SaJan FF~~Madly In Love With You~~ (dis-continued) - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.
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i hateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee sheenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa she want samrat friend again then she want again to seprat sajan i hope samrat gunjan ki baat mana say inkar kar dhay

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heyyyyyyyyyyy Ria.............🤗
it was awesome n cuteeeeeeeee updt...!
such a lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy part..................loved it....!
love d Sg all scene ..............fabbbbbbbbbb
cont soon1
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CHAPTER- 9 Part-B

Samrat remained angry with gunjan since she spoke to him about sheena. This hurted gunjan very much, as she hated to see samrat in a bad mood. But she was very well aware of the fact that she was responsible for his bad mood.

Once the political science lectures were over, and all the students left the class, gunjan was sitting alone in class, thinking about samrat.

Benji passed through the class, and found gunjan sadly sitting inside. He came inside and sat beside her.

B- heyy gunjan!! kya soch rahi ho??

G- kuchh nahi benji, bas, aise hi?.

B- umm gunjan, agar main tumse kuchh puchhun to bura to nahi maanogi na?

G- puchho!

B- tumhare aur samrat ke beech kuchh hua hai kya??

Gunjan looked at him with blank expression.

B- a?.i mean ki?.tum dono ka jhagda hua hai kya?

G- tumhe?.aisa kyun laga??

B- (thinks) ab kaise bataun ki mujhe aisa kyun laga? Jabse tum aayi ho, tabse lectures attend karne laga tha, sirf tumhe dekhne ke liye! Lekin aaj to class mein aaya hi nahi.

G- kya sochne lage?

B- gunjan actually?.maine notice kiya ki?..tumse baat karne ke baad se uska mood off hai. Uday ne PJs bhi crack kiye lekin samrat ne use kuchh kaha hi nahi!

G- (in mind) mujhe samrat se baat karni hi hogi. Meri wajah se uska mood kharab ho gaya!

B- kya hua gunjan?

G- a?.samrat kahan hai?

B- wo boys locker room mein?.

Before benji could complete his sentence, gunjan quickly got up and ran towards boys locker room. This surprised benji.

B- kammaal hai! greenfield college mein pyaar ka atmosphere chhaa gaya hai! Tab hi cool dude samrat ab class attend karne laga hai, aur ab ye gunjan jo boys ke naam se darti hai aaj boys locker room mein chali gayi! Great!

In boys locker room, samrat was sadly sitting on a bench, thinking about gunjan.

S- (to himself) chashmish shayad theek keh rahi thi?.mujhe sheena ko ek aur chance dena chahiye. After all galti to insaan se hi hoti hai. magar above this, main chashmish se bekaar mein hi naraaz ho gaya. Wo to mujhe sirf pyaar se samjhane aayi thi. Aur maine kya kiya? Usse itne rudely baat ki. Kitna bura laga hoga use. Mujhe use sorry kehna hi hoga.

"har baar tum hi sorry bologe kya??" gunjan spoke.

Samrat got up and turned back. He found gunjan looking at him with tears in her eyes.

S- chashmish?.main?.

G- pata hai samrat, tum bahut bure friend ho. Galti agar kisi aur ki bhi ho, tab bhi sorry tum hi bologe. Is baar galti meri thi, fir bhi tum mujhe sorry bologe?

S- aisa?..nahi hai chashmish?.

G- to fir kaisa hai??

S- galti meri hai. Mujhe ek baar tumhari baat ko dhyaan se sunna chahiye tha. Lekin ulta maine tumse hi rudely baat ki?..plz mujhe maaf kar do?.

G- nahi samrat. Galti meri hai. Mujhe ek baar khud ko tumhare jagah rakh kar sochna chahiye tha. Rishte bahut naazuk hote hain. Agar ek baar trust kho jaaye, to use waapas paana bahut mushkil ho jaata hai.

Samrat looked at her, and smiled slightly.

G- kya hua? Maine kuchh galat kaha kya?

S- nahi. Ab agar maine kuchh kaha, to fir main sorry hi kahunga, fir tum sorry kahogi, fir main?.aise to fir poora din nikal jayega!

G- (smiles) to iska matlab tumne mujhe maaf kiya, right?

S- main tumse naraaz hi kab tha chashmish? Tumse naraaz hona meri life ki sabse badi galti hogi.

