We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 68

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mehak

mansi dear u need bigggggg hug for this..🤗 Awwww☺️🤗

the update was totally adorable, i loved it!.😳😍 Again...awwww😳

awwwww..poor mayank counting how many times did nupur turned her side and his shock in the morning..😆, and even i was shocked at his comment about his mom..😲. Yeah..ill do the elaboration of it later!😳
i loved the threat he gave that i am going to the guest room, and she got scared 😳,and then gunajn wont come in!. why?..🤣🤣 Aww..lol. Shes a bit innocent..tats good..isnt it?!😛😆 The threat part is my fav. too!!😳

mansi u have done a GREAT job with SAJAN,👏 they were complete cutie pies, dreaming about each other and then asking each other that they were there or not..😍 I have!!! Aww..thanks mehak!! Im really happy now!!😃

the last breakfast was amazing, SAYANK and GUNUR were just so sweet and cute, private Sharma😍, i just so love such possessive people,and nupur, meri burai kar raha ho ga..this girl is the cutest..😳 Hayee..do you know that you capture every fav. moment of mine in ur comments..I totally <3 you for that! This line is a bit personal fav!😳

lovely update mansi,and now as u have typed the next one too, so update quickly..😳 I havent typed it :(:( But ill type soon!! :):)

and congratulate ur sister from my behalf. God Bless her, and i think next turn is urs (InshAllah). and then u remember our dealing na?..🤣 OMGGG!!🤣 Yes!! next is MY turn..and 1000 ppl have already asked me that..actually teased me! :D I hav told my jiju (whos based in Canada) to find a guy for me der itself..coz I cant live without my sis!!😳😆 and abroad bhi mil jayega!!😳🤣 and i shall never forget our dealing..till my last breath!! Its so IMPORTANT you see!!🤣 Gosh the day we get inactive also..ill take ur no. to contact you and invite you for my wedding..yu need to be der!🤣 to see collars!!🤣 LOL. Kidding!! I mean after the WEDDING..ill call yu!!😛 and inform you about...............😉🤣 yu btter do the same alrite!😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishita16

I've been reading this story since the beginning but this is the first time commenting. This is one of the best ffs I've read. You've done a great job, esp with satisfying both MN and SG fans.

I'm a Mayank-Nupur fan, so obviously I loved their part. Mayank counting how many times she turned, then the morning bit...it was too cute!!!
I've loved SG in this part as well. Sam was too funny. lol.
Can't wait for the next part. Pls continue soon.


Thanks Ishita. Its really nice feeling..when silent readers comment!😊 Thanks for liking both MN and SG! and yes I shall continue soon!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wow mansi

first of all congo to ur sister

n the update was simply amazing

too good

I loved sajan man

they were so sweet

nupur annoyed mayank so much by god

but mayur were really cute

waiting for the next part


Aww...Sariska! thanx 🤗 hehe. I knw Mayank's too cute!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

such a cute update,,,seriously m will be a villain in sg lovestory 🤣 🤣 thats so not happening 🤣

but loved the whole update! :) loved the MN parts kyunki they were so real LOL


Umm..I know its real. Meri shaadi toh nahin huye..but I dunno how I knw such minute things!😕🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70



Hi mansi
at first i want to congrats ur sister dear.
May ALLAH bless her and give her all the happiness
Thanks Faria!!😃


Mansi ur update alwz made me happy.
Oh GOSH how could u manage both the couple in this ff ?
it was just brilliant and bind blowing yaar I do?
I always do a balancing act..both the couples get 2 scenes atleast..tats my policy!😳

i loved my mayur a lot and here i have fnd a new mayur. they r very sweet,cute and adorable Aww..yeah. This FF becomes a new MJHT altogether.😃

haye my nupur is so innocent and mayank is understanding and matured enough.
poor mayank - at their first night he was counting how many times did nupur turned her side.LOL
but kya kare nups was feeling a lil bit uncomfortable. That wasnt coz of uncomfortness. Thats her habit. LOL😆

i loved the morning scene also.
wow maynk took her in sams house.
he is really a nice guy.
sayank convo was too funny and i loved it.

sajan scene was also very good- specially sams imagination.LOL
very nice update dear
fantastic and beautiful

plz do update next part soon.
take care and do lots of fun.


Thank u so much!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikitasharma.

hey congoz for ur sis engagement!

now, the update was awesome........mayur were so cute😆😆😆......so natural............feelin wierd n awkwardness.....n mayu......how nicely he handled her n in d mornin took her to her home............awwwwwwwwwww..😳......hope they fall in love soon!

n sanu......omg.that scene was really gud.........

