FF*Despair*(maaneet)pt20at pg 133(17 nov) - Page 41

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Naddiya🤗

beautiful update👏
loved it
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maan falling for Geet😳.................... cool😉😉😉
loved Maan taking pics of Geet n d way admiring her
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wowwwwwww u included Karva chauth here 😳
loved Tanu,Ved n Maaneet scenes😳
eagerly w8ng for next part
plsssssssssssss cont soon

Luv u
Naina🤗

thx dear i dont know my concept is right or not Geet is keeping a Karava chauth for a person she doesn't know ..do correct me..thx a ton for loving this FF..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love_lavnya

Hey naddiya,
thanks sweety for replay n yes I realy love u this ff specialy n I realy request u personaly that if u have possible then pls update daily one for this ff plssssssssssssssssssss
if u can update daily one this ff part n make it short one so it's ok but plsssssssssss update
hope u are not angry on me
love u😳

it will be like yesterday a short part.. dear i get tired if i added long long parts ,,,i hope you all understand that..
i am not angry ...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats a Lovely Update Loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much
Loved the Painting soooooooooooooooooooo much.............Thats sooooooooooooooo Beautiful..............
Eagerly waiting for the next part........
Pls Update Soooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Very nice update!
It was very lovely............................
Painting was awesome....................

Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update love the way Maan took Geet pics in the morning and his wish come true to see her in the morning first
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was so sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

it will be like yesterday a short part.. dear i get tired if i added long long parts ,,,i hope you all understand that..

i am not angry ...😃

Thanks for I want so say that make short part I have no problem with that but update daily if u have possible n yes if u not geting tired I hope u understand bue this is my fav ff n sorrrrrrrrrrrrry for forcing u realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy
love u😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!....
i m loving it!...
continue sooN!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part9

Geet: walk out after getting ready

Dadi: where are you going?
Geet: jee for job
Dadi: why you need a job? looked at her
Maan: came from behind"dadi she will be lazy if she will stay at home"
Dadi: looked at Maan... "oh i see"
Meera: where are you going to work?
Geet: looked at Maan
Maan: with me ?
Geet: looked in shocked .."with you"
Maan: yes as my sectary
DadI:Maan you & your plans
Geet: walk to garden
Dadi: you will not have breakfast?
Meera :she had with me
Maan: looked at her in surprised as he saw her sitting for 1 hour out side his room
she walked out as both of them were playing out

Ved:didi so you are going

Geet: yes
Tanu when you will come back?
Geet; by evening
Ved: take leave tomorrow we will go for movie ..
Geet: which movie
Tanu: we will decide it Mamoo is coming
Ved: ran to Maan
Maan: gave him chocolate
Ved: i am still angry
Maan: why ?
Ved: you are taking Didi with you?
Maan: oh sorry
Ved: kal didi kai choti ha
Maan: why?
Ved: we will go for movie
Maan: oh you guys have alot of plans..he walk to Geet
Ved: yes

Maan; ok i will take you to joy land in evening get ready

Ved: really
Maan: yes
Tanu: pull Geet hand"didi will to come with us"
Maan: looked at her
Geet: but joy land is for kids
Ved: is mamoo a kid ? wrap his arm around her chest
Geet: whisper "yes he is"
Maan: heard her.. "leave her we will go"
Ved: i will not go if didi will not go..
Geet: kneel down hug him "i will go" happy
Ved: yes hug are back..
Maan: can we go now ?
Ved: yes left Geet
as the walk
Ved: mamoo
Maan: yes
Ved: come here call him down to him
Maan: bolo buddy
Ved; hold her hand don't lost her..
Geet: heard him.. blushed walk bit fast to car sit at behind seat

Maan walk & sit next to her as driver was driving car...

Maan: to hospital first..
Geet: looked at him.."tomorrow dr had call for test" "uff babji he is my ..."
they reached
Maan: if you dont mind can you get down?
Geet: why?
Maan; open her side door .."dont force me"
Geet: "i am fine"
Maan: just hold her hand "you want me to hold it" walked in
Geet: chora i am coming
Maan: yes you were...
Dr: hi Mr Maan
Maan: hi
Dr: how are you miss
Maan: Miss Handa
Geet: i am fine
Dr: that day you really scared us.. asked nurse to take her blood sample
Geet: looked at Maan
nurse :sir will you hold her arm i can't find her vein

Maan: just didnot looked at Geet he just care full hold her arm

Geet: looked at him he closed his eyes as the nurse insert needle .."i am having pain why he is closing eyes"
Dr:Mr Maan
Maan: looked at him "you will get reports tomorrow "
nurse "press it tight "placed a cotton
Maan: kept it without looking at her.."ok i will collect it"
Dr: ok
Maan: thx got up
Geet: i am fine
Maan: looked at her he left her arm"i know"
they walk to car
Geet: "why he is so concern?"
Maan: "why i feel her pain?" still feel her soft arm in her hand
they reached office
Maan: i didnot told you i was looking for a sectary for last few months .
geet: looking at lift floor
Maan: i think i am talking to you
Geet: i am hearing you.. looked at him her eyes has tears

