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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Fizaaaaaaaaaa
wow dearHow beautyfully u portrayed d emotion of Nups- a newly married girl
her emotion was full of fear, excitement , shyness etc........

i really loved it
oh GOD - she was eagerly waitng for his husbend- bu he dint cme

she got a letter-she thought it was a surprise for her......
but she was wrong
fiza- why mayank did it with nups- he had no right to gve her pain
i feel sad after reading this part
veryyyyyyyy beautifully written
weldone
keep it up

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#392

beautifully written . plz update soon

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@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#393

O My God Fizza Ye kya tha

How could He do this I just hate him
hope He Wasnt Mayank

Plz fizza clear all the readors that this is not Happened in Muslims family Only ye kabhi bhi kisi kay bhi sath ho sakta hay

The reason is not The Religion

Me also belong to Muslim Family and in our family marriages are Fixed after taking girl permission

Hope u understand What I wanna say

I really loved your Ff

thanks For pm cont soon

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

beautiful part dear..i have no words...u portrayed nupur's emotion very well...i was amazed...but how cud mayank do dis?

juz wana kill him at the moment..

awesome update dear...

loved it...

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#395

the worst part is that you gaian forgot to PM me this one..😭

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#396

waise that was fab part api🤗
i think forum problem hai koi baat nahi😳
mayank ne aisa kyun kiya??😲
ab kya kya hoga???😈
yea nupur ko itna pain kyun de rahi ho?😭
mayank loves someone else?😲
aww..pls continue soon😳

love
tasfia

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

omG how can he do that..

it was Very Touchy part..

and i cried when she said Kasoor kya tha mera..

feeling so bad for her..

she even didnot knw his name, just waiting for his groom..

God destiny played with her bitterly..

why this always happened to woman...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: drmaha
😃

m the first..yahooo...😆

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oh God it was just the bestest...
the way u portrayed the emotions of a newly married girl..although she was new for just a few hours.but tht was heart wrenching...

concept was really gud...this world really cant understd the emotion,respect of a girl...
thanks for such a bautiful update...
loved it...

ya ya

u first

thnks dear ..u know these coments means alot to me...i have been talking to u abt wajood frm past 1 mth...n whn finally i updated i was dying to know wht u all think abt it

glad u liked it ...though the true concept is still nt revealed...

yes its true ..its geting harder to find a person wch understand sum 1 emtions

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: -jaee-
Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!

Thank you so much Fiza for writing this for me - I really loved it and forgive me but I ma going to read this one rather than Walking With You, I guess - it was perfect ... I really loved how you showed a new bride's emotions ... It was heart-wrenching update frankly speaking ... Everything was so pleasant in the beginning but as I reached the end, I was horrified - shocked and I actually trembled - how could someone do like that? What world are we living in? Who gives rights to a person to play with someone's emotions, heart, dreams and most importantly life? This is just utter nonsense - and then saying sorry - urghh!! Sorry is such a strange word given by the English people - you cut someone's throat and then say sorry? You stab someone to death and then sorry? The way you showed her emotions - I actually felt that pain and I hope no one ever goes through what she is going through ...

Wonderful work Fiza - I am so glad you wrote this - thank you so much ...

What apt title - Wajood : seriously what's the identity of a woman in man's world?

Jaee D. Rathore

ur forgiven Jae...as myself i love this one more thn anything i wrote...

this basiclly a journey of girl...mayb in mid it agin will turn beautiful but thn i want every girl to know wht thy r meant for ...

im glad u liked it n i really hope ..tht u so feel same in future too

glad u comented

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Fiza too good dear...
An amazing piece written by a marvelous writer...The whole part got so much depth...Its so easy for a man to get married and then break the dignified relation in a flick o time...He didnt care a bit before destroying her happiness, her desires, her whole life...Just a coward...Dsnt have that guts to face her, to show his shameful face...
And the pain u showed last ws...It ws heart wrenching...
I loved the title...Went perfectly with the story...
Cont soon...

thnks dear itni tarrefay na kero meri jann... thnks alot for feeling it will cnt vry soon

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