Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 44

Originally posted by: -jaee-

A very well-written update but this one left me with a sour taste in some places and in some places I feel proud of Nupur ...

Mayank's feelings, his words everything made me feel disgusted ...

Nupur's courage and her thoughts were so well brought out that all the disgust that came due to Mayank, was washed away ... Her independence, her fight for her identity and her courage to stand up for herself was beautiful ...

Fiza Di, a fab story indeed and I am eagerly waiting for the last chapter :)

Jaee D. Rathore

thnks dear

Originally posted by: -Faria-

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fizuuu-hehehehehe hahahahahahha
accha ullu banaya tune- u r too smart yaar

hehehehe i thought mayank is nups hubby but now i found he is just a random Guy

i loved mayank and sam here- mayank is a true gentle man
loved mayur-sam relation
awww veryyy cute , nice and beautiful update

U r right nups is so strong- feel proud for her
r a Nups koi khelona ka cheez thodi hai----- uski bhi koi wajood hai
i really loved this story fizuuu
its awesome
loved it 2 d core
hope nups and mayur will happily start their life

hey dear so r8 to know u liked it ...n also conecting to nupurs charcter ...thnks dear

that was amazing update...loved to see nupur like this...and to face ech and evry hurdles and difficulties with courage...😎

one should be like ths...this is not the way to force a girl widout asking her...

mayank was also cum up wid strong behave but sumwhere his thinking towards her not so admirable...

love the convo between samrat and mayank at daal time...🤣

lovely update...like the way u taking ths ff...
w8ing for the last update...

with love🤗

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

mai third hogayi 😔..mujhe nahi khelna😭
humesha mere saath hi aisa hota hai😒

ok now coming to the update
it was awesome🤗
OMG...samrat to mast item hai😆...mayank kitna sweet hai😍...kitna acha bhi..😳..you know this was the best part...it was so sweet and lovely...loved the slow and stady comfort between them...too good🤗...i was somewhere feeling ki nupur ka ex-husband mayank ka bhai to nahi...cause shilpa aunty mom hain to..ok i know its stupid but just came in my mind😆

nupur was right...she shouldnt take that stupid's money...us paise ko fek dena better hai...i wonder how will mayank react after listening nupur's past...but i know he loves her...this things wont affect his love for her...😳

pls continue soon api...
cant wait for the last part...and confession😍

love
tasfia

thnks tasfia

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

its been five months.so you are not going to end them up together?
well, i wont mind that as i dont know if nupur feels for him or not.then again, someday nupur has to move on, and the mayank who left her and the mayank who loves her are two totally different persons. love has made all the difference in the world. so i dont want this mayank to be punished for something his not accountable for.

maaf kijiye... humein pata hai ki humein der ho gayi

Another greatest update...👏👏
I loved that nupur managed herself to face this world and found her existence...She really deserves this...
But didnt understand one thing...Who left his wife at her first day of wedding for no reason he held so many respect for a woman...Its kinda unblvable...
And i cant forgive him for his shameless deeds...
Waiting for the nxt...Dnt know what will happen when they'll get to know the truth...No pity for mayank but nupur will again suffer with the same pain...
Cont soon...

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

maaf kijiye... humein pata hai ki humein der ho gayi

par aaj hum bahut khush hai😊

humein nupur pe naaz hai... unke faisle pe faqr hai...

aur humein mayank pe bhi naaz hai... ki woh unki zindagi mein khushiyon ko wapas laane ki koshish kar rahe hai bina koi sawal kiya...

yeh khubsurat daastaan mein humein shamil karne ke liye shukriya

~jiya~

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Another greatest update...👏👏
I loved that nupur managed herself to face this world and found her existence...She really deserves this...
But didnt understand one thing...Who left his wife at her first day of wedding for no reason he held so many respect for a woman...Its kinda unblvable...
And i cant forgive him for his shameless deeds...
Waiting for the nxt...Dnt know what will happen when they'll get to know the truth...No pity for mayank but nupur will again suffer with the same pain...
Cont soon...

thnku sooo much dear

great update. thanx for pm me