SG fallin luv..............thats nice

loved the update!

do cont soon!!

n thnx alot for d pm!😛😛


Aww...MN will fall in love!!😃 thanx!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansi 🤗
Firstly congratulations to your sister 🤗 May she have a happy and blessed life always =]]
And the update was just fabulous!!! I so loved every bit of it.
MN were just too adorable! OMG! She turned 43 times :OOO
Mayank is a patient man, I must say 😆 But they were just too cute and adorable!
SG were really sweet! They are in love, but still confused...
The imagining part was really awesome! The way you penned it and when they ask each other in the morning, 😆
It was a totally amazing update Mansi! Loved it <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey.. just read all parts to ur PERFECT FF..😃
I just love it.. it is so good....😛
so plz dont mind my commenting on every part..lol.😆. i want to do justice to ur amazing work...
but ill try to make it short..
😆
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PROLOGUE
We're the perfect two Baby me and you We're the perfect two..
Oh my i love this song.. i think it defines the jodi's of MJHT..😳
Im glad ur including both MAYUR N SAJAN in here..
Love that SANU are bro n sis n MAJAN😳
Nice...
Mayur n dosti...? thats nice.. i knw this dosti is gonna be love..
😉
n Gunjan Suspense.😕. lovin it...
👏
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CH1:
haha love Nups reaction for SHEEEEENA..!!!😆😆

'Aww..so sad. Actually good. I never liked that Ms. Ultra Modern Bitc''
Love MN scene in Mayanks bedroom..
N liking how Gunjan seems to be opening up to Samrat..
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CH2:
OMG! loving Mayank..

Mayank smiled. 'I have an idea. Samrat you marry my sister and Ill marry yours'we will buy a big house and live happily ever after.' He said still eating. i knw he didnt mean it but.. kaise dil k baat bol diya.. n the reaction of SNG were soo funny..😆
Nupur always gets her way.😉.. cute. how Mayank just given in to her demands...lol😆
Adhiraj.. such a jerk..😡.. Nups deserve so much more..(Mayank)..
Aww.. i just loved that SANU scene.. perfect brosis moment..
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CH3
Mayank.. subah hi subah Nupur ko yaad..
so sweet..😳
Mayank suspicion on Gunjan.. not being his sister.. well its all thanks to dear Sammny..😃
MN N studies.. 😉..
yay! nups ne top kiya..👏👏
LOL.😆. WOAH.. aate hi MAYANK ko..ahem... 😳
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CH4
Samrat very openly talked to NUPS about marriage.. he is a gr8 Bro!..
Nups dream was ... 😳 but love how u ended it.. 😆
n just like Muskaan i will also say...

Oho Nupur abhi se hi aise dreams haan?
They said yes!!!😃.. Love how Sajan was convincing Mayank
n gr8 to Gunjan for sitting in front.. 😉LOVED THE akwardness in the car..

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CH5a -b
Loved the Girl talk..the glass scene was a nice touch..
loved the whole BEACH TALK..
Gunjan n BB.. poor Gunjan..
haha loved how u added MEHEK IN here.. so cute.. N for Nupur..lol..😆
Gunjan cleaning all the rooms..😆
Loved SAJAN PARTS VERY MUCH IN THIS PART..
😡mayank needs to get off his phone..
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CH6
Yay.. Majan mom is here..
Oooo loving Nups entry at home..
sweet scene with the PROMISE😳.. n getting caught holding hands..lol..
n loved Gunjan demo for Samrat..😳😆
oh no.. 10days mein shaadi .. a bit 2 early na..😲
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CH7
Love the entire part.. Samrat emotional was just heart touching..😭
Its soo hard to pick out the best part..
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CH8
Adhiraj🤢.. but im glad.. he didnt cross paths with Nups..
love all 4 going shopping..
I knw that dress will make its way back to Gunjan..
oh no Sajan locked in the store..
awwww i loved their scene .. they are soo cute in ur FF
Aww. Nups in her parents room.. n that scene had no dailogue but it conveyed a lot... 😭
Shaadi bari jaldi hogaye.. CV should learn from u..lol😆
haha loved nups constant.. "MAYANK"😳
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CH9 FINALLY..LOL😆
Just loved it entirely..
N yes Gunjan.. u n Samrat are the perfect two..😉
OOO cant wait for GuNur Bonding..😍
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Okay i knw ur prob. annoyed with such A LONG commenting. but i just had too
If they listen to us fans n do a season 3.. they should so do it like ur FF. it would be a super hit..😉
ADD ME TO PM LIST please!😃
CONT SOON.. CANT WAIT..
😍

❤️Rabiah

Edited by Rabiah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Mansi
read the whole ff just now its just wonderful ...rather "perfect"😃
i liked it a lot ......keep updatin n pls add me to u r PM list dear......
MayUr n SaJan rock!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update!!!
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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