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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it too ❤️
u r soooooooooooo naughty han! 😳
update soon.............. luv u 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Interesting update
loved it
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2 :

this was awesum i seriously loved it even my frnd tease me in da same way …..nd wer is rajiv ???(he is my fav 😳)

I'm really excited for further part ….this is so interesting nd I loved I also like the song "asmani rang" ❤️

Part 3 :

was party really boring ???? no way …..

it was awesum wen I saw vm I thot they are gonna dance but ......koi gal nahi I enjoyed this part so much(there first touch 😳)

But ending ???? why did he say her to take cab ? 😲

did he get angry ……well any gentleman wud be on her this strange behavior she was changing in a strangers car whom she dznt even kwn properly silyl gal 😆

this ff is really magical .....👏👏👏👏👏👏

well geet's magic is working on maan 😳but wat abt maan's magic ?

i'm loving this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Soooo cuteeeeeee.
Loveee maneet.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Three awesome updates
thanks you rock always be
Waiting for Ur updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Muski...!!! Dear...!!😉
Awesum, mindblowing, fantastic, fablous n wonderful update...!!!!!👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Trio friendship on rock..!!! hehehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆
Mr.bachchan...!!! meet again wiv Geet..!!!!😳😳😳😳😳
ohh i cant get over wiv Kurban Hua...!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Maan is proper, totally shock...!!!!😲😲😲😲 hehehe😆😆😆😆😆
Geet Handa bhi kuch kaam nahi hai...!!!😆😆😆 Lamo changing n car....!!!!🤣🤣🤣
Ab Geet kiya kerigi...!!! ye humhe more Maneet scene miliga....!!!!😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
baapre kitna rude. haww? take a cab? is the man crazy? and well technically he is crazy......FOR HER lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!

AM back.... and i love this fic even more than pyaar ka ehsas! you get better with each update if that's possible at all!! I was really busy with collg, but now you got me hooked to IF FanFictions again with your fic!!!!

It's amazing.... all my fav. characters!!! and Part 3 was toh jhakkas!!! i love this different geet!!!!
and please a request do update fast like how u did with PKE!

Lots of love and hugs!!
<3 Heena
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Posted: 14 years ago
he pats her softly - aacha get ready we are getting late for the party

geet - mera jaana zaroori hain kya?
papa gives a stirn look - wear a saree ok

papaji.. i know what you have in your mind.... MSK MSK MSK....

geet - oh no!!
papa - NO oh no...oh yes
geet smiles - yeh kya party hain
papa - Mr. Maan Singh khurana ki honour main party hain..he is really
indeed an intresting and very sucessfull business man

Looks like papa wants MSK to be his SIL.. not a bad thought.. 😉😉😉

geet - hi Mr.bachan
maan pretended not to recognize her
geet - aap sach main chasma phenthe hain kya?
maan - WHAT??
geet - nahi u gave me a lift in the morning remember..Geet!!

Our same Bak Bak GEET... honey... who can forget you !!!!!... Do you know our angry young man MSK was dreaming about you all day !!!! 😍

does he have to be reminded !! he has been thinking about her the whole day
he smiled at his plight
geet - yeh party kitni boring hain na
maan kept quite maintaing a stirn look
geet - kisi Maan Singh..something ki party hain
maan corrected - Maan Singh Khurana

LOL .. MSK ka attitude tho dekho !!!!!... I really loved it yaar.. was imagining his face..😡😡 Delhi ka most eligible Batchelor , uska honour mein party hai.. and she doesn't know him..


geet - wat ever!!
can I use ur phone please mera phone main reception nahi hain
maan - yeh restricted area hain
geet - so
maan - all phone networks will not work
geet - aapka kaam karegha
maan - haan

MSK, aap tho super hero hai na.. everything is possible for you... Some jokes on MSK.. ( actually it's Rajni jokes 😃)

MSK's calendar goes straight from March 31st to April 2nd, no one fools MSK.

MSK grinds his coffee with his teeth and boils the water with his own rage.

