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Posted: 19 years ago

#121

Wow well thanks for the long continue soon but i have so much hwk to do it might take me some time i will try my best to put the next part up as soon as possible

sorry but it might take some time!!!!!!!

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Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: nikita_88
Wow well thanks for the long continue soon but i have so much hwk to do it might take me some time i will try my best to put the next part up as soon as possible

sorry but it might take some time!!!!!!!

It's ok, we understand...

That was AWESOME though!!!!!!!

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Shivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#123

we understand! continue soon though

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 27 Sorry for the long wait guys i hope you enjoy it!!!!!

Ga: What you have no right to say that to me ok?? No one told you to become part of this mess
Ks: I know but I care about Keya and Rhea ok even if you don't???
Ga: Oh yeah I forget
Ks: Look at least I didn't do what you done and I have seen you regret it everyday it's not to late yet!!!!
Ga: I don't regret it!!!!!! I am happy with what I have done and know one told you to butt into my matter!!!!!!!!!
Ks: Well I have a heart and the day you get one tell me!!!!!!!
Ga punches Kshitij
Ks: You see point proven so just admit what you did was wrong and you know what Rhea might forgive you!!!! I wouldn't but you know what she is a nice girl and her only mistake was falling in love with you!!!!!!!!!
Ks leaves
Ga cries!!!!!!!!!!!

Next Day
Everyone at Kapoor house Kkusum, Abhay, Arymaan and the kids plus Sid!!!!!
Ku: I guess mostly everyone here knows what is going on only mama, Sid, Abhay and Arymaan uncle don't
Ks: Well you can't be angry agreed??
All: Yep
Ka: We weren't
Ku: But you aren't an old adult!!!!!!
Sid: Who you calling old??
Ku: Uncle you know what I mean!!!!!!
Sid: Only joking
Na: Look both of them are to shy to tell you so we will tell you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pi: Kumud and Kshitij
Ka: Got Married
Adults shocked but happy

Ary: Really??
Kshitij nods
Kk: wow OMG really?? She is crying
Ku: yes mama we got married in Goa and Rahul my sweet brother let me!!!!!!
Ra: Don't put all the blame on me I didn't tell you to get married if you don't mind
Ka: Yeah don't be mean to Rahul he has got enough to deal with!!!!!!!! : P
Kk: Beta we have to have a party
Ks: We already have and we don't want another one right Kumud???
Ku: Yeah we don't want another one
Ary: Ok I don't mind that but Kkusum can I take Kumud to her house now??
Kk: Yes I think you should!!!
They have a small farewell
Ku hugs Kkusum, Rahul, Kali and Sid but not Abhay the sort of give each other a look
They sort of cry

Then we see Kumud entering Oberio House
She knocks over the rice and then she walks with the red stuff on her feet
The play the game with finding the ring in the pink water
Kshitij wins!!!!!!!!!!
Pi: Nice to have another girl in the house I actually get my way around this house now
Na: What a lie everything in this house is run by you and if we do something wrong you bite our heads off
Kumud laughs as they continue to argue!!!!!!
Ary: Ok stop ok relax guys who cares about who runs the house
Na: I do
Ary: Expect for you two no one so it doesn't matter

Kshitij and Kumud in their room
Ks hugs Kumud from the back
Ku: Kshitij
Ks: What now you can't tell me to not show you how much I love you everyone knows!!!!!!
Ku: But… but… I am busy
Ks: Fine be like that (he goes and sits on the bed and puts on a sad face)
Ku: Kshitij don't be sad please!!!!!!!
Kshitij ignores her
Ku: Kshitij
She sits next to him and kisses him on the cheek and they look at each other they are about to kiss on the lips and Kshitij phone rings it's Rhea!!

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#125

AWESOME!!!!! That was gr88888888888888!!!! cont. soon!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 28

Ks: Who called me now, spoilt the whole mood!!!!!!
Ku: What mood?
Ks: Very funny (looks at his phone) Excuse me!!!!!!!

