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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

Thanx for all the comments guys!!
Hope you enjoy the next two parts

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 35

Ku: But when we get to India I am going to go home!
Ks: But what will everyone say??
Ku: Don't worry I will say I missed them all so much I have decided to spend some time with them!!!!
Ks: Ok then
They talk for a while!!

At Kapoor House
Arymaan: It's so good to see both of you so happy together!! I bet you Kumud will be even happier to see you together!!!!
Kk: Thanks Arymaan I hope you are right!!!!
Ab: Yep I hope you are right!!!!
Ra: Hi mom!! Abhay and Arymaan uncle!!!!!!
Kk: Hi beta
Ra: Where is Kali?
Kk: She is in her room
Ra: Ok I need to talk to her and Kumud and Kshitij are coming back tomorrow afternoon. The flight had a delay so they are in Thailand right now…
Ab: Thanks for telling us beta

Back in Thailand
Ks: I will sleep on the sofa you can sleep on the bed
Ku: No its ok you can sleep on the bed
Ks: No it's fine
He takes a pillow and sleeps of the coach

Kali's room
Ka: Hi Rahul!!
Ra: Hi so what's the big thing you wanted to tell me??
Ka: Oh well it was that I want you to find out what's happening between Kumud and Kshitij because I know that in New York something has happened but Kumud won't tell anyone and both of them have been lying to me!!!
Ra: Well I have to say it is none of your business because it is their personal life. I am not trying to be rude to you…
Ka: I know but I am worried about Kumud and Nakul knows what is going on!!
Ra: So ask him to tell you!!!
Ka: I have but he won't because he says Kshitij doesn't want anyone to know!!!!
Ra: Well he probably has a good reason don't worry everything will be fine between them.

The next day
Ku wakes up and sees Kshitij sleeping
She has some flashbacks
Then she puts the duvet on Kshitij (awwwwwww)
Then sits there and watches him for a while
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!

Na calls Kshitij
Ks wakes up
Ks: Hello (sleepily)
Na: Hi bhai
Ks: What??
Na: Well there was a message on your other phone from Rhea saying that she is coming to India and is sorry for everything that happened in New York!!!
Ks: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell her not to come stop her anything!!!!!!!!
Na: What do I do?? She has already bought her tickets and is about fly of any moment now…
Ks: Well just receive her from the air port and tell her to go back and book a hotel room for her or something ok??
Na: Ok!!!
Ks: Thanks make sure no one finds out the truth!!!
Na: Trust me they won't!! Bye.
Ku comes out of the bathroom
Ku: Who was that??
Ks: Nakul
Ku: Oh!! Anyway we need to get ready we need to be at the airport in an hour

We see Rhea and Keya leaving from New York whilst Kumud and Kshitij are leaving from Thailand.

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 36

Kumud and Kshitij reach India.
Rahul has come to the airport to receive them.
Ku: Hi bhai I didn't realise you were coming to pick us up!!
Ra: I know but Nakul said he had some important work to do and asked me to come instead…
Ks: Yeah sorry about that he is doing something for me!!
Ra: It's ok. So how was your trip?
Ku: Yeah it was really good!!!
Ra: Can't wait to see the pictures!!!
Ks: Well we didn't take any cause we forgot to take a camera…
Ra: Oh well!
Ku: Shall we go??

They reach Kshitij's house
Ks: Thanks for the lift Rahul catch you later.
Ra: Yeah ok bye man
Ks goes inside
Ku: Ok then bye
Ra: No wait I want to talk to you!!
Ku: So talk
Ra: What happened in New York??
Ku: Nothing
Ra: Look I know you are lying so you might as well tell me!!
Kumud sees Nakul coming
Ku: Look meet me in an hour at caf uno I will talk to you then.
Na: Hi Bhabhi Rahul
Ku laughs: Hi Nakul!! Finished Kshitij job??
Na: Half done don't tell him though!!
Ra: I got to go see you later.
Ku: Bye!!
Na: Bye!!
Ku: Shall we go in??
Na: Anything stopping us??

Ku: I am going to see Kali I will see you later!
Ks: Ok then bye
Nakul sees Kumud go somewhere
Na: Bhai where has Kumud gone??
Ks: To see Kali
Na: What?!?!?
Ks confused
Na: Well I am going to meet Kali right now
Ks shocked

Caf Uno
Ra: Kumud over here
Ku: Hi
Ra: Want a coffee?
Ku: No thanks
Ra: So you might as well start to explain…
Kumud starts to tell Rahul everything!!

