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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoooooooome...
superb..
fab..
loved it.....
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyy kumari ..........🤗after long long tym u cum n updt dis ff
it was Awesome updt...!!!!!!
lovely SG scene so cuteeeeeee..............loved it
n our hero won d match ........😍
very well written ...............superbbb
but precap.............😡
cont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ria 🤗

yar too good
awsome part totally loved it
sajan were to cute
and i really loved when uday came singing tere mast mast do naan😆
hate sheena
precap sounds intresting yar
cont soon
love
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Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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welcome back Ria ...was missing u n ur updates too much thnx for the pm n it was superb update plss cont soon ...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
@all- thanks friends for giving such encouraging comments......im gonna update shortly!!😛
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CHAPTER- 9 Part- A

SPECIAL FRIENDSHIP

It was nearly 10pm. Dia and uday were fighting for the TV remote, while gunjan was with dadi, in her room. She sat down on floor, with her head in dadi's lap, and she softly caressed gunjan's hairs.

G- pata hai dadi, samrat itna achha basketball khelta hai na, ki uske aage achhe achhon ki bhi nahi chalti hai!

Dadi- beta, ye ladka sirf tera dost hi hai ya usse….kuchh zyada?

Gunjan moved her head from dadi's lap and looked at her in confusion.

G- matlab?

Dadi- mere puchhne ka matlab ye hai ki, tu use dost se zyada….

G- aisa kuchh bhi nahi hai dadi. Wo mera bahut achha dost hai.

Dadi- itna achha dost, ki tu jabse college se aayi hai, tabse uski hi baatein ki jaa rahi hai! maine to kabhi kahin aisi dosti nahi dekhi!

G- (blushes) dadi main sach keh rahi hun. Aur waise bhi, aaj to saara college sirf uski hi baatein kar raha tha. Uski wajah se hi to humara college match jeeta hai na!

Dadi- ye bhi sahi hai!

Meanwhile, dia came in the room.

D- gunjan, tumne kitchen mein kuchh rakha hai kya?

G- matlab?

D- abhi main aur dodo hall mein the, hume kuchh jalne ki smell…

G- hey bhagwaan! Maine doodh rakha tha…..wo jal gaya!

Gunjan quickly ran towards the kitchen. Dia came and sat with dadi.

Dadi- dia, ek baat bata, gunjan aajkal kuchh badli badli nahi lagti tujhe?

D- kya matlab??

Dadi- pehle ki gunjan, aur aaj ki gunjan mein kitna farak hai! Morena ki gunjan to kuchh bhi bolne se pehle sau baar sochti thi, aur ye Mumbai ki gunjan to bina ruke itna kuchh bol gayi, aur wo bhi kisi ladke ke baare mein!

Dia smiled to herself.

D- dadi, wo kya hai na, gunjan par kisi ka bahut asar hua hai!

Dadi- kiska?

D- a…jab mujhe pata chal jayega, to main bata dungi aapko!

Dadi- are par…

D- ok bye good night dadi!

Dia quickly ran from there.

Dadi- mujhe to lagta hai ye saare bhai behen hi pagal ho gaye hain!

After some time, gunjan took a glass of milk and came in her room. Uday, dia and dadi were asleep, but gunjan did not feel sleepy. She took a book, sat on bed and began reading it.

Suddenly, she felt someone near her window. Her room was quite cool due to AC, but she started sweating, due to fear! Wondering who could enter in her room this way, she slowly got up from her bed, and walked 2-3 steps back.

"ye….is wakt…..zarur koi chor hoga!" thinking this, she took a vas from her table, went near the window, and as soon as the person jumped in her room through window, she quickly hit the person's head with that vas.

"ouuchhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the person screamed.

Gunjan opened her eyes wide, and was shocked to see samrat!

"chashmish ye kaunsa tareeka hai welcome karne ka??" he asked, caressing his head.

"ye kaunsa tareeka hai andar aane ka samrat??" gunjan asked angrily.

"achha, ek to mujhe chot lagi hai, aur tum ho ki….mujhe hi daant rahi ho! how mean is that!" samrat said innocently.

"gunjan??? tu chillayi kyun?? Tu theek hai na??" dadi asked knocking on the door.

Gunjan and samrat looked towards the door, fearing what to speak to dadi.

G- main dadi ko bolti hun ki tum aaye ho!

S- very bad chashmish, tum apni dadi se apne best friend ko marvaaogi kya??

Gunjan looked at his innocent face, and then towards the door, thinking what to say.

"gunjan tu theek hai na? kuchh bol to?" dadi asked.

"a….dadi….main….theek hun wo…..actually….maine ek….cockroach dekh liya tha bathroom mein!" gunjan took a breathe of relief, while samrat made a disguised face hearing her weird answer.