Maan: are you hurt? does your arm is paining ? looked at her shoulder

Geet: no i am fine ..i was just
they reached to the floor..door open
Maan: hated as he could not hear what she wanted to say..
they walked out
ADI: goodmorning sir
Maan: GM everyone in conference room
Geet: felt his tone changed
they all gather..
Maan: meet miss Geet she is my sectary . introduce your self please
one by one everyone introduce them self
Maan:pinky guide her about my schedule
Pinky: ok sir
Maan: you come in my room
Geet: jee
after briefing Geet walk to his cabin
Geet: can i come in sir
Maan: was busy in reading file..looked at her "yes close door"
Geet: jee
Maan: have seat

Geet: seated in front of her

Maan: who asked you to call Me sir
Geet; every one is saying that why
Maan: everyone is everyone & you are you .. gave her few files
Geet: what to do with it?
Maan: i have meeting with them collect all files we have to leave in hour
Geet: jee
Maan: please not this jee
Geet: then what?
Maan: Maan
Geet: ok Maan
Maan: good
Geet: where is my office?
Maan: this is your office too
Geet: but it is your
Maan: i will call you after every 5 mins it is better you stay here.
Geet: ok , she collect all files
Maan: he liked her presence..as she walked her payal made noise.

Geet: i collected all she was sitting on floor trying to find in the last cabinet

Maan: acha.. looked at her
Geet: you need all
Maan: yes
Geet: placed at his table
Maan: looked at her "only this "
Geet: is there more
Maan: may be
Geet: it is so messy sorry to say i have to arrange all
Maan: smiled as he himself placed all at wrong place ..."you can do it later lets go "
Geet: ok .. try to get up
Maan: gave her his hand "chalo"
Geet: looked at him then hold it .
Maan: you just note down points
Geet: ok...
they reached to Mr Chopra office
Pinky: come sit with me
Geet: sure
Pinky: it is a totally boring place
Geet: ok

Meeting started it was for 3 hours they discussed their new project

Geet: just carefull listen everything & noted..
Maan: cell rang he saw number gave to Geet
Geet: saw home picked up
VED:didi it is 4:30 ask Mamoo to get up
Geet; beta he is busy looked at him he was looking at her while talking
VED: how we will go to joy land ?
Geet: we will go promise
VED: at 6 sharp
Geet: yes at 6 sharp
closed ..with eyes he asked what ..geet nothing....
they got free at 5
MR chopra: lets have tea?
Maan: sure
Geet: looked at him
Maan: walk to her "any problem"
Geet: they are waiting at home . it is 5 :10
Maan: oh i forgot
Geet: took cup from his hand come fast... pull her with him
Maan: smiled "let me thx him "
Geet: ok

Geet: picked up his laptop& files walk to elevator

Maan: you didnot had any thing
Geet: i will have ..
Maan: we can go late
Geet: nai we will go at 6 as it is our promise
Maan liked the way she said ours
as they reached to the car
Geet: will you please drive?
Maan: ok saw her sitting at front seat...
Geet: you have just 25 mins now
Maan: we will reached before 6
he drive fast it was a traffic jam ...
ved: looking at watch .. 2 more mins
they reached Geet press Horn
Ved: Tanu they are here
Maan smiled ...saw Geet jumping out of car
Geet: see we reached before 6
Ved: lets go ..he jump in car ...
Geet: yes lets go driver hit his shoulder ... looked at Maan

Maan: looked at her smiling face he reversed

Meera :ran out "maan iss ka varth ha " but she was late
They reached joy land
Geet: VED hold my hand.. she grab their hands as he got ticket..
Ved: i want to sit in bumper car
Tanu: me too
Geet: ok go she stand with him
Ved didi you to come with us in skyride
Geet: no please
VED: yes you both will sit with us
Geet: please beta
Tanu :no please
they both pull them
Geet: looked at Maan
Maan: i am here ..his eyes said that to her
Geet: sit with Tanu
Maan with VED
it was getting dark ...
VED : i want water
Maan: here is bottle but take it after ride

it started

Geet: felt bad in stomach as she was scared ..
Tanu : didi kuch balo na
Maan: looked at her pale face
Tanu: didi ko kya huwa
Maan: stop it ... he just jump out took her out of her seat made her rest head at his knee.."geet " pat her cheek
Ved:Mamoo water
Maan: yes .. he made her drink as she open her eyes full moon was shining over their head...
Geet: just saw his eyes in moonlight drank water form his hand ....
to be cont..do comment
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Fabulous......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..........
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...........
Loved it soooooooooooooo much when Geet said to VED that Yes Maan is a Kid.....🤣🤣🤣......
Loved every single line............
wow Maan broke Geet's Fast......😳😳😳😳.....Thats Lovely............
Loved Geet's bonding with Khurana Family............
Eagerly waiting for the next part...........
Pls Update Soooooooooooon

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