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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part
cant wait till maan and geet meet
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please do long update soon..............
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Hi to all…thx for all the lovely comments… very sweet all of you…my computer has some problems… so I can't pm…but I'll try…so here is my second part enjoy

Part 2:

Next day

Maan is in the locker room. He is getting ready for his rounds. Armaan entered the locker room.
Armaan: Hey dude. The princess will be here in an hour. Dr. Chopra wants to see us in ward nr. 3 in an hour.

Maan: princess?

Armaan: ya sister of Arjun punj

Maan: oh ya right… but I need first a coffee.

Armaan: ok dude…c u then

Maan was on the way to the canteen. Suddenly a dupatta flew on his face.

Oh sorry sir can I have my dupatta back he heard a sweet voice say but Maan didn't move.

The girl called again: sir mera dupatta

But Maan didn't response. What is that about her voice that makes him loose his sense? He doesn't know.

Girl: ohh babji whats wrong with him? Are you deaf?

She grabs her dupatta. Maan closed his eyes by her touch.

Girl: Pagal and then she walks away.

Maan opend his eyes but she isn't there anymore.

Maan back to his senses: Arre Maan whats wrong with you?

Now he's annoyed. Stupid woman how dare she call me pagal. I need a coffe now. So he walks to the canteen.

Maan orders: a black coffee no sugar no milk

iuu black coffee without sugar and milk…how can you drink that… bad taste…he heard a voice behind him.

He regonized her voice.

Maan turned to see her face. There she is…He has never seen a more beautiful woman. A girl with big almond eyes, milky skin and her curly hairs. She looks like a pari Maan thought. And the smile on her face...he could watch it the whole day…

Maan to himself: What? Stop Maan… what are you thinking. Now he is angry… How dare she to call my taste bad.

Maan to girl: hey what does it matter to you how I drink my coffee…my taste my coffe I'll drink it how I like it…so stupid woman keep your comments to youself.

Girl: Stupid woman? Stupid woman? How dare you to call me a stupid woman. You are stupid. Don't you know how to talk to lady? Don't you have any manners?

Maan: don't talk about manners…you are the one who are giving comments to people you not even know…stupid woman

Girl: now I understand…you're life must be so bitter that you can't stand even a sweet coffee…ohh babaji why I am even talking to such a jerk…such an idiot…I don't want to see your ugly face ever again…

Maan: who said I want to see your ugly face…I want to see you never gain.

Girl: same here

Maan: good

Girl: perfect

So they walk both away…

Precap:

Dr. Maan, Dr. Sameera, Dr. Armaan may I introduce Geet Punj to you…

So my second part….i know it's boring…but I hope the next part will be better…again thx for you lovely comments…I'll try to pm

Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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hi here is Part 3 enjoy...

Maan is really angry. He walks into the ward Nr3. Dr Chopra, Armaan and Sameera are already there.

Armaan whispers to Sameera: Where is our princess?

Sameera whispers back: I don' know

Dr Chopra hears them: she'll be here any moment…

Maan doesn't say anything… he thinks about this annoying girl…

A girl enters the room and two men with suitcases in their hand fallowed her. The girl looks cute and she has a chips bag in her hand.

Armaan: There she is…

Girl: Hello Dr. Chopra. I am Pinky. I am a friend of Miss Punj. She'll be right here. She wanted to have a tea.

Dr. Chopra: Ah ok. We will wait…

Armaan: why should we wait for her? We are here the doctors. A patient has to wait for the doctors and not the patient for the doctor.

Dr.Chopra: Sometime a doctor has to wait for a patient Dr. Armaan.

A knock on the door…

Pinky: Ahh there she is…

Armaan looks at her…He can't belive his eyes… What is she? A greek goddess? She is a princess a real princess from heaven…

Maan didn't look to her… he is still thinking about the girl…

Dr. Chopra: Dr. Armaan, Dr. Maan, Dr. Sameera may I introduce Miss Geet Punj to you.

Geet: hi… Geet also didn't notice Maan yet.

This voice brought Maan back…

Maan shous: YOU????

Geet shouts: YOU? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?

Maan: I AM DR. MAAN SINGH KHURANAA

Dr. Chopra to Maan: Dr. Maan do you know her

Maan and Geet: noooooo….

Maan thought: god what is this stupid woman doing here

Geet thinks: He's a doctor…Babji the poor patients…poor me…

Dr. Chopra: Ok… Miss Geet these three young doctors will be responsible for you…

Geet thinks: Babajy why you are doing this to me…Now I have to see him every day…

Maan thinks: No she is the special patient. Now I have to handle this disaster…

Dr.Chopra: Miss Geet you must be tired... Please you take rest I'll talk to you later...And doctors I want to see you three in my in an half an hour… Dr. Maan please check Geet BP befor you leave.

Geet and the other three: ok Doctor…

Dr. Chopra leaves the room. Sameera says bye to Geet and leaves the room. Pinky and the men settle Geets room.

Pinky to Geet: I'll be right back…I want to buy some flowers for you…She and the men left also…

Armaan is still mesmerized by her beauty.

Armaan to Geet: Hi Geet! I am Dr. Armaan.

Geet: Hi Dr. Armaan

Geet finds Dr. Armaan very sweet.

Dr Maan takes Geets arm…she pushed his hand away…

Geet: oy leave my hand…don't touch me…

Maan: don't be childish I have to check your BP …and grab her arm again but this time rougher

Geet: ouch your hurting me…

Armaan: Maan don't be so rude… you don't how to handle a princess like her…

Geet: He's so gentle… Not a dhust like you…

Maan now angry: How did call?

