We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 67

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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for the late review.

ts funny to see that the two getting married are not even close to love yet and the two who are not married are...
Also mayanks anger about sajan...man it will be tough for samrat to get married to gunjan.

i love the pace and direction of storyline...but are mayur falling in love anytime soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -jaee-

First of all give my well wishes to your sister - Congratulations, that is a wonderful news ... thanks Jaee!!😃

Amber's video was beautiful - I didn't know Sajjal's name is Amber😳 Hehe..I took it out of her mouth!😆

And now coming to your update -
SaJan are the cutest beings ... Yes it was tad bit filmy but our lives are as well filmy ... I loved how Samrat questioned his acts and how he wanted to confide in her ... Their dreams were so cute .... Gunjan is a sweetheart ... The way they questioned each other was just adorable and Samrat's thoughts about Mayank being the villain just cracked me up!! Gunjan's thought about them being the perfect two was lovely - I felt like saying, ask Mansi not me - she has answers to all the questions 😆 Aww...that was so cute!!😆 yeah..tats the specialty about them..really..yea yea..its all me..I can answer any question..and reject any..😉 I have the POWER..lolzzz😉😆 dont worry..they would also be the perfect two!😃

The night could not get any better for MayUr😆 I pity Mayank - she actually turned 43 times😲 - he is definitely a nerd ... But it was very cute and their relationship has that innocence which is just wonderful ... They way Nupur surprised Samrat was endearing ... Samrat is really naughty, poor Mayank ... Mayank's possessiveness is good but I hope it doesn't act as a barrier in the future ... The whispering session was just awesome ... And ofcourse, the morning was really cute ...By this action..Mayank becomes a nerd?😲😆 bechara..well..I havent properly decided on Mayank being a barrier..😛 lets see what I think.

I am just loving this story, it's so full of innocence - all four are really innocent ... I was shocked by Mayank's comment on his mother ....Awww..tats so sweet of you..thanku so muchh!!😳

Overall, you are really writing an ameliorate story ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

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first of all congratulations on your sister's engagement
coming to update
update was awesome
glad that mayank made nupur understand
and they both are feeling so odd
mayank counted how much nupur turned..aww that was so sweet
loved samrat's dream
mayank's answer about his mother was shocking
mayank greatest villian in sajan's love story lol
breakfast was nice
and precap is good
do cont soon


Aww...thanks!! Yeah Mayank is too sweet!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

reserved..not first but happy that you updated😆

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Mansiiiii finally sweety you updated, but first congrats to your sister. May the blessed couple be happy in their newly joined life. Thanks Amber!!😃

Second i have to say that SaJan stole the update today, they were too cute. Sam telling her to come over and she refusing and then his anger over it adorable/😳

then both imaging each other ...in their presence and confused over their feelings was totally sweet
and i loved it when they both asked each other abt totally januable as they say. Aww..I know. I really wanted to right something different😳

Loved MN also...Mayank counting how many times she twisted and turned ..aww...and then nupur shuting up just so he would not go and sleep in the guestroom
...she is so cute. Lol..yeah. She is!! I hav always loved Mayank's threats!😆

Happy that she stayed and mayank made her understand and then in the morning he himself took her there....to visit samrat.

btw i have to say one thing, i can never imagine a brother asking his sister how her wedding night went? that just does not fit right. A brother would never ask such personal and intimate details bt than again samrat is her only family ...bt still can;t imagine that.

Samrat is such a cutiepie...abt mayank being the biggest VILLIAN in his and gunjan's lovestory///tottally supercuteeee :)) LOL..Thats his viewpoint..which mite change later!😳

Loved the update...thank god you updated...Yeah!! Thank God!!😆


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MoNayaKiDeewani

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Mansii 🤗
Missed you<3, congratulation Gal soo happy for you and your sis (: !
Okay, coming to the FF yes i agree this part was short soo am not impressed aarrghh, want long updates like usual ! Aww..Ive made a bad habit of this long updates I tell you! Im suffering now!😆
MayUr were really adorable, am glad she didn't go home 😆 and OMG she turned 43 times 😲 shytt 😆 bechara Mayank man ! Nupur sure asks alot of questions doesn't she ? I like this Nupur better she seems more childish and cute (: She isnt childish..I would say shes jus a bit talkative!😛😆 but yeah shes damn cute!😳
SaJan, 😍 they're in love but confused 😳😆 ! Yeah that imagination bit was filmy, but what the heck it happens in movies and dramas so .. yeah ! It was really cute how they imagined each other and then the next day asking did you come to my room last night ? Aww..thanks! for liking it..despite it being filmy.😳
And, Mayank's not gona like it if he finds out his best friend is in love with his sis i tell you 😆😆 seeing him now ! Well..that you have to wait n watch!😃
Awesome update as usual, loved it<3 ! Continue soon pleasee (:
And and and, awesome VM done by Amber ❤️ I know..shes amazin :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesom- Blossom !!!
Perfect .... ! n you forgot to pm me ..
Sorry for extremely short comment ...time limited !!
You are amazin yr.. I am always in awe after reading ur updates.. !!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

awsome update loved it

mayur sceen were funny and cute
and sajan sceens weree to cute
they are seeing each other every where
i cant wait for next part
love tanzeel


Thanks Tanz!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Oh My God

A,mazing ,Lovely and cute update
I loved the Mayur so called first Night He He
Plz Cont soon
Thanks for Pm
Congrates on Your Di engagement .


Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Mansi awesome update....Loved it...Sammy's imagination was really cute....Wish there were more SaJan in it...But I know its hard for you to do both couple together....Can't wait to read next part ....Please update soon...


Originally posted by: komal991

hay !!!

its gr888888888888 yaar!!!
wow wht a wedding night bygod!!!!
sajan is really cute yaar!!! n mayank is always been sadu but he is a sweet heart!!!!! overall nice update!!!!!! cont soooooooooooon!!!
love
komal ❤️


Thanks guys..Ill surely continue soon! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Mansi lovely n amazing update mayur moments were at the bed was funy n cute at sametime sajan olso was wonderful

thanks for the update n the pm
n congorats for ur sis's engagement


Thanks Samira!! For reading both parts!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

nice update

sajan were cute..
loved mayur
continue soon😊

divya


Thanks Divya..Ill sure continue soon!😃

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