We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 69

Originally posted by: dhano_arti

hey Mansi

read the whole ff just now its just wonderful ...rather "perfect"😃

i liked it a lot ......keep updatin n pls add me to u r PM list dear......

MayUr n SaJan rock!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: dhano_arti

hey Mansi

read the whole ff just now its just wonderful ...rather "perfect"😃

i liked it a lot ......keep updatin n pls add me to u r PM list dear......

MayUr n SaJan rock!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: chilluppp

congrats, ur sis too engaged

like nupur is she too gonna wed withing 10 days???? 😆 no..the wedding is next year!!😛

ok sorry

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update

sammy is the besttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

i love him in ur ff yar

ok out of the worldupdate dear

loved the feelings of mayur

n omgggggggggg

the bestest scene was when nupur called sammy n he was busy with his chashmish

sajan r just amazing

sanu scene is fabbbbbbbbbbbbb yar

loved the bro sis relation

n mayuuuuuuuu

us k bary mein kya bolon

do continue soooooooooon

n sorry for late comment

Originally posted by: vincikhurana

hey;u write quite well it ws a real fun reading ur ff.........do pm me nxt tym u write..................

by d wat dis was d best part

"Im sure Gunjan wont come inside today.' He said lying down again.

'Why?' She asked confused.

He rolled his eyes and chuckled. 'Nothing..good night.' "

lolz.........................!

fantastic part.....i love the rapport the principle characters share...................waiting to see how this story unfolds.......continue soon

Originally posted by: Rabiah

Hey.. just read all parts to ur PERFECT FF..😃
I just love it.. it is so good....😛
so plz dont mind my commenting on every part..lol.😆. i want to do justice to ur amazing work...
but ill try to make it short..😆
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PROLOGUE
We're the perfect two Baby me and you We're the perfect two..
Oh my i love this song.. i think it defines the jodi's of MJHT..😳
Im glad ur including both MAYUR N SAJAN in here..
Love that SANU are bro n sis n MAJAN😳
Nice...
Mayur n dosti...? thats nice.. i knw this dosti is gonna be love..😉
n Gunjan Suspense.😕. lovin it...👏
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CH1:
haha love Nups reaction for SHEEEEENA..!!!😆😆
'Aww..so sad. Actually good. I never liked that Ms. Ultra Modern Bitc''
Love MN scene in Mayanks bedroom..
N liking how Gunjan seems to be opening up to Samrat..
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CH2:
OMG! loving Mayank..
Mayank smiled. 'I have an idea. Samrat you marry my sister and Ill marry yours'we will buy a big house and live happily ever after.' He said still eating. i knw he didnt mean it but.. kaise dil k baat bol diya.. n the reaction of SNG were soo funny..😆
Nupur always gets her way.😉.. cute. how Mayank just given in to her demands...lol😆
Adhiraj.. such a jerk..😡.. Nups deserve so much more..(Mayank)..
Aww.. i just loved that SANU scene.. perfect brosis moment..
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CH3
Mayank.. subah hi subah Nupur ko yaad..
so sweet..😳
Mayank suspicion on Gunjan.. not being his sister.. well its all thanks to dear Sammny..😃
MN N studies.. 😉..
yay! nups ne top kiya..👏👏
LOL.😆. WOAH.. aate hi MAYANK ko..ahem... 😳
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CH4
Samrat very openly talked to NUPS about marriage.. he is a gr8 Bro!..
Nups dream was ... 😳 but love how u ended it.. 😆
n just like Muskaan i will also say...
Oho Nupur abhi se hi aise dreams haan?
They said yes!!!😃.. Love how Sajan was convincing Mayank
n gr8 to Gunjan for sitting in front.. 😉LOVED THE akwardness in the car..

