FF: Geet-The Song of Life (note pg 35) - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiwan08

Hey guys, sorry i havn't updated anything in a while. I finish exams on wednesday so will update then.

Sorry for the delay.
Jiwan



hey no worries good luck on your exams, can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
story soundsss grt...plz add me to ur PM list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey

This sounds great. Could you kindly add me to your PM list.

Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Jiwan, great story yr...😊 its quite interesting n u can make it more interesting by using different colours.. actually u r using only BLACK text colour so its having a bit boring attraction but otherwise ur story is AWESOME N MIND BLOWING... really loving it but do make it attractive with colours.. n sorry yr don't mind it.. i m telling u as a reader.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! 👍🏼. n update it soon..
Edited by Fizza110 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys! Sorry for making you wait sooo long, so without further ado, here it is.

Chapter 2- Part IV
Stealing one anxious look at each other, they both opened the creaky dilapidated doors and stepped in. Vast amounts of light flooded their eyes before they could observe their surrounding, the shock causing them to take an abrupt step back.

Adjusting their eyes to the now brightly lit hall, they noticed a lone figure sitting on a chair with his back turned towards them. Before they could begin to contemplate their next move, the black suit clad man slowly stood up. Sakhi shot a quick glance at Vicky and faced the in front, holding her breath. Slowly turning around he let out a blood curdling laugh, the echoes making it all the more horrifying. Sakhi jumped in let out an equally horrified scream and darted out the front door and back into the Taxi.

Back inside the cottage, Vicky amusedly stared at the man. He stood sneering at Vicky, with a lopsided smirk. The Joker-esque makeup exemplified the patronising smirk and provided him with an auro of intimidation.

The Smirk, Vicky thought, i've definitely seen that smirk before. And then it hit him.

As the man took step towards him, Vicky too returned the family trademark causing the now bewildered Maan to halt in his tracks. Vicky closed the distance between the two and took his elder brother in to a bear hug. Taking a second to get himself together, Maan returned the gesture with just as much vigour.

"Bro you should really go put Sakhi out of her misery," Vicky remarked letting go of Maan.

"Yeah, but how'd you know it was me?" Maan questioned.

"Aah, what can I say...i'm just too good."

Lightly smacking Vicky on the back of his head, Maan moved towards the front door.

"Bro, maybe you should get rid of the whole get up before seeing Sakhi," Vicky said, rubbing the back of his head.

Stopping in his tracks Maan replied, "Fine, you go back and relieve her. I'll meet you out front."

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"Sakhi," Vicky called out, once inside the Taxi.

"What were you doing in there for so long??" Sakhi questioned, her eyes almost falling out of their sockets.

"Nothing much, just beating the shit out of the guy in there," Vicky replied, casually running his hand through his hair.

"You...you beat him up? I don't believe you.

"Huh? What do you mean, you don't believe me? How else did I manage to get out of there unscathed."

"Fine, but how are we getting out of this mess? I've called Maan veerji soo many times, he just won't pick up!"

"Well the answer to your question is, the man in there is driving us home."

"WHAT?!"

"Yeah...well, i told him i'd let him live if he gets us out of here. He's just bringing his car upfront.

"That maniac is driving us?!

"HEY!" came a deep rumbling voice as Sakhi's passenger door opened, causing her to jump and hit the roof again.

Squinting her eyes in the dark she could vaguely make out the chiselled face of her elder brother.

"Maan veerji?!!" she exclaimed.

"So how'd you like your welcome home surprise?" Maan snickered.

"OH MY GOD!! That was you?"

"Who doesn't have guts now Sakhi?"

"You did all this just because I Said you don't have guts?! Gosh, you're so mean, almost gave me a myocardial infarction!"

"Now try saying that without sounding like a nerd." Vicky piped in.

"Shut up! At least I don't have a brain the size of a pea!"

"Atleast I have a brain!"

"Ok ok, break it up. Get your stuff, Daadi must be waiting."

Ok, tell me what you think. I'll try update again today.

Edited by Jiwan08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice! hahah I lyke the nerdy line..ur into medicine?
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Posted: 14 years ago
ur amazing🤗...... its was great👍🏼.......... is sakhi a medical student? 🤔 bc.....she said myocardial infarction instead of heat attack..... just wondering............. please update soon...dont make us wait long😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
good to see you back as well!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

great update yaar, but please dont take so loonge time like the last one we miss the story its nice.

and please let us read whin geet and maan meet we like this one 😉
we need some romance yaar 😉 ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Thats Awesome..........
Loved it........
wow Vicky is smart.......
Pls Update Sooooooooon.........

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