FF*Despair*(maaneet)pt20at pg 133(17 nov) - Page 49

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Posted: 14 years ago
A very nice long and wonderful update!

Loved it to the core!!!!

Weekend special ke liye one more pls!!!

Weekend is like 3 days yaar!!!!

Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls....

Continue soon!

Love

Mina
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Posted: 14 years ago
Phabulous part
Loved maaneet scenes
kids were really cute...........................
wow maan new that he love her.................awesome
loved the way he is stealing geet belongings...................😉
Even dadi & meera accepted her...............toooo good
Lol u ask us that hope u enjoy....................?
I dont enjoyed but relished each & every scene in this update
Its just superb................................Loved it
Continue sooon......................................

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

THAT was amazing
maan is such as charmer and so sweet i loved da chemisty beteen maan nd geet it too good 😉
awwww plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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i want u update like today 😛 it was
AWESOME
BRILLIANT
FANTASTIC
AMAZING
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute update..wow maan broke her fast... happy tht dadi n meera hve given it a nod.. cant wait for geet's reaction on knwing abt maan's feelings.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the innocent geet
Yay maan loves her
Geet is starting to have the feelings
Loved the way she blushes like there is no tomorrow
So happy dadi and meera know he's in love with geet
Can't wait for da next part
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
haayeee...... wat an update dear..........
i loved it!!
yaar................ plsssssss update ASAP
i cant wait 4 the nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago

super fabulous update..brilliant....

i loved it....
so maan has admitted that he loves geet to meera/
very cute......
plzz continue
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful and awesome . simplicity at its best . very touchy.
I WILL BE OUT OF STATION FOR 15DAYS, SO I MAY NOT ABLE TO DO COMMMENT BUT PLZ DO PM TO ME .
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 9

Maan: came from behind"dadi she will be lazy if she will stay at home"
Dadi: looked at Maan... "oh i see"
Meera: where are you going to work?
Geet: looked at Maan
Maan: with me ?
Geet: looked in shocked .."with you"
Maan: yes as my sectary
DadI:Maan you & your plans na


Maan: gave him chocolate
Ved: i am still angry
Maan: why ?
Ved: you are taking Didi with you?
Maan: oh sorry
Ved: kal didi kai choti ha
Maan: why?
Ved: we will go for movie
Maan: oh you guys have alot of plans..he walk to Geet


Geet: looked at him.."tomorrow dr had call for test" "uff babji he is my ..."
they reached
Maan: if you dont mind can you get down?
Geet: why?
Maan; open her side door .."dont force me"
Geet: "i am fine"
Maan: just hold her hand "you want me to hold it" walked in
Geet: chora i am coming
Maan: yes you were...


Geet: "why he is so concern?"
Maan: "why i feel her pain?" still feel her soft arm in her hand




tera banega woh jo, tera nahi hai
aye dil bata kyun tujko, itna yakin hai
mere dil-e-beqkaar
haan dil-e-beqkaar
yahi hota pyaar hai kya

mere dil-e-beqkaar
haay
yahi hota pyaar hai kya
mere dil-e-beqkaar
yahi hota pyaar hai kya







Geet: can i come in sir
Maan: was busy in reading file..looked at her "yes close door"
Geet: jee
Maan: have seat

Geet: seated in front of her

Maan: who asked you to call Me sir
Geet; every one is saying that why
Maan: everyone is everyone & you are you .. gave her few files
Geet: what to do with it?
Maan: i have meeting with them collect all files we have to leave in hour
Geet: jee
Maan: please not this jee
Geet: then what?
Maan: Maan
Geet: ok Maan
Maan: good
Geet: where is my office?
Maan: this is your office too
Geet: but it is your
Maan: i will call you after every 5 mins it is better you stay here.


