MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic.

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Reema Bhatia

@reema_arti

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#511

part13

it was awesome

loved the way u described nupur's hesitation..

part14

it was well written..

poor mayur..y do they always have to face problems..

will read the other parts later n comment

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#512

awesome part!!!
really amazing!!
you made the perfect end!
i loved each and every part of this ff..
i will really miss this ff..
plz write more!😊

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#513

Mehak 🤗

OMGG! You ended it =((((

This seriously was one of my most favorite FFs ever <3

Throughout this FF has kept me hooked on! It is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read.

Mayank&Nupur- Two people who got married only for the will of others and then set off on an unknown journey. Their journey, their life and their love story is so wonderfully laid out by you Mehak.

Every moment in this FF has been truly special. Their progress in life from strangers, to a couple in marriage, to friends, to lovers and to soul mates. Together they faced every obstacle, every hurdle and every shortcoming of life.

They have been the perfect friends, spouses and lovers throughout. This is a story I will cherish forever! Beautifully written Mehak! Absolutely fabulous <3

I am really sorry that due to my busy schedule these days I haven't been able to leave you proper comments. But today I must praise you endlessly for this fabulous piece.

Please do write more Mehak. You're a beyond talented writer and i love your work. I will be waiting impatiently for your next FF. Please do write more.

And my most favorite moment of this FF has to be their confession at the falls and the very last scene. <3<3<3

Love ya Mehak! You're an awesome person 🤗

Edited by -Daania- - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#514

Mehak.. it was really nice to be a part of this FF as a reader... The last update was a fitting end to this FF... Keep writing more...

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#515

awwwwwwwwwww mehak itni jldi hatam kar di yeh ff but it was the perfect ending i loved it alot

thx alot for the pm and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write more

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#516

mehak you really are awesome writer

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#517

wow..........perfect ending

mindblowing

luved each n every little thing

ur a grt writer

do write moreeeeee plzzzzzzz

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Mehak this ff is very close to my heart as i alwz dreamt of a guy like mayank in ur ff...U alwz make me speechless with ur writing...
Though im feeling bad that it ends but i think this wz the right time for the ending...I loved the whole ff, the starting, the twists...But specially my fav part is part 2, 3 and 12...
I wz like lost in those parts...The first night, confession, submission all wr mesmerizing...Even the the dialogues wr very touchy...
Thnx for writing such wonderful piece...will wait for some new...

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#519

Just Finished reading last two parts....

Mehek...
this was a beautiful FF.. I loved it....👏
I'm sad that it ended but i could not imagine a better ending then this..👍🏼

MAYUR'S BEAUTIFUL love story is so perfectly written and vivid... Mehak you did a fantastic job!!!

Every single line, moment, was simply beautiful and special that it seems so hard to pick the best one..

but the ones that leave a everlasting impression in my heart are

-the confession when snow falls as they have their first kiss...

-when Mayank asks Nupur

M..nupur can we complete our marriage..??

and then the way u explained Nupur's reaction n thoughts were just ... i have no words...😳

-the last but not the least... the entire part 17....

i loved IT THE MOST..... and... yay! a sweet baby girl for Mayur... beautiful....☺️

Please do not stop writing... Ur a beautiful writer.. MashaALLAH..

& InshaAllah I will see plenty more of your talent...

I will be waiting desperately, and more impatiently for your next work...hope it is on ArTi Or MayUr😍