donno wat geet is thinking and wy she is staring maan..did she realised bout her feeling...wat mann will do as he surely not abli to control his feeling....GOSH!!!!!!!!1pls update soon if u ready wid update....
pls pls pls dear...we r waiting😉
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Patrama Prem ~ A Gosham SS ~ Chapter 3 on pg 2
HUM JEET GAYE 12.9
Originally posted by: shivangi783
I am there, I am there😊Palkein bichayein waiting for you to update😳(I know this was cheesy but not able to think-please update)
Reet ....... i dnt knw wat to say m amazed👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 .....
first of all thnx for giving us long long updates nd that to so frequently 🤗🤗🤗
you knw in previous part when i red sum goons kidnapping geet i though its chief 😲but after reading the next line i was sure this cant nt be chief he wud nt treat geet this miserably ....the best part was when geet hugged maan ...❤️❤️❤️
Adi knws everything ,why did he call the moment romantic did he realize geet effects his chief ... I love it when adi try too hard to analyze chief but always fails😆 😆😆 ..... that was strange nd funny geet apologized for hugging him but not for leaving him in half death condition😆 😆 😆 😆
I really want to leave a big comment telling you how much i liked each nd evry thng in update ....but bliv me m helpless😭 ......2mro ma xam will get over nd then i'l leave for kerla for a week ...so till then dnt 4get to pm me once i'l cum back i'l read all ur update nd bliv me gonna leave ....bigger comment then ur update ..........😊
In all that i wont 4get to mention this dark story is stupendous👏👏👏👏👏👏................ nd standing ovation 👏👏👏👏👏👏to you for writing this wonderful story u r awesum .......👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.
She woke up with the rude touch of cold water splashed on her face ......she opened her eyes to find chief standing in front of her with an empty bottle in his hand ....she blinked her eyes to confirm what she is seeing ..but it was not a night mare ..very much happening in her real life...
Take her inside.............. throwing the order to aadi and sunaina who was standing behind him he disappeared in the thin air......
As she got inside.....well pushed inside by sunaina ........she found it was not that garage .....but like some deserted farmhouse ......she pursed her lips...and sighed.....her life has turned into a complete mess......
Geet gaped around her .....looks like people used to live here someday .....there is one room with attached bathroom....that must be kitchen she thought looking at a closed door........and a big dining room connecting the other rooms in front of which she was standing ....... there is a fireplace at one corner of the dining room ...........
Hey ......look we don't have the whole day for you ....just get inside.......su barked at her ....pushing her ruthlessly inside the room .....geet was about to fall on the floor while aadi helped her to stand........geet looked at him ....and thanked him through eyes.........
Aadi silently glared at su .....while su just ignored.........geet didn't understand why she is being so much rude .........
Are you okay ...? aadi asked her ........
Geet nodded a little in reply ..........
At that moment chief entered there .........and witnessed aadi and geet's conversation ......
A ....she is not our guest ..!!! he remarked.....while taking his place near the fire place.....
Sunaina gave aadi a meaningful smile....while aadi just ignored her ........and went to chief taking out a knife in his hand.......
sunaina was little confused......what is it ...? why is aadi behaving so weird .........?
While sunaina was busy with aadi .......Geet was gazing HIM ......he has become more rude than before.....he should be.......this was not unexpected.........she watched him to set fire in the fire place ....with his wounded hand.....he was having a big trouble to lift his hand..his gesture said her so.......she noticed his eyes kinking while pushing a log in the fire.....but that was just for some seconds and again as usual....after that he sat down on the floor...leaning his back on the wall with eyes closed.........he was just wearing a black tank top .......geet noticed dried blood in his shoulder .. luminosity of the fire reflected on his bare shoulder ....his fair skin was beaming against the black tank top .....geet realised she was just checking him out .....her cheeks flushed...
I will do it myself............ chief tried to stop him ..
Please sir....aadi stopped him by a hush tone ...its my duty ...
Chief glanced at him and didn't say anything more.....his eyes fall on geet who was staring at him.......her eyes caught his....his eyes locked within her unexplicable gaze....she didn't blink...neither he could..........they remained the same .....only the fire in the fireplace witnessed the transmission of unspoken language......they themselves didn't know what they said......just coudnt tear it ......he had almost forgotten what aadi doing by his side.....