MSK never wet his bed as a child. The bed wet itself in fear

MSK doesn't bowl strikes, he just knocks down one pin and the other nine faint out of fear.

geet - thanxs she takes his phone & makes a call to Prem..maan stood helplessly
geet - hi main bol rahi hoon
prem - yeh kis ka phone hain? number bhi nahi display ho raha
geet - woo..Mr.bachan ka..bola thana subha mujhe drop kiya tha
maan wondered she actually spoke about him to her friends


MSK.. sab log aapke tarah SADHOO nahi hote.. esp girls.. they will talk about guys they meet and if the guy is handsome.. no need to say !!!


prem - woo tujhe khanha milgaya
geet - party main
prem - tera phone ko kya huwa
geet - some Maan some ristricted area pata nahi kanha hoon
I don't know how will I come out?? have u guys reached

MSK face 😡😡😡.. she is insulting me again....

prem - we are here & partying
geet - already..mera bina
maan stood there crossing his hand over his chest

Muskii.. really love his pose... with lop sided grinn..😆😆😆

geet - koi poochey to
maan - no body will question u when ur with me
geet - papa mummy poochenghe to
maan - tell them ur going on a drive with Maan Singh Khurana

Geet sweety , your papa-mummy will be in cloud9 if they come to know your r going out with MSK..

geet - Mr.bachan yaar tu to bhut hi smart hain
bus ek problem
maan - wat
geet - agar woo Maan ..kya hain
maan - Maan singh Khurana (rolled his eyes)

Again.. yaar muski.. poor guy... 🤣

geet - right right..woo dusht dhanav unke pass huwa to
maan - nahi hosaktha

geet - don't see here
maan looked from corner of eyes
geet - oye bola na mat deehkoo

Control yaar control... use rear view mirror.. 😆😆😆

she pulled off her saree maan ignored..then she removed her blouse
maan braked all of sudden & geet fell in front sliding between

🤬 MSK ka control gay.. bechara...

the front seats maan held her from her bare waist and back
her eyes was closed & hands cluctching the top close just covering her curves
& maan just looked at her closed eyes open slowly fluttering to open
she opened her eyes in shock into maans alluring eyes..maan looked away
her touch..their first intimate touch..maan was blown away!! soft and tender
he probably never felt anything so delicate..his heart just stopped beating

yeh padkar mujhe palpaitation ho rahi hai...... Dadiii........


maan looked at her in amuze
maan - ek min and helped her to sit up with his watch still entangled with her strap
he was so reluctant to even look at her bare back & here he was supposed to
touch it..he closed his eyes & tried to focus
geet - jab mat deehko bola tha tho u were peeping..& now uff..u guys are impossible!!

Enough sweety.. you don't know MSK.. yeh tho jwalamukhi hai...don't show him any attitude..yeh tera Armaan aur prem jaisa nahi hai.. he will kick you out..

maan - mujhe se nahi hoga & truned away looking infront his hand again snapped the strap
..making that sound so sensioucs..tickling maans thought

No problem yaar.. experience nahi hai na.. isliye.. I am sure next time you will do it better..😆😆

geet - atleast remove ur watch na yaar
maan opened his watch & slidded his hand out..caressing her bare back
geet - jaldi karoo mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hain
maan pulled his hand & looked away
geet - aab nahi dehkna plz
as geet hid behind the seat maan opened the door & waited outside & slammed the door
maan rubbed his fore head main yanha kya kar rahoon & kicked the tyre

You should have thought about this MSK... There is one party going on .. especially for you and you quitted it .. GEET se line marne ke liye...

maan came to her side & pulled her out lifting her from arms & said
take a cab from here & slamms the door giving her a stirn look & leaves

MSK's attitude !!!!!.. don't worry GEET.. he will come back in 15 minutes... He is really pissed off.. but he won't leave you alone .. ( wait.. wait.. I don't know what muskii has in her mind.. let's wait and see 😆)
MUSKI... get well soon dear.. take your medicines and rest properly.... 🤗
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago

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