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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice OS

THX ALOT FOR THE PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hii Fiza

You gave it a nice ending :)
Meri Kasam maan li 😆

It was really nice ending :)

Life doesnt give always a second chance

But I still loved the emotions in first part!

Take care 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww so cute
and so touching
i really loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLO

IM MAD YES IM ''

Here is a short story 'of 4-5 parts

Character sketch courtesy MS FARIA'..thnks jani lov ya

So this one is for her

An ya its untilled so pls suggest 1

Lov ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hitler ..pori k pori hitler….just ask money for one thing …aur pora hospital sir per utha layti hai aur mjhy mjhy sadu kahti hai……errrrrrrrrrrrr… ijust hate this girl …..

Dr.Mayank Sharma, thr oncologist (for children )….mr perfect ..are u nuts…joke of the decade….if his father has nt said he'll abandoned him..n his girlfriend haven't ditch him saying he cant get a flourished career..he would nt have been here……but today he have realized ..how much he loves his profession….

Bang …the door of his cabin goes opened n closed…….he threw his stethoscope on table…

Wht the hell…..samhjti kiya hai …trusty ki beti hai tu kuch bhi khay gi….juma juma char din hoay aay hoay…..aur attitude tu dekho…..teri wajah se teri wajah se im tolerating her…ab woh….now she is gonna tell me how to mange my expenditures….how to spend n how to not …

Benji: kya hua dude..mein ny kiya kiya

Dr benji ….cosmetologist …..n unfortunately tht girls cousin brother…n mayanks best friend from medical colloge times..he is a cosmetologist because…yaar itni hot girls aay gi meray pass..kitna maza aay ga……im a beauty praiser

Mayank: yeah poch kya nhi hoo

Benji: acha tu yeah bata day kiya nhi hoo

Mayank: woh trusty ki beti..eeeee…..woh .tht girls had stop esha's medical treatment/…..us ny us k lyan jo medicine abroad se mangi thi woh mana kerdi…..maam ko us se problem hai…mimicking her….hospital k resource k galat istamal hai yeah……ur doing expenses beyond required…..aur tu aur us k meray life style se bhi problem hai….ur living ur life beyond the luxuries.….matlab mein mein …us company se commission layta hoo…for giving us medicine….

Benji: wht

Mayank: ya..meri luxuriance life..us ko tu jasay pata hi nhi…mein Sharam hoon the sharma….asay 10 hospital bana sakta hoon…

Bang the door open….

Nupur bhushan…MBA finace..handling admin n finance of hospital..smart, pretty arrogant spoil brat, ghussa satway asman par….aur jab apni ego k baat aay tu apni sab se payri cheez ko bhi thornay mein na soochay…..she hates mayank precisely for 2 reasons

  1. her father always find him right above her
  2. he sum how r the other proves her wrong…though she doesn't obey his point of views but knows very well he is right

but today she had got a solid point against him…n as its her ego fight she 'll go out of the way to prove him wrong

she threw one by one sum files on mayank's table …to gave him shock n anger of life

Nupur: dr. sharam..have a look at all this n decide …im right or ur…

Vishal ….age 9 yrs…u spend 4 laks to get a medicine from abroad when a local company was providing it in 1 lakh……n u think u were right

Throw 2nd file

Rahul…4 yrs…u spended 20 lakhs….20 lakhs at his chemo n radio therapy n then send him abroad on hospital expense for treatment n wht happen he didn't survived….n u very well knew tht his condition is such tht there are only 20 % chance ….so again wasted expenditures………

Mayank: wht….u have lost it MS bhushan…r u nuts

Nupur: no I am not but ur ….now esha 8 yrs…..now again ur sending her to Italy for marrow transplant knowing tht her codition is nt such tht she will survie n again

Mayank: Stop it….just stop right here…he shouted at top of his voice

Nupur: wht ….dont shout at me….can u justfy ur choices n spending money…ur whole idea of spending or rather throwing money on ur so called patients is beyond explanation……tum keraty kiya ho un ko bahar bahacj ker haan…..kahin….u sell organs ..hmm

Benji: stop it Nupur ….ur getting irrelevant

Mayank: coldly…..i don't need to give explanation to any 1…

Naupur: fine ….than the auditory comity will evaluate u…explain every thing to them

Mayank: I m ready …..though sum where he knew he will lose it

She was about to leave when

Mayank: ms bhushan …gar ap ko profit n lost se time mil jay tu kabhi kabhi jin per mein itna spend kerta hoon..aur jo ap l hospital k chala rahy hain un se bhi mil liya keray…u 'll get ur answer….han but ur precious time will be wasted but yet may by chance ur dead heart may become alive…..

