Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 41

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

hey fiza...

This one was too good... you have portrayed the girl's emotions beautifully...

par kya hai naa, humein zindagi se itne dukh milte hai, ki hum kahaniyon mein khushiyaan dhoondte hai...

I'm gonna read both, as this will be a reality check for the dreams that would be weaved in Walking With You...

Thanks for the pm

~jiya~

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

fiza...ye kya tha...it was too good...u portrayed a girl emotion so perfectly...i'm eagerly waiting for next part...jaldi likhna...plzzz

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Fizaaa
wow dearHow beautyfully u portrayed d emotion of Nups- a newly married girl
her emotion was full of fear, excitement , shyness etc...

i really loved it
oh GOD - she was eagerly waitng for his husbend- bu he dint cme

she got a letter-she thought it was a surprise for her...
but she was wrong
fiza- why mayank did it with nups- he had no right to gve her pain
i feel sad after reading this part
veryyy beautifully written
weldone
keep it up

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu

beautifully written . plz update soon

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

O My God Fizza Ye kya tha

How could He do this I just hate him
hope He Wasnt Mayank

Plz fizza clear all the readors that this is not Happened in Muslims family Only ye kabhi bhi kisi kay bhi sath ho sakta hay

The reason is not The Religion

Me also belong to Muslim Family and in our family marriages are Fixed after taking girl permission

Hope u understand What I wanna say

I really loved your Ff

thanks For pm cont soon

Originally posted by: achoose

beautiful part dear..i have no words...u portrayed nupur's emotion very well...i was amazed...but how cud mayank do dis?

juz wana kill him at the moment..

awesome update dear...

loved it...

Originally posted by: mahakmev

amazing

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

waise that was fab part api🤗
i think forum problem hai koi baat nahi😳
mayank ne aisa kyun kiya??😲
ab kya kya hoga???😈
yea nupur ko itna pain kyun de rahi ho?😭
mayank loves someone else?😲
aww..pls continue soon😳

love
tasfia

Originally posted by: -moona-

omG how can he do that..

it was Very Touchy part..

and i cried when she said Kasoor kya tha mera..

feeling so bad for her..

she even didnot knw his name, just waiting for his groom..

God destiny played with her bitterly..

why this always happened to woman...

Hello guys

Im back with an update '.n with lilt thing

As Gul said'tue it doent happen in muslim families'thy r nt conservative'.but there is a decision wch nupur will make '.wch is only allowed to be made by a girl in muslim religion thts y I have chosen our religion'.gul im a muslim n I'll nt at any cost will write sumthing tht will go off my religious values'..

Two'im nt gonna clear ur any apprehension till the last update as I'll addres th reson of writing this in epilogue'.hope u also love this one

Love

fiza