Geet: I called you dust… are you def or what?

Armaan: Mann let me check her BP.

Maan: no I'll check. Dr. Chopra gave me the job so I'll do it.

He checked her BP even though she protested…

Her BP was really high…But he didn't say anything and left her room…

Now Maan wondered: What's wrong with her health? Why didn't Dr. Chopra say anything about her case? He doesn't know why but the thought that something with her health isn't ok, makes his heart feel heavy.

Armaan and Geet chatted for a while… he looked at his watch… he has to leave now…

Armaan to Geet: sorry my princess but I have to leave now…c u soon.

Geet: Dr. Armaan why are you calling me princess...

Armaan: Because for me you look like a beautiful princess.

Geet blushed

Armaan: When you blush u are looking more beautiful…and pls call me Armaan when the senior doctors aren't near.

Geet: ok Armaan bye…

Precap:

Geet's heart

Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its really nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really beautiful pls cont soonnnnnnnn pls add me pm list thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just read this; and it really good!!
Do pm me if you can
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Part 4

In Mr. Chopras cabin

Dr. Chopra: I want to talk about Geet's case now. You maybe have wondered why I treat Geet so special. I never introduced a patient personally, but Geets case is special. That's Geets medical report. Maan didn't know why but he grabbed it from Dr. Chopras hand. He starts to read. Every word made him feel horrible… Sam and Armaan noticed the change in his expression…what's wrong with Maan? He never showed any emotional expressions and defiantly not toward a patient. But they were sure they saw pain, pity and sadness in his eyes. Now Armaan and Sameera take the reports and read it.

Dr. Chopra: Yes doctors… Since her childhood she has a rare heart disease (sorry but i don't know any heart disease and I and any medical names) and she needs a heart transplantation. But she's too weak for an operation right now. We have to do some therapies and make her ready for the operation. She'll stay here for a longer time. Doctors you are responsible for Geet. And the one who shows the most inset, will assist me in the operation. And you know to assist such an operation is a great honor.

Maan was shattered Maan doesn't care about the operation. He could only think: Why her?

Armaan: Sir the operation is a risky operation and Geet's health is weak.

Dr. Chopra: yes I know but the operation is important. Without the operation Geet will…

Maan was shocked

Dr Chopras: Anyway we will try our best…

And not only Geet's heart is weak she mentally weak too. Her parents died when she was 6. Her only family is her brother and her uncle. I know she seems to be happy person. But she's very emotional and that's not good for her health when gets over emotional. Her uncle is a good friend of mine. I promised him to take care of her.

So doctors Geet's case will have top priority…Her treatment and operation will affect your grates.

So doctors give your best…You can leave now…

In the locker room:

Armaan: poor princess… she doesn't deserve that…

Sameera: yes I feel sorry for her…

Maan in his thoughts…why does it affect him…No Maan she is just a patient like all the others… don't forget your principle… NO PERSONAL FEELINGS FOR THE PATIENT…

Maan to his friends: She's just a patient like the others…So do your job…And be the best in your job…That's it…and left the room…

(Just a patient likes the other I don't think so)

Armaan: How can he be so cold...sometimes I don't understand him…

Sameera nodded…She remembers how he looked when he read her report…And she didn't see coldness…it was the real opposite thing…

Precap

Arjun Punj enters Sanjeevini

Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
thx for the lovely comments...

Part 5:

Geet stands at the window with a photo of her family and tears roll down her cheeks. She missed her parents a lot and now her brother, uncle and her friends too. She feels lonely but she is happy that Pinky is there for her. Pinky is one of her best friends in her childhood. Geet is scared… she'll never show that but she's scared of the operation. She knows everything about her disease and how risky the operation is. She doesn't want to stay in this hospital for so long. But she is Geet Punj and she'll fight. She'll fight against this disease…She'll make the time here as pleasant as possible. And Armaan seems to be nice Person...So Geet smile…She thought...

She hears a knock on the door…
Geet: come in and turned to see who it is…

Maan enters the room…he sees her standing at the window…the sun is shining through the window…Maan thought to him: Wow…her hair shimmered in the sunlight. She is wearing pink salwar kameez…Her eyes are shimmering too…Tears? Is she crying…Maan feels strange? Why are her tears affecting him? Maan moved closer to her…She didn't say anything…She stands there looked in his eyes…

Now he stands very close to her…He wanted to wipe her tears. He moved his hands close to her cheeks.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Immediately Maan took a step a backwards. Geet wiped her tears away.

Maan thought: Maan what was that? She's you patient. Stop thinking about her…Stop thinking how beautiful she is…Stop thinking that when she smiles that the whole world smiles. And stop thinking that when she has tears in her eyes your heart feels the pain.

While Maan was in his thoughts Geet called the person in. A tall very good looking man enters the room. As Geet sees him she runs toward him and hugs him tight.
Maan totally shocked… Who was he? Her boyfriend? Maan wanted to leave the room as soon as possible… He moved toward the door…

Geet: You are here bhaja… I missed you… but I thought you are in the US now…

Maan: bhaja?

Geet and the man realized the other person in the room.

Geet: oh sorry Dr. Maan… Dr. Maan that is my brother Arjun Punj…And bhaja that is Dr. Maan.

Maan: Hello Mr. Punj

Arjun: Hello Doctor

Geet: Dr. Maan why are you here?

Maan: Oh I forgot… Miss Geet I need a blood test…but we can do it later…I'll leave now… bye Mister Punj and miss Geet.

Geet: Thx doctor bye

Arjun: bye doctor

Precap:

Maan and Geet fight again…

Geet screams: stay away from…don't come near to me with that thing



Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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