Under the Moonlights Lake~MayUr+SaJan FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Wow beautiful part and CS looking forward to read this do continue really soon

Originally posted by: MoNaYaRoX

Awesome Concept!!

Pllz add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

CS are awesome plzz add me to your pm list plzzzzz

Originally posted by: -Liana-

hey lina its beautiful 👏 thnks for the pm sis ll wait for the nxt part the title sounds sooo romantic 😍☺️ puri story kitni romantic hogi😍 lovely bginig

Originally posted by: moonlight44

lovely concept!!!

thnxxx for the pm

Originally posted by: dolly18

is se pehle k i comment lemme warn u

just just just just keep writing this ff

u r an amazing write

a girl with awsome stries and agar tune yeh story beech mein chodhi na to by god mere se bura koi nahi hoga

samjhi?

nn now back to story

god lina i just fell in lov with this concept umm still sooooo much in awe of it

god i just juts juts juts cant wait to read more

pls hun jitni jaldi ho sake write its next parts k plsssss

Originally posted by: achoose

awesome concept dear...pls continue soon...............

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Lina can't blve u starting new ff

so happy i would love to read hun

n loved it mayur Character Stretch

update soon plzz n thanks 4 d pm 🤗

Originally posted by: samratrocks

grr88 part.. i luved itt.. do ocnt soon plzz...

all the best for ur ff!

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey lina..nice concept..n the intro was good..

mayank comes over to meet dia..n nupur feels extremely uncomfortable..so he thinks of going away..but she calls him inside so she can check if dia is awake..n on the way they talk about mayank's past which makes him lose his cool..but he apologizes soon enough..so thats good..n he invited her for a picnic..nice ;)..hope she goes!..

samrat moves into a new building..n he stops the elevator for gunjan..she gets on..n almost moves to the wrong floor but realizes soon..lol..n they get to know each other..samrat is totally smitten by her..she drops her bracelet n he goes to return it..but when he asked what the N stands for, she totally slammed the door on his face!..wow thats rude..but does it stand for nupur or neil?..

so even gunur have a story?..interesting!..looking fwd to the MayUr n SaJan love stories too..

all the characters are interesting..waiting to read more..

thnx 4 d pm
update soon