He took his thing n left his cabin

Benji: mayank rook….tum thik nhi ker rahin hoo Nupur

Nupur: Nupur bhushan kabhi galat nhi hoti

She ws left alone in his cabin…..her heart had a pain at his words …so he find me dead at emotions..btu she knew her words were beyond harshness…but she is half her success ….so she ignored everything

The trusty of hospital was out of town so Nupur was the in charge…she organize a auditing session n put forward such profs n point that mayank was believed nt more thn just an emotional foool….she was a bit upset tht he isn't fighting for himself….n just watching her coldy…..but she won ahh her ego was satisfied…the auditor gave mayank warning as he was one of the best so thy didn't want him to leave

Benji: tu jazabati ho raha hai….bhushan sir ko tu anay day ..he 'll decide

Mayank: baat warning k nhi hai benji…..meri professional vales ko kis ny challnge nhi kiya aj tak…I worship my profeesion….mein buhat tang kerta hoon us ko mjhy pata hai…but woh apny personal problems ko professionally lay gi…moreover …mera badla meray patients se kyun nikal rahi hai…us ny esha ki treatment band kerdi hai until the others doc evaluate the case…manta hoon zidi hai..arrogant hai…but itni dead hai yeah mjhy nhi pata tha

He walk towards her cabin n knocked

Nupur: com in

Mayank: here is my resignation letter….ur free from any kind of expense from my side

Nupur: so u lost…apni har tasleem keraty hoo

Mayank: smirk ….nupur u know wht ..life mein its nt always about profit n loss …wining or losing ….sumthings are beyond all this…they are about feeling , emotions, values of life…

Abhi hi kah raha hoon…mein tu chala jao ga….per tum n regret kero life mein islyan…just go once outside this room to them

Tumharay hath mein tu sirf zara se hair line fracture hoa tha…n ur father was soo much in pain right…thn just imagine these children have almost lost there fight…how there parents die very moment …n thn this hospital say to them we r nt affording ur treatment ….

Anyways ….if any how in ur life I have bothered u or trouble u …tht I know I have done aloot…but if I have hurt u …I am sorry for that ….

He turned around n slowly proceed to the door…u might stop me..

Nupur: myank

Mayank: he stoped there n smile…n turned around without any expressions….

Nupur: tumhara account clear kerdiya jay k within 2 days….so aker collect kerlay na..

Mayank: he laughed pitifully at himself…..us ko esha jab tak yaha hai us ko us ki treatment per spend kerdo….thnku …

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res

sheenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

dekh maine tera asli roop find out kiya hai

Ek admi Dr. Se-

Aap Parchi Me Aisa Kya Likhte Ho

jo Sirf Medical Store Wale Ko Hi Samajh Me aata hai

Dr.: main likhta hu'.

"Maine Loot Liya Hai Tu Bhi Loot Le.."

chiiiiiiii aise karte hai doctors
LOL LOL LOL LOL

comment k liya thoda wait ki jiye jaise maine ye update k liye 1 month wait kya
Edittttttttttttttttttttttt.................

Oyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Finaaaaaaaaaaaaa(Fiza+Sheena=Feena.lol)
tisri bar comment likh rahi hu- yaar my bad luck...... jab bhi main comment karti hu post karne se pehle he power cut ho jati hai......:(

now this is my last try- after that i wont try to comment on it.

btw Feena
at first i would like to thank u for ur beautiful tarif on hitler
BY GOD bahut pyar karti hain na tu apni hitler se. wah wah aise pyar karte raho- wo khush ho jayege.lol

accha now comming to ur update
haye finuuuuuuuuuuuu what a start- sadu akdu maynk but who is good in heart.......
a great doctor who is alwz trying to do his best for his patient.
and who also irritate our nups
but our nups- OMG she is totally opposite of mayank - papa ki ladli, ghamandi, arrogant aur kia bolu.
Nups hates mayu bcoz her dad think mayu is alws right which is true and thats why its hits her ego.
wah wah kya bana diya mere nups ko. maine tujhe kaha usse jiddi, chulbuli, thoda arrogant banana na lekin tu tou meri nups ki shatyanash kar di
dekh u should portrayed her good side in ur next update nehi tou main tujhe????
chod baad main bataungi kya karungi..............

MY GOD Mayu resigned frm hospital- ab yehi baki reh gayi thi
yaar tera yarada kya hai- zara khol k bata..............maar khani hai tujhe mere hoto se...

finuuuuuuuuuuuuuu i really loved ur first part- maine jaisa chaha waisa he likha - at least u hav fulfill my 70% of my desire....

wonderful part finuuuuuuuuuu
loved it to the core
plz next time jaida der maat karo
take care
love ya




Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh God doc it was fab concept..........
mayank really a sweet heart but nupur.......😡 how arrogant and selfish.........😔

well i was really lost while reading ........😃

faria: loved ur comments..........u r rite finnaaaaaa really wrote outstanding.........🤗

best part was MBA in finance.
....
🤣😆

nupur will regret on her behave...she should be........

benji kabhi nai sudhray ga..........😆

update soon....desparate to know wht happend nxt...........😃

love ya dear.....🤗

tc........
😆
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hay thats a great concept and Story
My God Nupur is so rude
hope every thing will be fine soon
Thanks For pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

This was so different... Nupur is so harsh and very rude, it looks like she has no heart... And too much arrogance... oppsite to Mayank... Looking intersting what happens next...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting start..cont soon
thanks for the pm

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