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..........!!! a groan of pain skipped from his mouth and followed a rattling noise of a piece metal hitting the wooden floor ...................
her eyes winced with that....he didn't miss that .... .........
Blood sprouted out from his hand...and stained the wooden floor....
Geet stared at his hand......which was totally drenched in blood..... blood...........wound .......and me..........bound to happen..!! ......she closed her eyes thinking about the moment when she saw him dropping on the floor unconscious ....soaked in blood.....after she had hit on his head ....
Oye .......challl......suddenly a harsh voice made her chain of thoughts break..........sunaina dragged geet.......that made geet to tear the gaze from chief ...........sunaina dragged her to a corner of the room and made her sit there .....while geet was silent and obeyed each order of hers.....
But sunaina was not happy with her silence .....she couldn't rub off the scene of chief and geets hugging from her mind.........she tied geet's hands with a rope ......she tied the knot so ruthlessly that a faint moan escaped from geet's mouth ........
sunaina smirked at that .....
And chief opened his eyes...... he glanced at them..................
Sunaina harshly tightened the knot .... ....causing geet to bit her lips.........to bear the pain.....sunaina was not satisfied .....she tied up her legs too........causing geet to lay in the ground helplessly ...another moan of pain escaped from her lips ...as sunaina smashed the fingers of her hand under her shoe.....may be accidentally or may be intentionally ........
Chief couldn't sit there anymore........he stood up with a jerk .....as her moan passed through his ears ............he was about to say something ...stop her .......but in stead stopped himself......he panted .........but couldn't speak a word.....
he glanced at geet .........whose eyes were fixed in his.....her innocent eyes were shimmering with pain......a drop rolled on from an eye ........he couldn't see it ...he tried to tear the gaze from her but just couldn't ........geet just stared at him......without a single blink........he hated her eyes.......he hated.....cause each time he looked into them he felt helpless......he felt them accusing .......
Was she complaining ......was she expressing her pain......or trying to search within chief's soul........or trying to see if her pain is affecting him or not ........what was it ...........or may be it had everything ......that his eyes were searching for ............
there was someone else who noticed this unspoken language expressed through their eyes.....that was aadi.......he didn't miss........what made chief get up from there ....what made chief stop and pant ......what made chief hypnotized to the eyes of that woman who tried to kill him few days ago........he was suspecting ....there is something more then that he knew.....
Chief couldn't stay there anymore.....he made his way out and took a seat in the furthest corner of the balcony .....
Aadi came after him ...while sunaina preferred to seat beside the fireplace......
Aadi watched chief from a distance.......HE gripped the railing .....and looked outward to search something there ....what was missing inside him.....some answers .......he had not a single explanation of the chain of incidents taking place.....he knew why he came outside....he had known that his inner self cant see his enemy in pain....but he had no explanation why this is happening ......he hated this uncanny feelings........he felt things going formidable ....but he couldn't decide what should he do.......
Aadi reached beside him and sat down by Him .....both of them sat still for some time......then aadi broke the silence ....
Sir......lets do the dressing of your shoulder ......
Which made chief realize he had forgotten the wound....
Pain doesn't affect me anymore......chief replied....
Aadi had an answer of this .....like "but the girl affects you .." but he remained mum ....the time hasn't come....
Instead he chose the other set of words .......
"But it does affect geet"
Chief looked up at aadi with stunned eyes.. ......
Aadi concealed a smile....he knew what he must have thought .....he had thought his pain affects geet .......
"I mean pain affects geet ...." aadi rectified
Chief remained mum for sometime......then spoke up ....
what 's wrong with sunaina....?
Aadi scoffed ....... "i thought you can see the unseen sir..but here everything is just open to you..".....the remark came out of reflex..
Chief glared at his audacity ..he cocked his brows .... aadi had started crossing his limits.......while aadi lowered his eyes knowing he had gone too far....and said.....sorry sir .....but I was just asking ,.......that..... don't you really know ...or you don't want to know......
Chiefs eyes become calm again ....he knew what made aadi say so.....
I thought you like sunaina.....
there is nothing bounded feelings will always be reciprocated...........aadi replied vacantly ..while playing with a little stone in his hand.....