Gunjan smiled shyly, as she felt herself on top of the world. No other person had said something like this to her except samrat, which made her feel so special.

S- (coming closer to her) waise?..mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhse milne ke liye itni desperate ho!

G- (confusingly) matlab????

S- tum?.boys locker room mein khadi ho!

G- haan to isme kya hua??

S- chashmish??BOYS LOCKER ROOM!!!

G- haan?.KYAAA???? BOYS?..LOCKER ROOM????

She looked around her, and was scared to see herself standing in boys locker room! While samrat enjoyed her fearful expressions!

G- samrat main?..yahan jaanbujhkar?..nahi aayi?.

S- (laughs) relax chash?..

But gunjan ran away from there before he could complete his sentence. Samrat went after her.

Both reached at canteen. Gunjan fearfully sat grabbing a chair, while samrat sat in front of her with his both hands on his cheeks.

S- relax chashmish! Tum jaanti nahi ho kya, ladkiyan meri ek jhalak paane ke liye boys washroom tak aa jaati hain!

Gunjan looked at him with wide eyes.

S- tum to phir bhi mujhse milne ke liye boys locker room mein aayi thi! (winks)

G- (fearfully) samrat agar?..college mein kisi ko pata chala ki main?..boys locker room tak aa gayi to????

Samrat enjoyed her expressions, and so he thought to scare her even more.

S- to pata hai kya hoga?? Log tarah tarah ki baatein banayenge??log to hum dono par shak bhi karenge, ki hum dono ke beech?..

G- (in same tone) shak???

S- haan! Ye shak?..what the f?.

G- (cutting in between) samrat!!

S- (bitting his tongue) oops, sorry!! Lekin zara socho, tum mujhse milne boys locker room tak aayi thi, ye baat to college ke annual magazine mein bhi publish ho jaayega!

G- sachi samrat??????

For some time, samrat looked at her, and then burst himself into laughter. Gunjan looked at him in disguise.

G- samrat, kaise friend ho tum? Main yahan pareshaan hun aur tum ho ki has rahe ho?

S- are, hasi nahi to kya rona aayega?? Shakal dekho apni! Aisa lag raha hai jaise sach much hum dono ke beech?.

Gunjan glared at him in anger.

S- main bas mazak kar raha tha! Ye Mumbai hai gunjan! yahan koi ye sab itna seriously nahi leta hai jitna tum le rahi ho!

G- tum mera mazak uda rahe ho? theek hai, mujhe tumse baat nahi karni hai!

S- are par chashmish?.

Gunjan got up and moved forward, but samrat held her hand and pulled her a bit closer. Gunjan felt uncomfortable, but samrat was lost in her beautiful eyes.

G- samrat mera haath chhodo?..main tumse naraaz hun!

Samrat came back to his senses, and seeing her uncomfortable, he left her hand.

S- chashmish im sorry! Main bas chhota sa mazak kar raha tha!

Gunjan moved her eyes away from him and looked aside in anger.

S- (making a cute puppy face) mujhe ab bhi maaf nahi karogi???? Please!!!

G- (in mind) tum itne cute kyun ho samrat??? Na chahte hue bhi meri nazrein tum par chali hi jaati hain!

S- chashmish???? Maaf karogi ya seedhe date pe le jaaun??

Gunjan looked at him in shock, while he gave his killer smile and winked. She blushed slightly and looked away.

S- I mean, friendship waali date!

G- (smiles) its ok!

Dia and benji stood at a corner, and looked at samrat-gunjan with a sweet smile.

B- ye dono saath mein kitne achhe lagte hain na?

D- haan! You know what, nupur di ne kaha hai ki shaadi ki arrangements mein gunjan sam ki help karegi. Isn't that romantic?

B- romantic??? Kaise?

D- dhakkan! Zara socho, sammy aur gunjan ek saath har preparation karenge?..to isse dono ko ek saath aur milega spend karne ko. Aise wo ek dusre ko achhe se jaan bhi lenge! Aur saath mein?..bahut saara romance!!

B- you're right!!

Samrat and gunjan were settled in canteen.

S- chashmish, kal tum mere ghar pe specially invited ho!

G- kyun??

S- (leaning close to her) kyunki tum boys locker room mein aayi thi!

G- samrat plz!! Phir se nahi!

S- sorry! Mera kehne ka matlab ye tha ki?..kal mere ghar pe holi ki party hai??to mom dad ne especially tumhe invite kiya hai! Aur tumhe aana hoga.

