MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago
well i had a wonderful journey through out the entire ff.
i loved when mayank asked her that if they should complete their marriage.i loved when nupur said that she was living her dream.i loved hoe they helped each other.
hope to read more of your ffs soon.
and i'm not gonna say 'thank you' as thats an understatement.
love you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak...you know that was so beautiful 🤗 Ive read it 8 times already (yeah i was counting) how can anything be so beautiful and amazing?

Their closeness..him bringing water..them adjusting for 3 years..then coming back..and the Gunjan part..was so unexpected. I burst out laughing too ..awww...😆 and their discusiion on children.

Mayank I tell you...hes so practical..my baby..but then he understood Nupur..☺️ and then his discussion waala line..awww!! And the baby girl..awwww....nothing can be more awesome than this! :(:(

I will miss this FF so much...coz daily during nigh time..I would wait for your PM..I read your whole FF at one go in the morning also..Its very special to me..every part..their marriage..flight travel..their studies..confession..their conssumation..and now this!

Simply FAB Mehak..Love you for this one 🤗

Better start one more soon!!! Pleaseeee!!

-Mansi
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is really magical
i love every part of this ff..........their first meeting........their first convo.........their understanding.........their magical confession..........when mayank asked her to completete their marriage..........when nupur asked him having a child.........the first move of their child..........when mayank took his daughter in his arm........every part...........this is a divine story
love u...........nd waiting for ur next magic
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res! read the whole ff/os... Simply amazzing.... wil edit later...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing yaar
i will miss your ff very badly
and the most favorite piece of your ff is the confession part..........
that was awesome and the way they settled in us was also well well written
all in all i loved your ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Mehak............thanks for sharing such a cute FF!!!👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
hay mehak awesome n happy ending
n baby girl wow😍
bt sad that this is the last part😔
u knw i used to wait 4 ur pm everyday😃
bt i knw ull cum bck with new magic of mayur😍
plz do write more ff's n yup dont forget to pm me😳
n thank u sooooo much 4 ur pms n magic 🤗
c u in ur nxt magic😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hein?? U ended it..... Y???

I was soooooooooooooooooo much addicted to this FF....... I used 2 feel sooo happy wenvr i saw dat i hv recvd a pm frm u.... Pls start a new one fast.... ha ha u must be thinking kitna greedy hai..... LOL....

Awesome updates.... Loved each 1 of them.....

Last Part was great n @ a super fast speed..... Loved it a lot.....

Do write more.... Waiitng 2 read more f ur stories..

Pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehakkkk...u ended it?!!!!😭😭😭

But I guess that is okay...i will miss looking forward to your pms about updates and then the awesome updates themselves😭😭


It was such a beautiful part😃😃 You really wrote the ending beautifully😃 I loved the part where Mayank calls Nupur princess and then realises they are not alone😆😆 and Gunjan teasing them😆😆

Then the best part was when the baby girl kicked and they felt her movement and then later when she was born and Mayank thanking Nupur for giving him the best gift ever😳😳 Hayeee so romantic Mr. Sharma😳😳

Perfect spouse, perfect friend, perfect lover....that is all what MayUr have been to each other all through😃😃 Loved their relationship that grew stronger due to all the struggles that they faced while they were away from home....it was nice to see how their marriage grew stronger and their understanding and support for each other increased with every hurdle they faced😃😃

It was all awesome and I loved it all...EVERY BIT of it😃 Please do write another one soon okies😃😃

Edited: Btw they woke up with their clothes on???😆😆 Okay ignore that...lols...i am out of my mind😆😆

It was a lovely part all through and an even lovelier FF...and write another one VERY soon okies😃😃 Your time starts now....😆😆
Edited by amyluvsmayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!! You ended your ff...Yaar tere ff k bina mera kya hoga????😭😭

Okk...no emotional drama....Mehak....you are awesome...superb..yaar...& fantastic ending...You know you added all the elements in your ff...it was just perfect...👏👏👏
& it's really difficult to choose only one dialogue or scene....I love each & everything...but really loved Mayank calling Nupur CUTEE & PRINCESS.....❤️❤️❤️
I will really miss your ff...plz phir se ek naya ff banana..

Many stars for our Rockstar.....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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