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Shivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#141

i know....continue fast v r waiting

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Shivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#142

i know....continue fast v r waiting

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#143

i am, really sorry guys i haven't updated u in a whil but i have so much work and i am not at home right now so i don't have acess to a computer and i have the rest of the fan fic's saved on my pc at home so when i gop back home i iwll try and update u as soon as possible i am soo sorry for the long wait guys really really sorry.
take care
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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#144

thanx for the comments guys and i am very sorry in keeping u wait for so long just a week longer and i will update the next two or three parts

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#145

PROMO

Kumud is packing her bags and is on the way to teh airport will Kshitij stop her or will rhea or will neither of tehm reach in time!!!

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Ika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#146

I'm waiting for it....
Plzzz cont. soon

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hershii

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Posted: 19 years ago

#147

i jus read ur whole fanfic and i think it is AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.......i luv this fanfic.....wondering wats gonna happen next......jus a suggestion..if ur gonna have kumud have a doubt abt rhea and kshitij....then after her doubt is cleared u shud have not onli kshtij buh everyone doubt summtin is up wit yash and kumud...except for rahul...nd then get kshitij and kumud bak together again....jus a suggestion though u dont have to use it....cause we a ll know in the end itz gonna be kshtij and kumud forever 👏 👏

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#148

Here is the next part after a long wait
Part 31

Kkusum: Abhay.
Abhay: Kkusum you?
Kk: I am sorry
Ab: You didn't do anything wrong it was my fault you left
Kk: No it wasn't it was because I didn't trust I wish I did
Ab: It's ok but now you are here and I am never letting you go again
Kk: That's if I ever leave u!!!
They hug
Ka cries tears of joy.

In New York
Ks sees Kumud
Ks: Kumud??
Ku: Interesting meeting you had I will leave you to it
Ks: Wait it's not what you think it is??
Kumud goes off in a taxi
Kshitij follows but can't get a taxi he tries to stop one but none of them are stopping
While we see Rhea getting into her car a driving in an opposite direction from Kumud

Kumud in the cab crying
Her phone rings its Kali and Kshitij is trying to phone her at this time as well
Ku: Hi
Ka: Guess what mom forgave dad!!!!!!
Ku: That's great (but she doesn't realise what kali says as she is deep in thought and kali realise that something is wrong)
Ka: Kumud what did I just tell you??
Ku: Something about you and Nakul…
Ka: No so are you going top tell me what's wrong or do I have come to New York to find out??
Ku: What you're not coming to NYC??
Ka: No
Ku: Good trust me nothing is wrong
Ka: I know you are lying and I know that you have been crying but I will leave it and you can tell me what has happened when you are ready!!!
Ku puts the phone down

Kshitij tries to call Kumud as he finally gets a cab to take him to the hotel.
Ku: Look I never want to see or speak to you again and when you get to India you will have the divorce papers all you need to do is sign them and you and whoever that is can live happily ever after
Ks: Kumud please listen to me it is not as it seems please here me out.
Ku: What do I have to listen to don't you think I have seen enough??
Ks: Please wait for me at the hotel
Ku puts the phone down and cries.

We see a car crash and it goes to the hospital. They call Kshitij as he is the person on her phone.
Ks: Hello
Hospital nurse: Excuse me sir but I women named Ms Rhea has had a car accident and we need some on the submit cash for her operation to go ahead.
Ks: WHAT!!! What about the little baby girl??
Nurse: She is fine only had a few bruises
Ks: Ok I will be there right away!!!

At the hotel Kumud is packing her things and is getting ready to go but keeps on remembering what Kshitij has said to her. She decides to wait for him.

Kshitij at the Hospital
Ks: Excuse me I am Kshitij Oberio I am here to pay for Ms Rhea's treatment.
Nurse: You need to pay here the operation room is being set up.
Ks: Thank you where is the little girl??
Nurse: She is in the Children's ward.
Ks: Ok thank you.
Goes to see Keya.

Kumud waiting for Kshitij. She decides to call him.
Ku: Hello where are you?? I waited long enough now I am going.
Ks: NO wait look I am at hospital I can't explain but I will be there later just wait for me.
Kumud drops the phone and goes to the hospital thinking something has happened to Kshitij.

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#149

Part 32

Kkusum: Abhay.
Abhay: Kkusum you?
Kk: I am sorry
Ab: You didn't do anything wrong it was my fault you left
Kk: No it wasn't it was because I didn't trust I wish I did
Ab: It's ok but now you are here and I am never letting you go again
Kk: That's if I ever leave u!!!
They hug
Ka cries tears of joy.

In New York
Ks sees Kumud
Ks: Kumud??
Ku: Interesting meeting you had I will leave you to it
Ks: Wait it's not what you think it is??
Kumud goes off in a taxi
Kshitij follows but can't get a taxi he tries to stop one but none of them are stopping
While we see Rhea getting into her car a driving in an opposite direction from Kumud

Kumud in the cab crying
Her phone rings its Kali and Kshitij is trying to phone her at this time as well
Ku: Hi
Ka: Guess what mom forgave dad!!!!!!
Ku: That's great (but she doesn't realise what kali says as she is deep in thought and kali realise that something is wrong)
Ka: Kumud what did I just tell you??
Ku: Something about you and Nakul…
Ka: No so are you going top tell me what's wrong or do I have come to New York to find out??
Ku: What you're not coming to NYC??
Ka: No
Ku: Good trust me nothing is wrong
Ka: I know you are lying and I know that you have been crying but I will leave it and you can tell me what has happened when you are ready!!!
Ku puts the phone down

Kshitij tries to call Kumud as he finally gets a cab to take him to the hotel.
Ku: Look I never want to see or speak to you again and when you get to India you will have the divorce papers all you need to do is sign them and you and whoever that is can live happily ever after
Ks: Kumud please listen to me it is not as it seems please here me out.
Ku: What do I have to listen to don't you think I have seen enough??
Ks: Please wait for me at the hotel
Ku puts the phone down and cries.

We see a car crash and it goes to the hospital. They call Kshitij as he is the person on her phone.
Ks: Hello
Hospital nurse: Excuse me sir but I women named Ms Rhea has had a car accident and we need some on the submit cash for her operation to go ahead.
Ks: WHAT!!! What about the little baby girl??
Nurse: She is fine only had a few bruises
Ks: Ok I will be there right away!!!

At the hotel Kumud is packing her things and is getting ready to go but keeps on remembering what Kshitij has said to her. She decides to wait for him.

Kshitij at the Hospital
Ks: Excuse me I am Kshitij Oberio I am here to pay for Ms Rhea's treatment.
Nurse: You need to pay here the operation room is being set up.
Ks: Thank you where is the little girl??
Nurse: She is in the Children's ward.
Ks: Ok thank you.
Goes to see Keya.

Kumud waiting for Kshitij. She decides to call him.
Ku: Hello where are you?? I waited long enough now I am going.
Ks: NO wait look I am at hospital I can't explain but I will be there later just wait for me.
Kumud drops the phone and goes to the hospital thinking something has happened to Kshitij.

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!
My next post won't be for another 1 or 2 weeks sorry guys had some spare time so i made this but after my exams and coursewrok is over it will be back to normal.

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago