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Posted: 19 years ago

#151

thanx for all the comments guys i will update the next part 2mo

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#152

Part 33

Ks hopes that she got the text before Kali called her

Ku: Hi
Ka: Hi where are you??
Ku: I am in New York!!
Ka: Very funny I mean where are you in New York and why isn't Kshitij with you??
Ku: Well I am out shopping and Kshitij is I don't know where I think he had a meeting
Ka: Oh right I have to go!!!
Ku: Bye
Ka gets a bit worried

Kumud reads the text
Ku thinks to her self Opps

The Next Day
Kshitij is thinking about Kumud when his phone rings its Nakul because him and Kali talked about Kumud and Kshitij and he is trying to find out what's wrong.
Na: Hi Kshitij
Ks: Hi why are you calling me?? You never call me when I am on holiday! What do you want??
Na: Oh Nothing I thought I need to bug someone so I thought why not you or Kumud!!
Ks: Very Funny but we are about to go out and Kumud has already left the room so bye.
Ke: Dad
Na hears that: Who was that??
Ks: I don't know I am in a hotel corridor.
Na: Oh I see
Ks: Ok so bye and cuts the phone
Ke: Can we go now and see mummy??
Ks: Yes

His phone rings
Ks: WHAT???????
Ku: Hello! I just called to tell you that I will stay in New York for another few days as I don't want anyone to know what has happened between us and I f they call I will say you are in a business meeting and if they call you say you are on the way or back from a business meeting ok. Then we can sort out the divorce and stuff in India.
Ks: No please…
Ku: Look I don't want to listen to what you have to say see you in a few days.

A few days pass as Rhea gets better and Kshitij is looking after her and Keya. Rhea finds out what has happened between the to of them and tells him that she will tell Kumud the truth but Kshitij says no.
Rhea is discharged from hospital and Kshitij is on his way to the airport.
Kumud is waiting for him so they can go back but she has already got a seat away from him.

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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hershii

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Posted: 19 years ago

#153

tht was good....plzz continue soon

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#154

will be puttin the next part up in a while

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#155

Part 34

We see rhea thinking about Kshitij and wondering if everything will be fine between him and Kumud
After "hours" of thinking she decides to go to India and sort the mess out for Kshitij.

On the Plane
Ks: Please just listen to me Kumud (sorry if I keep repeating the same thing over and over again having writers block lol)
Ku: Just leave me alone look what I done I think was enough
Ks: Look I wanted to say thanks for that but please understand that there is nothing going on between me and Rhea she is only a good friend.
Ku: Oh right so what I saw in the park and hospital was all a lie so she didn't hug you; you weren't holding her hand in ICU, Keya wasn't calling you dad, it was all my imagination.
Ks: I am not saying what you saw was a lie but Rhea is a friend and Keya thinks I am her dad because I help Rhea bring her up and Keya is like my Daughter she is very important to me both of them are but I love you and would never do anything to break your heart.
Ku: So what I say you are forgiven and everything goes back to normal? Is that what you are trying to say??
Ks: No I don't think everything can go back to normal but I think we can start being friends again at least…and you don't need to file that divorce.
Ku: I will think about it.

They are on the plane when Kumud falls asleep on Kshitij shoulder and Kshitij head is on top of Kumud head they both are in a deep sleep.

We see Rhea getting tickets to go to India.

On The plane there is an announcement that there is a delay and we will be stopping over in Thailand.
Kumud and Kshitij wake up and Kumud moves away from Kshitij very quickly.

They are in Thailand.

Ga: What do you think has happened in New York??
The mysterious person (the one that send Kumud the message to go to the park): Well Kshitij has left New York with Kumud and there are on their way to India.
Ga: Good finally he will forget about Rhea and Keya
M.P: yeah he will be trying to sort out his relationship with Kumud!!!
Ga laughs evilly

In Thailand
Ks: Want go and explore we have to spend one day and one night here so might as well.
Ku: Well… y not??
Ks: Cool then lets go!!!!!!
We see them having a good time laughing and looking at the sites.

Ka: Hi Nakul
Na: Hey
Ka: Find out what was wrong??
Na: Nope but they will be coming back soon but I did find out from dad that Kshitij didn't have any meetings at all on the trip.
Ka: Interesting.

In New York we see Rhea packing
Ke: Mum where are we going??
Rh: India
Ke: Why?
Rh: To go and see daddy
Ke: Wow I can't believe it I am going to meet dad for once can it be surprise!!
Rh: Yeah

In Thailand in a hotel room
Ku: I am hungry
Ks: Let's order room service.
Ku: Fine
They enjoy a meal together
Ks: Friends
Puts his hand out and Kumud shakes it

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Ika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#156

👏
marvellous...plz cont. soon

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hershii

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Posted: 19 years ago

#157

awesomee...i think teh mystery person will be garv...jus a guess...newayz plzz continue soon

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#158

Hey guys,
it will take me a little while to post the next part
Sorry!!!!!

Nikita

P.S They will be two parts together

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Vanita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#159

this story is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it took me 45 mins to read the whole thing from page 1!!! and i must say.... ur really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Shivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#160

She is not gud guli! she is TERRIFIC!

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