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CH5a -b
Loved the Girl talk..the glass scene was a nice touch..
loved the whole BEACH TALK..
Gunjan n BB.. poor Gunjan..
haha loved how u added MEHEK IN here.. so cute.. N for Nupur..lol..😆
Gunjan cleaning all the rooms..😆
Loved SAJAN PARTS VERY MUCH IN THIS PART..
😡mayank needs to get off his phone..
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CH6
Yay.. Majan mom is here..
Oooo loving Nups entry at home..
sweet scene with the PROMISE😳.. n getting caught holding hands..lol..
n loved Gunjan demo for Samrat..😳😆
oh no.. 10days mein shaadi .. a bit 2 early na..😲
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CH7
Love the entire part.. Samrat emotional was just heart touching..😭
Its soo hard to pick out the best part..
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CH8
Adhiraj🤢.. but im glad.. he didnt cross paths with Nups..
love all 4 going shopping..
I knw that dress will make its way back to Gunjan..
oh no Sajan locked in the store..
awwww i loved their scene .. they are soo cute in ur FF
Aww. Nups in her parents room.. n that scene had no dailogue but it conveyed a lot... 😭
Shaadi bari jaldi hogaye.. CV should learn from u..lol😆
haha loved nups constant.. "MAYANK"😳
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CH9 FINALLY..LOL😆
Just loved it entirely..
N yes Gunjan.. u n Samrat are the perfect two..😉
OOO cant wait for GuNur Bonding..😍
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Okay i knw ur prob. annoyed with such A LONG commenting. but i just had too
If they listen to us fans n do a season 3.. they should so do it like ur FF. it would be a super hit..😉
ADD ME TO PM LIST please!😃
CONT SOON.. CANT WAIT..😍

❤️Rabiah

'Ill drop Nupur back..dont worry.' Samrat said.

'Yes..and your having dinner with us.' He ordered.

'That's not needed. Don't make me feel so odd Mayank.'

'Samrat..we are friends first. Now stop. Ill see you tonight.' Mayank smiled and was about to get in.

'Waise Mayank..Im sorry about that teasing..of that..wedding night thing. Don't take it personally okay. I was just joking.' He said with an apologetic look.

'Samrat..' He chuckled. 'I know that. You think I took it seriously? Any anyways..please be yourself. Leave the serious characters for me.' Both of them laughed. 'Bye.' He got inside the car.

Gunjan gently waved at Samrat..while he waved back..in confusion. Mean-while Mayank smiled to himself. Ever since the time he had first spoken to Samrat..he had a liking for him. He maybe a kind of playboy, but he always respected woman. That's the one thing he liked about him. Though how ever he may pretend to be..he was very good at heart. He would always tease..and then apologize later..it was his habit. His character reflected in Nupur also..as he had taken care of her since she was a child.

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'Nupur! Switch off the music yaar!' He said a bit irritated.

She made a face and switched the music off. 'What is your problem?'

'I want to ask you something. Seriously.' He said with a straight face.

She started giggling. 'All this seriousness doesn't suit you. Get to the point.' She said getting back to ironing.

'Have you ever been in true love?' He asked emphasizing true.

She looked at him bewildered. But then smirked. 'Yeah. Once.' She faked a blush.

He looked up at her shocked. 'Who?' He asked raising his eye-brows.

She switched off the iron switch and walked to him. 'The one'and only..' She sighed.

'Who??' He asked impatient.

'Shah Rukh Khan. My first and last love.' She declared dramatically and started laughing.

He pushed her. 'Haha very funny.'

'Waise..why are you asking such a question? Your in love with somebody?' She asked in a teasing tone.

'Me?' He shook his head. 'No..my friend..' Trying to remember some name. 'Sumit..yeah..He was asking.'

Nupur nodded smiling.

'You have seen so many bollywood films na..what are the symptoms of this "true love?" Tell me na..Ill go and tell him.' He added the last line seeing her expressions.

She grinned understanding the situation. 'True love symptoms..' She said slowly. 'Hmm..you just think of that person..when you close your eyes..you see that person when you open your eyes..'

Samrat remembered seeing Gunjan in his room..and also dreamt of her after closing his eyes.

'You care of that person'unknowingly..'

Samrat remembered consoling her that night when she was crying.

'You feel like telling that person everything you have inside your heart..'

