We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
i was silent reader of your ff
and i am commenting today
coming to update
it was awesome
loved sg dance
and mayank is so sweet ,loved his possessiveness for gunjan
mayank meeting with nupur's friends was awesome and aww he was feeling so bad for being late
glad that mayank trust nupur so much
loved sanu bonding
and nupur missing her parents was so sweet
poor nupur she is not feeling comfortable i can completely understand her
hope that mayank will understand her and try to explain her and hope he will not take her to home
all in all it was wonderful update
do cont soon
and pls add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago

reserved ..will read&comment :D

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FInally you updated and you say i update late😆...... and i have to agree with nivi....7 pages?😲 r sure i finished reading it in a snap🤣

coming to update...nice to SG relationship developing...the dance at the boutique was adorable and them eating ice and getting caught by mayank!...

Mayank is so adorable....bringing her favorite ice cream to make her happy because he came late....and its very nice to see he is understanding and really does not care about her past. which is a rare sight to see in guy i must say👎🏼

The wedding prep and all was described nicely .....and then the wedding happened Yippe...

samrat is right if nupur won't leave today then she wouldn't want to leave her brothers side ever....but nupurs pov veiw is understandable also...she grew up with sam ...

The last part shocked me?😲 she wants to go back home..but this is her home now...Mayank i hope you don't take her back...even though i know it will be cruel to not oblige to her request on the other hand she needs to learn that she is somes wife now and a sister only...but i think knowing how understanding mayank is he will take her home?

Update superr...sooooooooooonnnnn

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Mansi.. Waiting for the lovestory to begin..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hI MANSI
Finally u updated thank u so much dear.
Wao I am so haPPY ON Seventh sky.Mayur are married Lovely and so lovely.
What nupur wanna get back to her home she is crazy so crazy.
Love it.
Thanks for Pm and update it soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
7 pages??? kise ullu bana rahi ho?😲 then how did it finish so fast for me??
I need more... 😒 Sorry Sorry for behaving childish..
When I finished reading this update, my expression was same as Mayank's!! What?😲????😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
mansi🤗🤗
see maine edit kar diya apna comment
kya karun khud ko rok hi nahi payi😆

by god that was an amazing part
awesome..................................
i cant tell you how much i loved it
that shopping part was just .........(i am falling short of words now)😆
i am sure gunjan ki kismat mai uahi dress hai..uski shadi ke liya😉😆
samrat and gunjan got locked
sooooooooo sweet..and they also danced😳😳😳
mayur got married.......yuppi...🥳........
i am just too happy
by god nupur in red and mayank in black...😍😍
yea kya nupur ko ghar jana hai uo bhi abhi............🤣🤣🤣
mayank ke expression ke bare mai soch ke hi....🤣🤣
toooooooooooooooooooooo nice, good..and all the good adjectives 😆⭐️

aur yea 7 pages ka tha mujhe itna chota kyun laga😕
mujhe to ab tak ka sabse chota upfate laga

pls update next part soon
tumhe humari birthday pathnership ki kassam😆
but update soooooooooooon with a extra long part😆😉

lots of love
tashu




Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansi 🤗
Beautiful update, LOVED the whole shopping bit and SG getting locked 😳 and their dance<3 !
I wasn't expecting Marriage in this update but i liked it, it was simple but i liked it (: ! The whole Nupur crying bit i could imagine her crying poor girl !
I was laughing as well as blushing when she was narrating the story between Arjun&Katrina in Raajneeti 😆, and OMGG poor Mayank .. She wants to go home NOW, woah what will SG's reaction be to that ?
Lovely part again, update the next one soon .. Can't wait to know what happens !
<3
Sanii (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansi 🤗
I didn't skip any part! I never do =D
And I loved every bit of it <3
It was so awesome, every thing was just amazing!
The dressing room, SG getting locked, and the waltz. Mn as usual were just magical <3
You explain everything so well and I enjoy reading every word of your update! And the very last part of this chapter!! :OO 🤣
Wonderfully written hun!
Loved it <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updates have read 4 parts n they are awesome
will read read rest n coment later
edited*
part 5A, 5B, 6, 7 and 8 were amaizing
plz rite moe sajan scene
nupur is behaving as if she is a teenager who got married.
hey continue soon
Edited by saduf - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it was an amazing update i loved their trip to the mall
loved sajan little dance
and the mayank meeting nupurs friends
and woow shadhi itni jaldi ho bhi gayi😲
and now nupur missis home awwww
the ending was shocking
where she actully asked him to take her home
con soon
luv tanzeel

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