Ks: Hi
Rhea (crying): Kshitij
Ks: What happened????
Rhea: I have been kicked out of my house and I have no where to go in America what do I do??
Ks: Oh no well just go to a hotel and I will send money to you as soon as I can!!!!!! Don't worry everything will be fine!!!!!!
Rh: Thanks Kshitij I don't what I would do without you if you weren't here I would be dead right now!!!!!!
Ks: Never say anything like ever again ok!!!!!
Rh: Ok I promise
Ks: Bye and cuts the phone

Ku: Who are you sending money to??
Ks: Just a client it's a business deal…
Ku: Oh
Ks: So where were we oh yes I remember
Kshitij grabs her
Ku: Kshitij put me down!!!!!!!!!!
Ks: Nope and kisses her
The scene fades away slowly

The next day
Ks: Kumud guess what??
Ku: What??
Ks: Where we are going for our honeymoon??
Ku: No where
Ks: Meaning
Ku: I have a lot of stuff to do here
Ks: What but I spent forever trying to get this tickets and I don't care what you say tomorrow we are going to America for our honeymoon
Ku: America
Ks: What?
Ku: I guessed where we are going
Ks: but I told you
Ku: Never mess with the best I mean I guessed before I did that I got you to tell me!!!!!!! So I didn't have to guess
(Sorry to anyone who doesn't get it)
Ks: Very clever but I have to have a business deal there anyway so I just though might as well make it a two in one trip!!!!
Ku: Oh so when are we leaving??
Ks: Tomorrow
Ku: So early!!!!!!!!
Ks: Yeah

Abhay and Kumud at a restaurant
Ab: Kumud beta I am so happy that you came!!!! Look before you say anything I would like to say is that I have always cared about you even before I knew you were my daughter and I have always thought of you as a daughter of mine since you and Kali have been such good friends…
Ku: Abhay uncle I came here to find a friend before I go any further and I have seen you like a father when you have been around Kali and I have seen what a sweet person you can be so can we start of as friends
She puts her hand forward and they shake it
We just see them having dinner and laughing and getting to know each other
Ab: Do you want to meet up again for dinner next week??
Ku: No I can't I am going to America tomorrow on my honeymoon
Ab: Oh well we will have to wait until you come back
Ku: Yep but thanks for a great evening!!!
Ab: Any day beta…

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Ika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#127

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plzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#128

Hi guys i am sorry for the long wait but i will be updating in a hour or so with two parts so i hope you enjoy them!!!!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#129

Part 29

Arymaan: Kumud beta you look happy looks like you enjoyed dinner
Ku: Yeah I did it was nice
Ary: That's good but you better go to bed you have an early flight tomorrow
Ku: Oh yeah good night papa!!!!

They are shown at the airport saying bye to everyone!!!!
Na: Bhai this is unfair I mean you are already taking Kumud bhaibi before she has even settled in
Ks: Don't worry she will be back before you even know it
Ra: Be back before the grand opening of the mall
Ku: I will be I won't miss it for the world!!!!!!!
Ka: Good
Ks: Let's go

They leave and everyone is waving at them and they are waving back!!!!!

On the plane
Ks: Why are you so worried??
Ku: Never been on a plane before I am really scared
Ks: Don't worry I am here with you
She smiles and they hold hands as they take off

Na: Hi Babz
Ka: Hey!!!!!
Na: Guess what???
Ka: I don't know
Na: We are getting married
Ka: I already knew that
Na: Ahh but you don't know when you see we are getting married at the end of the month they were going to surprise us but I over heard them talking but they don't know that I heard them
Arymaan calls Nakul and tells him to come home ASAP
Nakul and Kali go

Na: What happened papa?
Ary: You can't get married to Kali
Na in his head how funny, he looks at Kali and see is trying not to smile
Na: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Ka: Uncle what are you saying???
Ary: Ask your papa
Ka: What has papa done??
Ary: Just ask him!!!!!!!!!!
Abhay: Arymaan!!!!!! What you said you don't want another daughter in law
Ary: No I said I have taken away both your daughters now what are you going to do?
Ab: I am going to do nothing as they both are happy with your son's
Kk: Leave them both alone ok!!! Kali and Nakul they are only joking
Ary: Kkusum spoilt all the fun
Na: We knew you were joking!!!!
Ary: What!!!!!!!!!!
Ka: Yeah Nakul heard you three talking so we thought we would play along!!!!!
Kk: Looks like they beat you Arymaan!