He remembered telling about his past..and the sufferings he and Nupur went through.

'You enjoy spending time with that person..'

He remembered their "date" at that mall..and how much he enjoyed..

'Then?' He asked seeing her quiet.

Hitting his back. 'You want more..this wasn't enough to understand?' Nupur asked irritated.

Realizing. 'Thanks..Ill let Sumit know..' He forced a smile. He had now finally understood of his feelings.

'By the way 'who is that girl hun?' She asked raising her eye-brows.

'Ill ask Sumit and let you know.' He said getting up.

'Oh..but how does Sumit like Gunjan?' She gave a confused look.

'Sumit likes Gunjan?' Samrat asked shocked..but soon understood the trap. 'Crap.' He muttered to himself.

'Oh'so someone likes Gunjan..hmm..' She said grinning.

'Nupur..now keep your big mouth closed. Please.' Samrat pleaded.

'Okay okay. Shush.' She said keeping a finger on her lips.

He smiled at her.

'Ill go and make lunch..' She said walking to the kitchen for not to embarrass him further..

'Waise..your wedding night chapter..is still not finished..' He mumbled with a grin following her.

'I don't understand why are you behind my wedding night..'

He burst out laughing.

She turned around in shock. 'No!!! You still remember..??'

'I promised myself..Ill remember it till the day'you get married..' He said keeping his hand on his heart. 'I have an idea..ill call Mayank..and tell him. What say?' He said taking out his phone.

She snatched it from his hand. 'No bhai..please. I was a kid that time!'

15 year old Samrat was sitting on the couch of their plush bungalow playing a video-game. The remote was in his hand as he zoomed left and right bringing the roadrash to life. 12 n a half year old Nupur came and sat next to him giving him the kheer their mother had prepared.

'Thank you.' He said pulling her cheeks.

'Bhaiya..I wanted to ask you something..' She said twiddling with her frilly skirt.

'What?' He said zooming left with the remote.

'What happens in a wedding night?' She asked shaking his arm.

His bike zoomed and fumbled into a tree showing a "GAME OVER" in huge letters. 'WHAT?' He asked shocked.

'Ya..I was watching this movie na..they showed the wedding room..so many roses..and flowers.' She said with actions. 'And boy and girl..and they both go close.. and the lights got switched off and the scene ended.' She said innocently. 'Why??' She said again shaking his arm. 'Tell!!'

'I..I don't know. Nupur go inside and study. You have exams from next week.' He tried to be stern.

'Fine..dont tell me. Ill go and ask mom only.' She said getting up.

Pulling her down. 'No no..dont ask her. Ill tell you.' He stammered. 'On..a wedding night..errmmm..' He said trying to come up with a decent answer. 'Ya..they..talk..they talk full night.' He said confidently.

'But then why do they switch off the light for that?' She asked confused scratching her head.

'Nupur..dont we talk after switching the lights off?' He said trying to confuse her more.

'Ya..we talk.' She said still in thoughts. 'So they only TALK during the wedding night?' She said making a face not believing him.

'Why..what do you think they do?' He asked teasing her.

'No no..I don't know.' She was still thinking but was quiet.

He sighed.

'Acha..I have one more question'' She asked charged up.

Samrat got another shock. Interrupting her. 'Nupur..taste this kheer. Its so tasty. Mom is the best.' He said feeding her to keep her mouth shut. And the topic ended there.

Samrat was just laughing..telling the whole incident to Nupur..word by word. He remembered. While she was turning every colour..in embarrassment. He fell on the couch laughing.

'Its not that funny also.' She shouted from the kitchen; where she was dressed in an apron..her hands in the atta.

Still laughing. 'I still cant forget it..OMG! You were so innocent before..and now..'

She came out with her hands filled with atta. 'And now what..'

He got up but was still laughing.

'Im so not going to leave you today..' She said angrily running behind him. They started fighting..hitting each other with the cushions..like mad naughty children.

'Nupur!' Samrat shouted. 'Your married now..behave in a dignified manner.' He said seriously.