Stop her aadi ...i didn't like that ...
She wont listen to me sir.....you have to stop her ...aadi said as a matter of fact
That made chief mum again ....
Sir......these women are really incomprehensible species ....but as far I know.....i want to ask you something .....does geet need all these things right now when she had been through the worst incident of her life......she is not like ours.....she hasn't been trained like us to bear pain......she is a mere ordinary girl......but what amazes me.....she is still bearing it....
Aadi ....... chief uttered the name in such way that meant enough to stop aadi......
Sorry sir.......
A .....A.....come fast A.......sunaina's impatient voice from inside stopped the conversation .....
Aadi glanced at chief and got up .....he was about to go inside...when chief spoke up...
Aadi .....you can do whatever you think right.......he paused for a second ....i mean...
I got it sir.....
aadi stopped him and went inside...as soon as he got inside...sunaina rushed to him with a nervous face.......she dragged her in a side and whispered...
Aadi tried to say ...but she stopped.....
leave it ...listen.....rishi had called up .....big mess has come up......yash has been caught ...
Adi : Whattttt.....?? cops? Aadi became tensed in one second....
Su : Yes......he managed to call up rishi ...thus we got the piece of info.....
Adi: But how.....?how cops got him ...??do they ...??
Su : aree...no.....cops have arrested him along with makdi's gang ......not as a part of ours ...
Adi : ohh.....he let out a small sigh of relief ......okay we got to go...but before that ....he glanced at the corner of the room where geet lay helplessly with silent lips and vacant eyes...
Before sunaina could stop him he had already reached there and stooped over geet to open her up.....
Wait ....what the hell are you doing ...?sunaina irritatedly said....
Aadi stood up and faced her....i m releasing her ...
No ....certainly not.....u wont do such thing ....
Aadi took a deep breath and looked straight in her eyes......... if you are forgetting let me remind you I m your senior....and ....he paused and stressed on his last set of words......you cant order me.... do as I say and .....release her .....
This rendered sunaina speechless ........aadi never talked with her in this manner ...and that too for this girl..... she took quite a time to pull herself together .....she still cant believe it .....aadi ....aadi who was always by her...taking care of her....protecting her ...... talking with her in this way ...and that too infront of this girl....what has gotten into him ....
While aadi was keenly watching each change of expression on her face
Don't u hear me......? aadi asked crossing his arms against his chest ......making sunaina stare at him with stunned eyes......aadi's straight face didn't give her any consolation ....she lowered down her eyes......
She gulped down a lump that suddenly started rising up and mumbled..... but chief.....
leave that on me....don't waste time and release her...we have got much important works to do than fussing over this little matter ....
Geet was so silent while all this going on somebody might consider her deaf...but she was not .....she was watching their faces as emotions flickering in their eyes......which might have gone unnoticed by each other ....being third person she noticed everything ......though she didn't understand fully ...but she watched.........
she glanced thankfully at aadi to after she was able to sit after much difficulty due to pain everywhere in her body ....to which aadi just nodded and indicated her to relax.....
They zoomed out to chief to give him the piece of the information ....
Gosh .....that's a bad sign ........chief exclaimed ....anyway cummon lets go.....
No chief ....we will handle this ...you take rest ... ...aadi stopped him ....
No no .....i m fine .....let go ...he was about to walk out when...
Sir.....please .....aadi stressed on the last part ...he blocked his way ..
Chief looked in his eye... u take rest .....and geet ....he left his sentence unfinished ......chief contracted each of his muscle fibers with the name.....
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hours passed.....none of them make any effort to break the silence as their minds were talking volumes.....
geet was sitting in the dark...literally ......her future seemed doomed to her along with the fire in the fire place .....
she rose as the room got brightened with the luminosity of the fire again ...she noticed him firing it up....
after that he neared her and dropped a packet beside her.. the smell of which said it contained food.....he avoided looking at her ..neither spoken a single word......
geet watched him going out ........after some time she followed his way and reached the balcony .....
he sat there stretching his legs looking outward .....
she neared him and stood next to him.........and dropped her torn dupatta on his lap ....
that startled him ....and made him aware of her presence .
what the hell...!!
its a scarf ....not hell.....
what do you want ? he was rudely short ...
like u dropped the food I needed....i dropped the scarf u need.....she paused .....to bandage your wound ...