Ks: Any idea where she went??
Na: Yeah she has gone to caf uno!!
Ks: Ok
Ks leaves to go to caf uno

Ra: What I am not going to leave that bas***d?? (Sorry about the swearing)
Ku: No Rahul you aren't going to do anything?
Ra: But… but...
Ku; Promise me you won't??
Ra: Fine I promise
Ku: Thanks look the only reason I told you is so that I need somewhere to stay without mama or papa finding out what has happened
Ra: Ok you can stay at my place.
Ku: Thanks you are the best brother anyone can ask for.
Yash is there and he sees Kumud
Ya: Kumud
Ku: Hi Yash
Ya: Enjoy your honeymoon??
Ku: Yeah it was great
Ya: Good I am happy for you!!
Yash joins Rahul and Kumud for coffee
Kshitij comes to the caf and sees Kumud talking to Yash but doesn't see Rahul as he is hidden by a wall

The End!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Vanita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

that was awesome!!!!!

U cont! Yay!!!!!!

Please cont soon!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

thanx for the comment Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#166

Hi

Look guys i want to know what your ideas are about what should happen next just private message them to me and i will see which ones i can add to the story and try and include most characters i have mentioned from the being so vishu, rikin, jyoti, sid!!! As i haven't mentioned them much!!

Thanx can't wait to read your ideas

Nikita

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girlie18

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

gr8 fan fic i av jus read it 4rm da start i luv it

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tisha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#168

👏
fabulous job
keep it up

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#169

thanx for all the comments guys the next part is coming up in a bit

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 37

Ks walks into the caf
Yash sees this
Ks phones rings
Ks: Hi Nakul what do you want??
Na: I can't get to the airport as I am with Kali and she won't let me go so you need to go.
Ks: What? Ok fine I will go. Bye
Ya: Kshitij
Ks: Hi Yash right??
Ya: Yeah
Ks: Hi Rahul, Kumud
Kshitij is relaxed after he sees Rahul in the corner
Ya: Why don't you join us?
Ks: I would love to but can't Nakul can't do any job I give him properly so I need to go and sort it out!!
Ks: Bye
Yash notices that Kumud and Rahul didn't say anything to Kshitij and Rahul looked really angrily at him.
Kshitij leaves realising that Kumud has told Rahul what has happened.
Kshitij is thinking on the way to the airport how to talk to Rahul and how to make him believe that is not his fault.

Na: Hi bhai I forgot to tell you that you needed to drop them of at hotel Hilton!
Ks: Oh yeah thanks
Kali hears this gets worried
Na: Hi babes
Ka: Hey!! Who were you talking to??
Na: Kshitij
Ka: Oh! Who does he need to drop of?
Na: Some clients
Ka: Ok so you want go and watch the movie??
Na: Yep

Ks is at the airport
Rhea sees him
Ks: Hi
Ke: Hi (Hugs him)
Rh: What's wrong?
Ks: you shouldn't have come I mean I would have sorted things out with Kumud!!
Rh: I felt really bad and plus I think she needs to know the truth and I think I will tell her as I don't want to have any problems with her as you mean to much to me and I don't want to lose you because I have problems with your wife.
Ks: Ok then I will tell you when you can meet her!! So whilst you are here can you make sure she doesn't see you me and Nakul will come and visit you when we can.
Rh: Ok I promise
Ks: Thanks so I lets go I will drop you off at your hotel!!
They are leaving the Airport when Harry (Nakul's friend) sees Kshitij and Rhea together laughing and playing with Keya!!

Ra: So do you want get your stuff and then come to my place or do you want me to come with you?
Ku: Can you come with me.
Ra: Of course I am always here for you!!

Ks drops off Rhea but Keya has fallen a sleep in the car so Kshitij helps rhea take her up to the room!!
Nakul and Kali come to the hotel they are at and Nakul doesn't realise it is Hotel Hilton until they get out of the car!
Kshitij leaves the hotel with out Kali and Nakul seeing him by this time Keya has woken up and is hungry so Rhea brings her down to the restaurant to eat!!

Kshitij gets home sees Kumud packing
Ks: Hi where are you staying??
Ku: Look I don't need to tell you!!
Ks: I know you don't but 2mo it is Nakul's birthday so it would be nice if you were her to help with the party as he is your friend!
Ku: Ok I will be
Ks goes to the living room Rahul is there, Rahul gets up and is about to leave

The End!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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