FF with all my heart Pt5 (Maaneet)+note

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi to all...
thats my first ff.... and that on my favorite couple...pls forgive if i make mistakes...and pls comment and criticize..

and its a very different story but the characters are similar and there are new characters too...
so enjoy

Dr. Maan Singh Khuraana: He's a young heeart specialist. For him, his career is most important. A handsome intelligent man but arrogant. He has only few friends and the word love does not exist for him (not yet). He is not interested in patients.He is only interested him only the disease and the cure.
He became a docter to impress his father. He wants to go to America and become a famous doctor,
And Maan thinks that patients doctors shouldn't have any personal realtionship. Until he met her.

Dr Sameera: One of Maans friends. She is in Love with him since the college but Maan doesn't know it. She is pretty and a good doctor.

Dr. Armaan: He's Maans best friend. He's handsome funny and flirty. He's really opposite of Maan.

I'll introduce Geet during the story...

introduction

You have to accept the heart...Please you can't leave me alone.you taught me how to love and how to live and now you want to leave me. No i don't let it happen. His eyes are filled tears.Suddenly her heart start to beat. Only their pure love braought her back to live. He was the reason for her to fight for her live.

I want to tell a love story that overcome the death

i hope u likes it...i am horrible wirter...


Part 1: Pg1
Part 2: Pg2
Part 3: Pg3
Part 4: Pg 3
Part 5: Pg 3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Go ahead and be creative! :-)
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intro is really good...........please go ahead..........will be with u............👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OWSME YAR PLZ CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow it's really interesting intro pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Looks intresting
can't wait to read it
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1:

Maan goes through the file from a patient. Dr Sameera enters the room. Maan didn't notice her. He looks handsome today she thought. Of course he looks always handsome its Maan Singh Khuranaa after all.

Sameera: hi Maan what are u doing?

Maan didn't response

Sameera: Ah right I forgot if you're working you forget everything else.

Maan still no response

She goes closer to Maan and put her hand on her shoulder.

Maan looked up: Hi Sam when did you come.

Sameera smiled: just now Dr. Chopra called us. He wants to see us.

Maan: ok then let's go

Dr. Chopra: The senior doctor of the hospital. He's very strict but always fair. He thinks Maan has talent but he thinks also Maan can't handle the patient properly. So he decides to give him a special case. Dr. Chopra knows the patient well and she will be a big challenge for Maan.

Maan, Sameera and Armaan waited for Dr. Chopra. Armaan and Sameera are talking and Maan stands there and looked through the file. For Maan is Chopras opinion about him very important. Dr. Chopra is the one who recommend the doctors to the hospitals in America.

Dr Chopra entered the room and Armaan and Sameera stopped talking.

Dr Chopra: I called you because tomorrow a new patient will be admitted. I think you all know the famous businessman Arjun Punj from Mumbai.

All three nodded their heads in positive.

Dr Chopra continues: Yes and his sister will be admitted tomorrow in our cardiothoracic department. You know we have the best cardiothoracic department in India. About her case, I'll tell you tomorrow. You three have to take care of her. And I want her to feel comfortable here. I just wanted to inform you. You can leave now.

Sameera: it's strange… he never called us to inform about an admission.

Armaan: didn't you listen to him. The patient is the sister of the famous Arjun Punj. He's one of the richest people in Mumbai. That means generous donation for our hospital and we have to deal with a spoiled princess. We aren't doctors anymore we are servants. God please save us.

Sameera: Maan what do you think about it.

Maan: I don't care who she is. The only important thing is that we do our job.

But Maan knows that something about the patient must be special.

Dr Chopra has never called them just to inform about a patients arrival.

Precap:

HER ARRIVAL

So that was my first part… I hope you liked it. Thx for reading it…

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for the next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I LOVE IT I CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART SOON PLS PUT PM LIST THANKS
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ooh interesting you have got a great concept can't wait for the next update 😊
Edited by -shamima- - 14 years ago

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