"pagal ladki! Ek cockroach se darr gayi! Chal, so ja!" dadi left from there.

Gunjan turned and looked at samrat, who was quite angry.

S- tumne mujhe cockroach kaha??

G- are wo maine aise hi keh dia…..jaldi mein. Aur tumhe yahan is tarah aane ki kya zarurat thi?? Is ghar mein main door hai.

S- lekin tum shayad bhool rahi ho, ki is ghar mein tumhari dadi bhi hain, jo agar mujhe yahan dekh leti, to galat samajh leti, uday bhi hai, jo tumhe aur mujhe kabhi akele nahi chhodta!

G- lekin…..tum yahan aaye hi kyun ho??

"ab….kya bataun chashmish! Dekho na, ek pyaara bechara ladka, apni special friend ke saath apni victory celebrate karna chahta tha, lekin jab wo uske kamre mein aaya, to us special friend ne use vas se maar kar uska welcome kia!" samrat said, making an innocent face and he sat on the bed.

"sorry samrat…..zyada chot to nahi lagi na??" gunjan asked apologetically.

"ab tum itne pyaar se sorry bologi to…..bade se bada chot bhi dard nahi karega!" he smiled.

"mujhe laga ki…..koi chor aaya hai"

"wow! Chashmish, agar chor tumhare room mein aayega bhi, to use is room mein koi treasure nahi mil jayega! Kyunki tumhare is room mein siwaaye books ke mujhe kuchh dikh hi nahi raha hai!" samrat said, looking all around the room.

"meri books hi mera treasure hain samrat, jaise tumhare liye tumhara guitar, tumhari bike, tumhara basketball, aur…."

"aur girls!!" he smiled widely.

Gunjan made an angry face at this answer.

"just kidding! Lekin jaanti ho mere paas sabse bada treasure kya hai?"

"kya?"

"tum. Meri special friend, chashmish!" he smiled, and softly clicked her nose. "aur isliye, main apni is special friend ke saath aaj ki victory celebrate karne aaya hun!" he added.

Gunjan smiled. Samrat took out a chocolate from his pocket and gave it to gunjan.

"ye chocolate maine apni special friend ke liye bacha ke rakha tha!"

"bacha ke rakha tha matlab?

"mujhe chocolates itne pasand hain ki unhe dekh kar main resist nahi kar pata….jis tarah ladkiyan mujhe dekh kar resist nahi kar paati hain!"

Gunjan again frowned at this. She felt jealous whenever samrat spoke about other girls.

"isliye main ye chocolate badi mushkil se tumhare liye bacha ke laya hun. Jaldi se kha lo, warna ye wala chocolate bhi main kha jaunga!" samrat spoke.

"waise…..itne kam chocolate se mera mann bhi nahi bharega!" gunjan said innocently.

"matlab??"

"mujhe bhi chocolates bahut pasand hain!" she smiled.

"chalo, kahin to hamari pasand similar hai!" he smiled. "but abhi to tumhe isse hi apna mann bharna hoga….kyunki mere paas aur chocolates nahi hain. Lekin promise, next time main tumhare liye do chocolates laaunga!"

Gunjan smiled and ate that chocolate.

"pata hai, ghar pe kisi ko nahi pata hai ki main tumhare saath hun, except nupur." Samrat said.

"lekin tum yahan is tarah kyun aaye?? Agar uncle aunty ko pata chal gaya toh??" gunjan asked fearfully.

"relax chashmish, dad to waise bhi half of the year out of town rehte hain. Aur nupur mom ko sambhaal leti hai!"

"tum bhi na samrat!"

Gunjan finished eating her chocolate, while samrat kept on looking at her beautiful face.

"samrat, ek baat kahun?"

"permitted!"

"tum sheena se….itne naraaz ho ki usse baat karna hi chhod dia? Kyun samrat?"

Hearing sheena's name, samrat became angry, but he did not let gunjan to see his anger.

"bolo na samrat? wo to tumhari best friend hai…."

"hai nahi, thi. Aur chashmish plz. Is wakt mera mood uske baare mein baat karne ka bilkul nahi hai. So hum kuchh aur baat karein?"

Gunjan thought for a while, then she agreed, and changed the topic.

They spent a good time together, and then samrat left for home, obviously through window!

Next day, dia and benji were sitting hands in hands in canteen, when samrat came to them.

S- guys tum dono mein se kisi ne chashmish…..

B- (getting up angrily) yaar main jab bhi dia se pyaar bhari baatein karta hun, tu beech mein kyun aa jata hai?

S- mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tumhare aur dia ke romance ko kharab karne ka. Bas ye puchhna tha ki chashmish kahan hai?

Benji moved close to samrat, and searched something around his chest. Dia smiled.

B- yahin hogi!

S- yahan mera dil hai!

D- to gunjan to tumhare dil mein hi hogi na!

S- (blushes) stop it guys! Batao na chashmish kahan hai?

D- as usual, library!

Samrat reached in library, and saw gunjan writing something. He went and sat beside her on a chair.

S- kya likh rahi ho chashmish??

G- tumhare liye notes bana rahi hun, taaki tum mid-term exams mein achhe marks score kar sako.

Samrat was quite shocked, and looked at gunjan with wide eyes.

G- aise kyun dekh rahe ho? maine kuchh galat kaha kya?

S- chashmish, tumhe lagta hai ki ye notes padh kar main achhe marks laaunga? I mean, maine aajtak hardly koi book padhi hogi……aur ye notes to….

G- haan samrat! tum ye notes padh kar kaafi achha score kar sakte ho. Mujhe pata hai.

S- agar tumhe aisa lagta hai, to shayad tum sahi ho!

G- tum pareshan mat ho samrat, agar kabhi koi problem ho, to mujhse puchh lena!

S- (slowly) agar problem nahi bhi hogi to bhi main problem create karunga…isi bahane tumhare saath aur time spend karne ko milega!

G- kya kaha tumne?

S- a…I mean…ki tum jo kahogi…wo karunga.

G- (smiles) good!

"hey guys!" sheena came to them and sat beside samrat. He angrily turned towards gunjan. Sheena was hurt by this.

G- kya hua samrat?

S- chashmish, agar tumhe sheena se baat karni hai to karo, mujhe koi interest nahi hai.

Samrat got up and was about to leave, when sheena blocked his way.

SH- its ok samrat. Agar meri vajah se tumhe problem hai to main hi chali jaati hun.

G- sheena……

Sheena goes from there. Samrat sat down on his chair. Gunjan looked at him.

G- tum usse kyun naraaz ho samrat? aakhir usne aisa kya kar dia hai?

S- ye tum mujhse puchh rahi ho?? Usne jo kuchh bhi kiya tha, wo tum achhe se jaanti ho, fir bhi tum ye sawaal puchh rahi ho?

G- main maanti hun ki usne galti ki hai, lekin iska matlab ye to nahi hai na ki tum usse baat hi karna chhod do!

S- chashmish, usne itna kuchh kiya, uske baad bhi tum uski hi side le rahi ho?? I don't believe this.

G- usne galti ki hai, lekin tum bhi to kam nahi ho na? usne tumse maafi bhi maangi, fir bhi tum usse naraaz ho? kya fayeda naraaz hoke samrat?

S- you're right, usse naraaz hone ka bhi koi fayeda nahi hai, kyunki uski mentality kabhi nahi badlegi.

G- agar uski jagah main hoti samrat, tab bhi tum aisa kehte?

S- agar tum uski jagah hoti, to tum kabhi wo galti nahi karti, jo usne jaanbujhkar ki.

G- fir wahi zid? tum samajhte kyun nahi ho?

S- tum kyun nahi samajhti chashmish?? Agar ek baat trust kho jaye, to us trust ko waapas paana bahut mushkil ho jaata hai. aur tum us sheena ke liye mujhse lad rahi ho?

G- main tumse ladai nahi kar rahi samrat, main bas tumhe samjha rahi…..

S- mujhe nahi samajhna kuchh bhi.

G- samrat…..

He went from there, leaving gunjan upset. She quietly sat on her chair.

G- (to herself) samrat ko samjhana kitna mushkil hai….lekin jo bhi ho, mujhe usse baat karni hi hogi. Main sheena aur uski dosti itni asaani se nahi tootne de sakti.

PRECAP- samrat asks gunjan to help him in the preparation of nupur's wedding.

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Samrat and gunjan talk about sheena.

i hope this update was upto the mark!!!😛
plz do comment nd hit the like tab!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ria 🤗

yar this was too cute
totally loved this update
seriously to awsome
i loved the sajan room seen
samrat is to adorebal especially when he was like tumne mujhe cockruch kaha😆
i love this ff so much
but gunjan should stop talking about sheena so much
anyways cont soon
cant wait for next part
love
tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear i ws w8ing for ur updt
m glad dat u finally upt.
it ws superb,mindblwing.
totaly outstanding.
luv d part to d core.
luv all sajan scenes.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update, Ria........Sheeeeeeennnnnnnnnaaaaaaaa........why does she have to be such a pest??? Do update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is one of my fav ff...
awesome update
cont soon
Edited by saduf - 14 years ago

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