to welcum u in this house..
Nupur: how cum u can say tht, look at there my son is..
He smiled n kissed her forehead….i hope he welcum u in his life too
Nupur: don't woory, he will, he so innconet…
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Mayank: nupurrr…..
Nupur: kiya hua…..
Mayank: pranve called me baba..….
Nupur: hooo..really..congrats baba…
Mayank: aao na ..see how he is speaking….
A tear drop from bth eyes, one of her n one of him…..
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Mayank: bhagooo….aj hum men are going out
Nupur: hay kyun…..
Rahul: kyun humain sabzi nhi kahni
Pranve: yes koi kahny ki cheez hain..
Mayank: aur nhi tu kiya …kya hum bakri hain jo ghass khay gay
Nupur: ji nhi ….ap loog mjhy chor ker bhar jay gay..phir mera kiya hoga..
Rahul: no way mama hum ap ko nhi choray gay ..mein ni jao ga mama k bhagiur
Pranve: ya dad rahul is right mama will feel alone….he too encircle his arms around her neck too….
Mayank: acha …foran mama ki side…pranve came forward…n pull him close,
Pranve: mein baba ko nhi choro ga
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Rahul: mama get up hum picnic ja rahy hain
Pranve: yeaaahhh….
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Rahul: mama..
Pranve: kiya hua…why ur scared..he encircle hi arms around him….mein hona..nthing will happen to u
Rahul: u knw n aim afraid of tall trees…mjhy daar lag raha hai..mama bhi nhi hai
Pranve: mein tu hoon na…dkehna I'll fight evry1, nthing will happen to u ..i promise
They both scremed..n nupur shut her eyes to let more tears go away….as walking thorugh lounge n was feeling her body shiver, it was the same place where her son was lying lifeless…n was taken away from her for evr n with him was taken away her life, her relations, her beloved , her, her self….
They say the heart of a mother is as big as ocean, as wide as sky…as pure as holy water..but still its question, its been asked to prove its loyalty….
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