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komal991

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

hey dear!!!!

u dont know how much i missed ur ff dear!!!

wahhh!! maza agaya!!! finally mayur r married!!!

now i will love to read some romantic n funnyyyyyy incidents between them!!! plzzzzz cont soon n a big thank u 4 the pm!!

love

komal❤️

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

hey

nice part...

shoppin one was good...

marriage bhi ho gayi

bechari nupur she's misssin her old place so much..

hope everything will turn out well soon..😊

divya

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#583

very nice update

thx alot for the pm

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daniella

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Posted: 14 years ago

#584

lovely update!!!

waiting to know what mayank will do now😊

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-
reserved ..will read&comment :D
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FInally you updated and you say i update late😆...... and i have to agree with nivi....7 pages?😲 r sure i finished reading it in a snap🤣
coming to update...nice to SG relationship developing...the dance at the boutique was adorable and them eating ice and getting caught by mayank!...
Mayank is so adorable....bringing her favorite ice cream to make her happy because he came late....and its very nice to see he is understanding and really does not care about her past. which is a rare sight to see in guy i must say👎🏼
The wedding prep and all was described nicely .....and then the wedding happened Yippe...
samrat is right if nupur won't leave today then she wouldn't want to leave her brothers side ever....but nupurs pov veiw is understandable also...she grew up with sam ...
The last part shocked me?😲 she wants to go back home..but this is her home now...Mayank i hope you don't take her back...even though i know it will be cruel to not oblige to her request on the other hand she needs to learn that she is somes wife now and a sister only...but i think knowing how understanding mayank is he will take her home?
Update superr...sooooooooooonnnnn
Sajjal

Oh Well Amber..I do agree to you..all guys arent this understanding..trust me. But in this story..MN have a different kind of a relation. He knows her for 3 years..he knows about all her boy-friends..and stuff. So according to him..nothing was serious..so he isnt very much bothered..Hope I cleared the doubt..:)

Thanks for the comment..lovedd ittt 😃 and dont worry..Mayank will do make her understand..:) relax.

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SoniRita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#586

Wowww awesomeeee update hayeeeee sajan were so cuteeeeeeee der dance n den dey eating icecream n all hayeeeee n dey both r now really comfortable wid each other hayeeee n den wen mayu caught dem good lie by Sammy hehe n den aww mayu is so sweet he many times said sorry to nups n her frnds coz he came late n awww he brought her icecream n den awww sanu talk he is rite she has to go now otherwise she will never go n den wowww mayur got married cool n den in last omggg aww poor nups missing her home a lot n she demand to go back anyways do continue soon

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Jaee Dev Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#587

I am extremely sorry Mansi for being late as I was caught up in a lot of stuff but whatever ...

This update was just amazing - Samrat and Gunjan are really cute, the way they were deciding for the "special" gift, sharing ice-cream and talking about the wedding was just awesome ... The dance when they were locked was so romantic ... I just love SaJan in this ff ...

Never mind if you don't show the wedding, but I really loved how Nupur was crying and Mayank somewhat was guilty ... Samrat's pain was so visible .. Gunjan and Nupur are surely going to have a great bonding (my theory is going to be true😉) and I loved the awkwardness they shared and the nausea due to the roses ... Perfect ...

And about your note - I think it's high time that Samrat and Gunjan have an intense scene where Gunjan pours out the past to him ... They are falling in love and I wish to see an emotional realisation and they walk up to Mayank and Nupur regarding their marriage ... One arranged, one love marriage will be amazing but at the end you are the captain of the ship - write the way you want to and the way you have planned ....

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#588

NOTE- Guys..Im sure everyone is satisfied with the MN love-story..as I know the readers..as Ive previously written MN FF's..This is my first SG FF..But dunno why I think im not totally doing justice to their story..so just a question to the SG (also MN) readers..what kind of scenes do you want to read? I have a brief sketch in my mind...but I would really like to know the kind of scenes would be liked by all..I dont wanna disappoint the SG fans..Please do reply..as it would be great help to me!! :):)

-Mansi🤗

Edit- Pls dont say whatever I write is fine..😆 I really wanna know ur ideas..Im sorry..:(:(

Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#589

awwwww..mansi...u are such a sweetheart..firstly u write very well..so have confidence on urself..nextly i really apprecaite ur consideration towards ur readers...

i think now the past of gunjan should be reveled,. i would love if u show gunjan's breakdown in front of samrat..and then sammy helping her out..and their confession and love..all hidden..

i want SG to go to mayank and say they want to get married, as MN was an arranged marriage, this one should be a love marriage..

lastly i would say that write what u feel is the best...😃

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#590

Awwwww Mansiii, i wasn't expecting this 😆 i was LOVING SG<3 😳 !

Urrmm, anyways i agree with Mehak, i would want Gunjan's past to be reveald i think we've waited quite long and then them two falling in love slowly slowly 😳😆

And do add w/e's in ur mind (:

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