I don't need anything ...he threw it away with his good left hand.....
I didn't throw ur food....she retorted
That's upto you ...he didn't want to go to further argument ....
Geet fetched the scarf again and this time stretched it to him .....
Tie your wound...dont show my anger on your hand....the bleeding wont stop if you don't do it .....
Ohhh......being concerned...huh ..!! he scoffed ...
Geet stood there pursing her lips.....A knows.....but he was so kind to me....everything so confusing ....
She again stretched out the piece of cloth .......take it ..
He avoided to respond her......
What are you trying to show by doing this..ur stupid arrogance ??geet couldn't take it any more......... "u saved me from the goons...and I ....
Almost killed me.......................his voice was heavy .........while his gaze was lost far away .......
Geet was mum .....there was something in his voice ....she couldn't let out a single sound...just bent down to keep the scarf beside him and disappeared inside....
turning He looked at her trailing way and then on the scarf .............he caught handful of the scarf and heaved a sigh .........he sat there like that for some time.........
Why m I being such dramatic .......... may be she is right I should tie it up....
he thought and tried putting it around his wound ....but couldn't do so by one hand...as he couldn't grip it ..each time he was trying it was slipping away ... irritated he threw away it
but it didn't reach the floor......as A fair hand caught it ....he looked up to find her again ....
she sat beside him ...............and kept a bowl between them....she tore a piece from the scarf and soaked in the hot water kept in it ...and reached out touch his wound...but before she could so it he caught her hand with an iron clasp.............
her shocked eyes searched in his eyes......which flickered in anger .....
stay away ....!!!!!! do you hear me......????????????
he glared at her ...
he threw her away with a single thrust ...causing her poorly fall on the ground ....
her elbow had hit the floor badly .....her eyes welled up in pain.....but she sent back the tears and she again came close to him....
udhar chuka rahi hu ...............................mouthed the whisper................I m just trying to repay ..
Ohh....concerns are payable amount ...?..i didn't know that before... he said sarcastically ...
She ignored his words and again tried to reach out for his wound ....
This time he lost it .....he clasped her shoulder by both of his hand and pulled her to himself with a sudden jerk.........his eyes were burning ....and the temperature was rising with each moment on his voice......
What do you want to prove ...? haan geet ? that you are repaying my debts by this.....? he searched into her eyes.......that used to speak volumes to him ...
Tumhari izzat ...aur yeh patti jo tum karna chahti ho .....dono ek barabar ....??????? haan geet ...?you are comparing your virginity...your dignity with this ...?
U have already taken it .............the word was on the tip of her tongue ....but she kept mum ...to her it was everything ....it was him who first touched her...kissed her and.....she sighed ....she didn't want to bring that again ......
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this little exertion and using of the wounded hand caused more bleeding .....
Its bleeding ..................................she whispered ....... she couldn't see it like that anymore..
Ohh really ....is it ....? where were your this concern when you had left me in that garage .....wasnt that bleeding ? ....haan geet ??? he narrowed his eyes to search the answer on her face...
but she had no answer....a lone tear escaped from her eye......how will he know she was in no peace after she had left him there .....
She touched the blood sprouting from his shoulder .....and again said.....its bleeding ....she didnt know why she couldnt watch him like this............
chief didn't know pain was becoming evident in his voice...he was unaware of everything ...he had no explanations ...but it was happening .....if anybody else would have done the same .....he wouldn't have cared.....but it was geet ....he cared....
He was hurt ....and was still unaware of it ........
If aadi wouldn't have come there I would have died....ur wish would have come true...his voice oozed hatred mixed with sourness ......he was so excited he didn't notice he had taken aadi's name in stead of codename....he released her out of frustration ....
A drop rolled on from her eyes she had nothing to say ...she knew she was wrong ...but what he had done was also wrong ....may both of them was wrong ..
She lifted the cloth and started wiping the wound...he didn't protest this time ...just kept his eyes closed leaning on the wall..............
Without a single word she wrapped the bandage around his wound ......when she just tied the knot .....it had hurt his wound again .......
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ......!!! he jerked up holding her hand .......and that made her land on his lap .....
Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet
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