Geet: nai we will go at 6 as it is our promise
Maan liked the way she said ours


Maan: stop it ... he just jump out took her out of her seat made her rest head at his knee.."geet " pat her cheek
Ved:Mamoo water
Maan: yes .. he made her drink as she open her eyes full moon was shining over their head...
Geet: just saw his eyes in moonlight drank water form his hand ....

waooooooooooo kya varat turvaya he

part 10

Maan: i know you are fine
Geet: it was because of height sickness
Maan: stop arguing eat it
Geet: give me i will eat
Maan: why you dont like i feed you?
Geet: i didnot said that
Maan: take it ..made her eat


Maan:did you had breakfast? hold her hand
Geet: yes i had
Maan: lunch recollected she was talking to Pinky she didn't had plate in her hand
Tanu whisper in his ear "didi was fasting" looked at her in surprise
Maan: jump up "were you fasting?"
Geet:"ghar chala"
Maan: just pull her to him "bolo were you fasting?"


Maan; was just lying on bed "pagal if she was fasting she can't tell me" walk to the washroom had shower... remember her eyes in moonlight.. "if anything happen to you i will never forgive myself".closed her eyes

Tanu: your room this door open in his room lets peep in.. try to look from keyhole
Geet: kya huwa
Tanu he is not in room
Geet: let me see she peep in he was not there
Ved: hello hello i checked he is
Geet: but where?

Tanu you see from here didi, ved you go out i will guard main door

Geet: but why?
Tanu: didi if he will go to his library he will not open door , we have to catch him before that waooooooooooo kya he


Maan thought kids might be peeping in ,he that why open door with a jerk .

they could hear Ved & Tanu talking to Meera "now Didi vanished "
Tanu :They are ghost ...i couldn't see him"



Maan: what you saw then? acted as angry
Geet: looked at him...hide her face with her hand
Maan: smiled grab his shirt.wore it
Geet:"can i go now"
Maan: no you can't go
Geet: acha i am sorry
Maan: dress up "for what"

Geet: still keeping hand on her eyes "for peeping"

Maan: smiled "but i don't forgive you"click a pic
Geet: I swear i didnot saw any thing ..open eyes
Maan: turn around" how can i trust ?"
Geet: ok don't trust i am going she open door
Maan: Grab her hand"i " whisper
Geet: what I?
Maan: kuch nahi
Geet: haath chora
Maan; saw her payal "wait " he picked it up


Dadi: Meera told me you kept for that person..couldn't complete
Ved: you know nano she fainted, Mamoo made her drink water & ate chocolate ..
Tanu: just like papa do...

both looked at each other...
Dadi: "Maan nazar na lago " squeeze his ears
Maan: ouch Dadi.. got up from his rocking chair.

Meera : Maan listen
Maan: kya
Meera: kaise ho?
Maan: bus iss ka jaise koi na ho aaise ... walk to his room
Meera: dadi yeh pagal ha
Dadi: smiled ...you come with me Meera

Tanu: mama i will sleep with didi
Ved: me too
Meera:Maan you too say me too
Maan: just look away as he was staring her..."didi"started looking at his files
Meera: my kids are fida on their didi hug Geet





Maan: hold her feet placed it on his Knee
Geet: looked at him in surprise
Maan: placed payal .
Geet: blushed
Maan: it tell me where are you?
Geet: pull back her feet . hit with table ..."ouch babji" hold her knee
Maan: pagal.. picked her up in her arms
Geet: i am fine i can go."warp her arm around his neck
Maan: shhh i didnot scold you in stealing my book ,but now i will.. "closed light with his elbow walk to
room made her lie on bed pull comforter on her.switch on light... "read but sleep dont finish today".

andupdates




waiting for next


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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww I'm loving this di it is so cute and romantic I just loved how Masan went angry because she kept a fast he cares about his sleeping beauty so much and then when she fell onto if him and he shut the door so mo one can see that was so sweet and when he told meera that he loves her Aww maan is such a passionate lover and liked the payal scene that was lovel but ooh the 3 chudhails are coming I wound what they will do when they know maan is taken lool but great update and now cant wait for next update 😊

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