We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 70

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok mansi...from now onwards u are my cuteeee..such an adorable update..<3

nupur's imagination of wedding night in childhood was very very cute, poor samrat..i really had good laugh ..😆

and the MAYUR seen when mayank was asleep was BEAUTIFUL..especailly when nupur turned off the tv being scared of mayank..THAT WAS ADORABLE!...it was small gesture, but has so much meaning into it..

sammy's confusion was adorable..

adn OMG gunjan forgetting the marriage..😆😆,and nupsi is a sweetheart...three of them on the same bed..first i was like..😲, but then i was all awwww-ing...

poor gunjan, blushing seeing her bhaiya bhabhi..

MAYUR conversation was again touching, i guess mayank will cry in nupur's la..I SO WANT THIS..plz cutee..cater my request..plzzz...

anyways wonderful as always..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update!😛

firstly i loved d sanu bond....😛...they r so adorable!
n their flashback scene was so cute😆😆😆.....nupz so innocent n all..........totally loved it!
then mayur.........want their love to blossom soon!
anyways gunur were gr8!.........nupz took care of her so sincerely.........!!loved their bondin too.....
but wats wrong wid their past........poor mayu was also so sad sad........
loved the way nupz gav them support......specially wen mayu totally counted upon her.....the way he held her hand n all was so sweet n cute!😳
waiting for d nxt part!
do cont soon!
n thnx aton for d pm!!😊
Edited by nikitasharma. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Mansi

It was a brilliant Part, i read it before i left but just didn't get time to comment. Again i remeber some and don't remember others😆😆

What i just loved about the update was, Nupur and Gunjan bond. Its beautiful. Nice to see Nupur finding solace in someone else. And gunjan is too cute forgetting her brother was married now and walking into their room😳

Marvellous Part Dear.

Sorry for the late comment.

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant part Mansi

sam n nup's part was lovely in mayur bedroom gunur was sweet nup's being like sis loved mayur hold hands n everything was fabulous dear i really loved n enjoyed plzzzz update soon next part thnks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Another awesome update! Loved the Sanu scene! Sumit..lol. Nupur knows about Sajan for sure....I'm scared of how M will react though. The fb was funny... totally innocent question from Nupur and Sam trying to avoid it. Sam teasing Nupur and she chasing him....I can totally picture it.

The scene where N was caressing M's hair and then him finding her hand and putting it on his forehead again was so sweet.

Nice to see Gunur bonding. So nice of N to comfort G. The whole scene was cute, from Gunur chitchat to M telling N to switch off the tv and then G repeating M's action. Adorable scene!!!

Last MN scene was definitely my FAV scene in the whole part!! Mayank finding himself close to N, then N convincing him to go back to sleep on the same bed, M holding her hand, them sleeping facing each other....Awww...I loved every bit of it. MN are getting closer now, hope to see more such scenes between them.

Pls continue soon.

Also, please add me to ur PM list. Thank you.

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mansiiii 🤗
Now this update was filled in with sooo much sweetness man ! i Loved it<3, i don't always expect to be equal between both of the couples, sometimes one gets more the other less other time its the other way round ... it happens !
So, i LOVE SaNu they're adorable and that FB made me 🤣, spc when she asked about talking in the dark 🤣
GunUr were cute, knowing about each other i really liked that scene (: and OMG 3 of them in one bed ? 😲 woahh ! MayUr were quite cute in the morning and i loved the last part were Sam comes in saying 'Bahut zyaada pyaar hai' boy oh boy !
Looking forwards to the next update, soo update soon don't keep us waiting !
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

mansi you're tooooooooooo good dear....i have read n numbers of sg mn ff's but most of them have not really done justice to the relationship all the principle characters share........most ff's emphasize on either sajan mayur or gunur........ you're probably the only one who has managed to do justice to all the relationships....this is the first time i am loving all the four principle characters equally...........i am enjoying both mayur & sajan equally .....you have managed to keep me hooked to mayur as well........loved this particular update & would like to mention the gunur scene in particular..i loved that scene..........thank you for not limiting this ff to being just a mayur or sajan ff.....this ff in the right sense is a sajan mayur majan gunur sanu & sayank ff..you have truly lived up to your title of this being a mjht ff ….....love you........continue soon & don't keep us waiting for too long….

Edited by ght_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww lovely update SaNu was tooo good da flashback hehe omgg nups asked Sammy abt weeding nite wowwww n den hehe da answer given by Sammy simple n true also wen someone has arrange marriage anyways loveee how SaNu were doing masti n all jst loveeeee dem n den awww gunur loveeee der convo n den gunji can't wait to knw her secret n den mayur aww cuteeee n wowww Sammy asking nups abt true lovee wowww n watever she was telling happened between sajan woohoo do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesum parts
Loved the way u showed Brother sis bonding
Lovely nok jhok n all
Bahbhi n Salli relation was also fab
Loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Der aye Drust Eye Really Its a great Part
U Perfectly and so sweetly describe the Mayur and Gunjun bonding I liked it so much
Thank u so much for this Lovely post and Pm
Plz cont soon

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