She stopped hitting him and adjusted her saree neatly and hair to one side and lowered her eyes. They both looked at each other and again burst out laughing. She covered his face with atta..making him look like a clown and started running.

'This is my house..and I will behave how I wish..' screaming..she ran into the kitchen..while he stood there cleaning his eyes..and trying to shout at her..but ended up sneezing. 'Nupurrrrrr!!!'

A week passed like that..with small arguments..and a bit of adjustments. Samrat always tried to talk to Gunjan..but she somehow would brush him off..trying to avoid any topic. She wasn't ready for all this yet. And there was a big reason for that hidden inside her heart..which would beat whenever Samrat came close to her.

Mayank came home from office and was terribly tired. He went inside the room and removed his tie. Nupur came inside with a glass of water.

'Mayank..look at the time..Im waiting since such a long time. You didn't even pick up my call.' She said a bit irritated.

'Sorry..I was busy.' He gulped the water down in one sip. He was going towards the wardrobe when she stood in front of him handing the clothes. He smiled. 'Thanks.' Taking them.

'Come..soon. Im waiting for dinner.' She said going out.

'I had something at office..Im not hungry..im off to sleep.' He said in a breath.

'But Mayank'' She whined.

'Sorry.' He kept his hand on her cheek and shrugged going in the washroom.

Nupur herself hadn't had dinner..as she hated eating alone. Gunjan also had gone with one of her Delhi friend. By the time she came back to the room..with her plate, Mayank was fast asleep. Sighing..she sat down on the bed and switched on the TV and kept it at the lowest volume..not to disturb him. There was only one TV in the house..so she didn't have a choice.

She had lost her appetite ..so had just taken bit a little bit of rice'and was playing with the spoon more than eating..as she was switching channels waiting for something appropriate. Her mind went to various thoughts..as she was gazing at his sleeping figure'.she didn't know for how long.

But Mayank's voice startled her. 'Nupur..switch the TV off.' He mumbled in a sleepy tone.

Partly scared by his voice and partly scared by him she quickly shut the TV off. She did it as a reflex action and she sighed breathing hard. She kept the plate on the table and fairly lied down and closed her eyes. She again turned to see him..slowly not getting caught in her actions..She moved her hand forward ..a bit hesitant..and kept it on his fore-head..and slowly caressed his hair and smiled. His face which had no expression before..now had a sign of peace. She continued the action.. In real..he wouldn't let anyone touch his hair..but in sleep he seemed totally different. Better though. She moved a bit down and softly caressed his fore-head. A complete "work-a-holic" she thought and sighed as her other hand supported her chin as she looked at him.

She saw him moving in sleep. So she took her hand away..not to get caught. But he left her in total surprise..as in sleep..he fumbled to find her hand..and kept it on his fore-head back again n went into deep slumber. Her mouth was open in shock. But then she smiled at his behavior. She continued with what she was doing..she didn't realize..but she herself was falling asleep..as her droopy eyes closed..and her hand fell on his back..as she slept on the same pillow as his.

Gunjan entered the house and saw all the lights switched off. She aimlessly walked towards her room..thinking about the phone call..she just got a few minutes back. It was Samrat..and he wanted to talk to her..something important. Her heart was beating heavily..hearing his voice. That voice..almost told her everything and she was in dilemma. She changed into her night dress and her eyes fell upon the calendar. It was a Thursday again. Picking up her pillow and bed-sheet..she started walking..still in thoughts of Samrat..this was the problem. Could she share her feelings with him..would he accept her..even after hearing the truth..? She could just get his images..when she closed her eyes. She was in two-minds about the situation..and she did not have anybody to even take advice from. She slowly opened her brothers room..her mind elsewhere.

Nupur was almost asleep when she heard the door click and she got up with the sound. She was a weak sleeper..and a little bit sound also..would wake her.

Gunjan stopped in her tracks. She was so stupid. She was thinking about Samrat so much..that she had even forgotten that her brother got married a week back. Hitting herself hard on the head..and cursing herself, she spoke up.