G- lekin?.

S- lekin kya? Dekho, mere mom dad ne itne pyaar se bulaya hai, tum nahi aaogi to achha nahi lagega.

G- lekin samrat?.dadi akeli ghar pe kaise rahengi???

S- are to dadi ko bhi saath le aana! Main un par bhi apna charm chala dunga!

G- samrat!!! tum kabhi nahi sudhroge!

S- main sudharna hi nahi chahta hun! (smiles) anyways, tum sach mein dadi ko lekar aana! Meri mom unka achhe se dhyaan rakhengi!

G- hmmm?.main baat karungi.

S- lekin tumhe pakka aana hi hoga.

G- are pehle dadi se to?.

S- tumhara aana final hai chashmish?..agar tum nahi aayi to samrat shergill holi nahi khelega!! Aur ye dhamki nahi hai?..main sach much holi nahi khelunga!

G- are par samrat?..

He left from there.

G- (to herself) bilkul bachche ho tum samrat! Par pata nahi kyun, tumhara yehi bachpana mujhe pasand hai! (smiles shyly)

At night, in Bhushan's home-

Gunjan had got the permission from dadi to celebrate holi with samrat and other college friends. She and dia were in bedroom, while dia was applying nail polish on her nails, and gunjan was cleaning her bed.

D- waise gunjan, ek baat puchhun??

G- haan.

D- kal raat?..yahan koi aaya tha kya??

Gunjan stopped her work and looked away for a while.

D- kya hua??

G- k?.kuchh?.nahi?.

D- to batao na, yahan koi aaya tha kya?

G- (smiles fakely) a?.nahi?.nahi to dia?.yahan bhala kaun aayega! Lekin?tumhe aisa kyun laga?

D- wo?kal raat tum bahut zor se chillayi thi?.

G- wo to maine?..ek chuha dekha tha!

D- lekin tumne to dadi se kaha tha ki tumne cockroach dekha tha!

Gunjan tried to hide her expressions under her fake smile.

G- a?tum bhi na dia??kya baat lekar baith gayi!

D- gunjan, agar cockroach ya chuha hota, to perfume ki smell nahi aati!

G- perfume?? Matlab??

D- jab main subah is room mein aayi thi, to mujhe perfume ki smell aayi thi. And I guess, tum aisi perfumes to nahi lagati ho!

G- main to perfume lagati hun na dia??(thinks) tumhe bachane ke liye kya kya karna padta hai samrat!

D- achha?? Lekin mujhe nahi pata tha, ki tum boys perfume bhi lagati ho!

G- kya???

D- haan?.kyunki wo smell kisi boys perfume ki thi?..aur jahan tak main jaanti hun?..ye waali perfume?..sammy use karta hai! (smiles naughtily)

Gunjan quickly turned back, fearing that dia might start teasing her.

D- gunjan dear, sach kyun nahi bolti ki kal raat yahan sammy aaya tha?

G- w?.wo?dia main?.actually wo yahan isliye aaya tha kyunki?.wo apni?..victory mere saath?celebrate karna chahta tha.

D- that's so romantic?..a?.mera matlab hai that's so sweet! Pata hai gunjan, tum bahut lucky ho, jo sammy tumhe itni importance de raha hai!

G- (smiles shyly) hmmm?..lekin dia plz?dadi ko kuchh mat batana?..warna wo?..

D- don't worry babes, main unhe kuchh nahi bataungi! And by the way, ab hume so jaana chahiye. Kal holi hai, aur humara plan?..wo to tumhe yaad hai na?

G- haan dia mujhe yaad hai. Ab bas uday bhaiyya ke sone ki deri hai!

They go to sleep.

PRECAP- Holi Celebrations at Shergill's Place

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Both Samrat and Gunjan are talli!

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Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ria 🤗
totally loved the updat
i actully love this ff so much
sajan are soo soo cute
love the locker room seen it was cute and then later in the canteen was cute also
and wow holi celebration and both sajan get talli
cant wait for that
so cont soon
love
tanzeel 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Marvelous update...sajan r sooo cute....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Do update soon, Ria.........both Samrat and Gunjan talli............can't wait to read.
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a sweet update................luvd it ..........thanx fr the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww......
wat a swt updt yar!!!!!!!!
It ws an awsm part ,superb dear.
luv it to d core.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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