Kk leaves
Ab: Kkusum wait let me give you a lift to your house
Kk: No it's ok Abhay I think I can get their alone
Ab: Look how long is this going to go on for
Kk: What going on??
Ab: Don't try and act dumb ok you know what I mean how long are you going to ignore me for??
Kk: Look I don't owe you anything so I can make my own decisions ok
Ab: Yeah but you have made up your mind before even listening to me. Shouldn't always believe what you see sometimes people see what they want to but not the truth
Kk: What truth that you didn't have an affair with Esha twice, you didn't get married to Tashu to annoy my married life, you didn't have any affair with Mahi because she was carrying your child Kali… go on tell me that what I said is a lie!!!!!!
Rahul and Kali hear that
Ab: The thing about Esha and Tashu are true and I am not going to deny that but I changed after my tumour and I never had any relationship with Mahi if I did after you "died" wouldn't I have married her to give Kali a mom, it isn't my fault that she had feelings for me!!!!!
Kk: Look Abhay when I married you I loved Sid and you knew the only reason I got married to you was to save your life, but then I found my old feelings for you I and started to trust and fall back in love with you but you know what I saw that night Mahi kissing you and you kissing her back
Ab: Yeah but you didn't see what happened before or after that!!!!!!!!!!!
Kk: Go on surprise me!!!!!!
Ab: Before I was looking for you and I thought I had lost you forever and then after the kiss I told Mahi to leave and I left to look for you!!!!!!!!
Kk leaves from there walks on the street having flashbacks and crying.

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 30

Kumud and Kshitij reach America (New York)
New York Sites

Ku: Wow it is so beautifully
Ks: Yeah I know I love it here
Ku: Yes shops great going to shop till my leg drops
Ks: please don't do that I would like a wife with legs
Ku: Kshitij
Ks: What???
Ku: Just give me your credit card you wait!!!!!
Ks: Do you think I am that stupid
Ku: Yeah of course

Rahul: Well it makes sense why dad doesn't talk to Tashu auntie.
Kali: OMG I can't believe that Mahi auntie is my mom in a weird odd way
Ra: Look I am going to find mom I think you need to look after Abhay Uncle
Ka: Ok but call me and tell me what is happening ok
Ra: Yes of course ok go now

Ra: Mom
Kk crying: Rahul beta you??
Ra: Why can't I come and see my mom when I feel like it???
Kk: No not like that beta just I am shocked to see you
Ra: I know why you are crying and I think Abhay uncle is telling the truth
Kk: What when did you know the truth??
Ra: I heard you earlier, go on forgive him I can still see you love him and papa can as well so go for it be happy give Kumud a dad, Kali a mom.
Kk: But what about you??
Ra: Look I know that you won't forget me and I know you will always be here for me!!!!!!!
Kkusum leaves
Rahul to himself: Go mom be happy and then calls Kali!!!!!

Abhay crying
Ka: Papa
Ab wipes his tears: Yes beta
Ka: Papa why are you crying?
Ab: Just sad that you will be going and leaving me at the end of this month
Ka: Don't lie ok I know you can't wait to get rid of me
Ab laughs: Yeah that's true
Ka: PAPA!!!!!!!!
Ab: Come here pagal of course I am going to miss you I mean you are my life I can't live without you
Ka: No need to worry now you have another daughter and mom
Ab: Yeah only if she forgives me
Ka: She will I know she will
Ab: I hope you are right

Ks: Kumud I have a meeting but as soon as that is over we can enjoy our honeymoon for the next few days and then I have one on the day before we leave the rest of the time I am yours
Ku: Oh so what do I do whilst you are gone??
Ks: What was your plan when we landed
Ku: Oh yeah!!!!!! Money???
Ks gives Kumud his credit card
Ku: See you had to give it too me
Ks: I know but I had no choice as I am going out and I felt bad leaving you bored. Then he kiss her on the forehead

Kumud gets a text from someone unknown telling her to go to Central Park. She thinks it's Kshitij so she decides to go.
Kshitij is at Central Park he is meeting Rhea and Keya
We see Kshitij playing with Keya on the swings and slides whilst talking to Rhea.
Kumud reaches Central Park. She is looking for Kshitij.
Rhea: Thanks for coming Kshitij I don't know what would have happened if you hadn't come you have to come, so you are ready for Friday??
Ks: Yes don't worry anyway I have to go Kumud is waiting for me.
Kumud sees Kshitij
Ks: Bye Keya
Keya: Bye dada
Ks hugs Rhea and the sees Kumud

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!
Any guess who the unknown person is??????

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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