'Bhabhi..its me. Jus came to say Good night.' She mumbled shivering.

It was too late. Nupur had seen the pillow and bed-sheet in her head. 'Kya hua Gunjan? Sab theek hai?' She asked seeing her expressions.

'Haan..woh..im so sorry. I had forgotten that you..actually me and my friend saw a horror movie today..so I was not able to sleep..but its no problem. Good night hun.' She said almost closing the door.

'Gunjan come on inside.' Nupur said politely.

Gunjan closed her eyes and cursed herself before coming inside. 'I'Actually..woh..'

She pulled her hand and made her sit on the bed. 'Gunjan..you said Im like your sister right..then why are you feeling guilty?' She said softly. 'Today..your gonna sleep here. That's final.'

'But..' Gunjan argued.

'Chup!' Nupur said sternly. 'Main Mayank se kehti hun..ke ..woh..neeche so jaye..' She said going to wake him up.

Holding her hand tight. 'No no need!! Please!! Ill go back to my room.' She said nervously.

Nupur hit her head. After much of arguments..Both of them slept on the bed comfortably. The bed was huge enough to fit four people..and Nupur and Gunjan were pretty thin. Nupur was in the middle of them. They switched off the lights..so as to not disturb Mayank.

Gunjan was still feeling so awkward. 'Im so sorry Bhabhi..'

'Gunjan..once more you say sorry..Ill slap you.' She said in a strict tone.

'Ok ok..sorry..' She realized and nervously giggled.

Even Nupur giggled. She sensed her uncomfortness.

'Are you sleepy?' She asked Gunjan.

'Not really.' She shook her head.

'Want to talk?' Nupur asked.

'Hmm..' Gunjan smiled.

'''''''''''''''''''..

'Im totally allergic to tea.' Nupur said.

'But I love tea!! I cant drink coffee though. Its so bitter.' Gunjan said making a face.

''''''''''''''''''''

'Chocolates are my favorites..I can eat thousand at one time.' Nupur grinned.

Gunjan giggled. 'Okay..I like chocolates. But I cant eat thousand at once. I wont let you eat also. You will get diabetes.' She said chuckling.

'By god Gunjan!! Tu paagal hai.' Nupur too laughed.

''''''''''''''''''.

'Okay..tell me one secret about Mayank..' Nupur asked.

'Umm..' Thinking a bit. Then laughing. 'Bhai..doesnt like sharing his room with anybody. When we were small..he wouldn't even let me enter in his room..wonder what treasures he had hidden.' Gunjan replied giggling. 'He always..said, My privacy.' Imitating him.

'I have an idea. Ill throw him out of the room..and make him sleep in the hall. He can have all his privacy.' Nupur said winking at Gunjan.

They both laughed and hi-fied.

''''''''''''''''.

'I like soft romantic music..something which has emotions connected to it.' Gunjan replied after thinking a lot.

'Hey..atleast one thing matches. Even I love emotional songs. They convey a lot of meaning. Don't they?' She said softly.

'Yeah.. So true.' Gunjan nodded.

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'You have what????' Nupur almost shouted.

'Ssssshhhhh'.' Gunjan said closing her mouth. 'Bhai will get up.' She scolded Nupur.

'You haven't seen Kuch Kuch Hota Hai?' She asked shocked.

'Umm..ya..so?'

'You haven't seen anything in the world then.' She dramatically declared. 'We shall see it together during the weekend. Okay?' Nupur ordered.

'Okay..' Gunjan giggled.

'Nupur..switch the TV off!!' Mayank shouted interrupting both of them..keeping a cushion over his ears.

Nupur and Gunjan looked at each other and giggled.

'Wah..isse ab tak lag raha hai..main TV dekh rahi hun..' She said in a filmy tone.

'Okay..bhabhi..its late. I think we must sleep.' Gunjan said.

'Alright.' She wasn't very much sleepy. She wanted to talk more. 'Good night.' She replied back.

Gunjan smiled and hugged Nupur. 'Good night.' She politely said closing her eyes.

