[MG] FF~ In Love With Enemy(I) updt new thrd?

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

Loveeeee the part.

Maneet r confused!!

Continue soonnnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#462

REET AMAZING!
Their emotions, pain and love is so evident! Please update soon as I know u mentioned u have the part! Your on a roll sweetheart and I am so happy! This is really, really good!

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#463

Thnx 4 updating the last 2 parts!!

That hug was...powerful..☺️..the emotions running high, the situation they wer in, n u so aptly described their unrest n yearning for each other.

So it's very awkward between them.....n at the same time they hav become much closer.😳

But nw Dev knws she's kidnapped, wat will happen??..😲...i loved the way she looked stright n sed sry ONLY 4 the hug😆

Reet, stay happy..yr an AWSOME writer👏👏..believe me wen i say...my stomach was in knots reading yr FF from beginning...n with every new part...👍🏼

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annie03

@annie03

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#464

loved it...maan loosing control...wonder wat he's gonna do to geet now.....out of sunaina's reaction i hope she's nt in lov with maan....i hope maaneet get togehter soon without any prob created by hr if she's in love with maan.....

lovely upd...do cont asap

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ankita

@Ankita_88

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#465

jaldi update kar......m waiting impatiently...

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#466

promo

Chief couldn't sit there anymore........he stood up with a jerk .....as her moan passed through his ears ............he was about to say something ...stop her .......but stopped himself......he panted .........but couldnt speak a word.....

he glanced at geet .........whose eyes were fixed on his.....her innocent eyes were shimmering with pain......a drop rolled on from an eye ........he couldnt see it ...he tried to tear the gaze from her but just couldn't ........geet just stared at him......without a single blink........he hated her eyes.......he hated.....cause each time he looked into them he felt helpless......he felt them accusing .......

Was she complaining ......was she expressing her pain......or trying search within chief's soul........or trying to see if her pain is affecting him or not ........what was it ...........or may be it was everything ......that his eyes were searching for ..............

is there anyone to read on ...?

Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#467

Reet, you have the next part ready, right?

SO please update😳

This promo is now making all the more curious.

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#468

awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..loved it..

OMG maan came on rit time n saved geet and stupid geet saying sorry for hug and not for her did to kill him...bt its okie..after all he is criminal..m loving this maan..more of passion,compassion,his love for geet........wanted them to realise soon..donno how the story will progress after that wen maan is going to remove his mask....😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Simply amazing....pls continue soon!!!

love ya tonnn for such wonderful update!!!