Nupur was left surprised by her action. Sighing..she slowly caressed his hair. After a few minutes..Nupur sensed that she was asleep..so she slowly took her hand away. Gunjan slightly moved..and her expressions changed. It showed a bit of irritation..as she found Nupur's hand..and kept it back on her fore-head..and was fast asleep again.

Nupur at first was shocked. "Both brother-sister alike.." she thought with a smile. Looking at both of them..turning left and right..she suddenly missed her own brother. Certainly something must be common in them too..she thought and smiled too herself. She closed her eyes..and said a prayer..for all the 3 of them. She suddenly had started doing this..since a week..she didn't know why. But she felt nice. Closing her eyes..she fell asleep.

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'Mayank..' Nupur sleepily said.

'But Nupur..your not comfortable..its fine. Really.'

She opened her eyes fully. 'Mayank..Im fine. Just go back to sleep.' She said turning her face.

He slowly lied down back..a few inches away..just so ..that both of them are comfortable. He looked at Nupur..who was trying to go back to sleep. He was lying straight..His fingers were lightly touching hers.

She opened her eyes. Mayank slowly caressed her fingers..and then held her hand lightly. Nupur now looked up to face him. Her heart was beating at a triple speed. He took both their hands and placed it on the pillow. True Mayank and she held hands before. But this time she felt really different.

He took a deep breathe. 'Thanks Nupur'' He mumbled.

'For what?' She whispered.

'For taking care of Gunjan so well..actually being her sister.' He replied. 'I couldn't ever be the kind of brother she always wanted.' He said sadly.

'Mayank..why..are ..you?' She asked shaken.

He shook his head. 'Nothing..just forget..it..forget everything I said.' He said closing his eyes.

There was silence for sometime. He still hadn't left her hand. Though she wanted to remove her hand..she didn't want to. Yeah. Her mind was confused just like this. She decided to lighten up the mood..thats what she was special for.

'Pata hai Mayank..mujhe abhi kaisa lag raha hai?'

'Kaisa?' He said looking up at her.

'Aisa..jaise main mummy hun..aur tum dono..mere bacche.' She grinned looking at both of them. Gunjan got a bit disturbed by their talking and moved away..and turned the other side and slept.

Mayank smiled sarcastically. 'Yeah true..cos we actually never got all this ...so its nice. Thanks.' He muttered tucking their entwined hands under his head and going off to sleep. Nupur looked at him shocked. Something was surely wrong..he was sounding so serious'also he would never try to come close to her..but today he did. Breathing more heavily..she tried to sleep.

Gunjan woke up with the rays of the sun..falling from the window. She got up and stretched her arms. She wore her glasses..and realized that it wasn't her room. She got up and wore her slippers. The next sight that she saw seriously made her blush. Mayank and Nupur slept facing each other'their hands were entwined and were carefully placed on Mayank's stomach. She first felt so guilty and turned. It wasn't vulgar..but it was somebody' s personal space'and she didn't like to spoil it. But then she smiled.

'So their marriage is finally moving..wow..thats so great. Samrat ko batanugi..kitna khush hoga woh..' She whispered to herself. But hearing Samrat's name''Phirse Samrat..din bhar Samrat Samrat..tu ek din paagal ho jayegi Gunjan!!' She cursed herself and went out of the room.

Gunjan was walking out of the college with her friends..as it was over for the day.

'What is this Gunjan..? That's the only time we met Samrat. Even others want to meet him..' Sheetal said. Her other friend Neha and Anu agreed.

'Sheetal are you sure that guy was her boy-friend?' Anu asked silently.

'Yeah ..they were holding hands and all.' She replied back.

Gunjan was irritated with this publicity of her relation-ship. She didn't believe in such trivial things. 'Guys!' She faced them. 'Enough all of you..please..mere aur Samrat ke beech ''

'Bahut zyada pyaar hai..' Samrat interrupted her leaning against his car parked outside the gate.

Gunjan looked at him shocked..'Sa..Samrat..tum..yahan?'