Under the Moonlights Lake~MayUr+SaJan FF

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moonlight44

@moonlight44

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

lovely concept!!!

thnxxx for the pm

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

is se pehle k i comment lemme warn u

just just just just keep writing this ff

u r an amazing write

a girl with awsome stries and agar tune yeh story beech mein chodhi na to by god mere se bura koi nahi hoga

samjhi?

nn now back to story

god lina i just fell in lov with this concept umm still sooooo much in awe of it

god i just juts juts juts cant wait to read more

pls hun jitni jaldi ho sake write its next parts k plsssss

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome concept dear...pls continue soon...............

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

grr88 part.. i luved itt.. do ocnt soon plzz...

all the best for ur ff!

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Lina can't blve u starting new ff

so happy i would love to read hun

n loved it mayur Character Stretch

update soon plzz n thanks 4 d pm 🤗

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hey lina..nice concept..n the intro was good..

mayank comes over to meet dia..n nupur feels extremely uncomfortable..so he thinks of going away..but she calls him inside so she can check if dia is awake..n on the way they talk about mayank's past which makes him lose his cool..but he apologizes soon enough..so thats good..n he invited her for a picnic..nice ;)..hope she goes!..

samrat moves into a new building..n he stops the elevator for gunjan..she gets on..n almost moves to the wrong floor but realizes soon..lol..n they get to know each other..samrat is totally smitten by her..she drops her bracelet n he goes to return it..but when he asked what the N stands for, she totally slammed the door on his face!..wow thats rude..but does it stand for nupur or neil?..

so even gunur have a story?..interesting!..looking fwd to the MayUr n SaJan love stories too..

all the characters are interesting..waiting to read more..

thnx 4 d pm
update soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

At last ur string ur FF

Thanx a lot sweetheart

Loved the strt

Mayu directly asked Nups out for Date crap n how he knws her name

Sajan strt convo was sweet but end it becum shocking one

Gun was rude but really aggressive abt that braclet i feel

Update soon

N im in ur Pm list for sure

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sizzlingsehr
awesum first part yr
realyl oved it to the the great extent yrrr
reaally lovely update
lovemayur first meeting
and talks btweeen them yrr
glad mayank is single na😉
loved nupur diffeternt attire
cming to sajan part
loved samrat a lot yrrrrrr
he was great all through yrrrrrr
really waitng for next update
and u have to update soon na
no other option for u😆😆😆

sorry for short comment as m not doin welll

awww Sehruuu this is choo cweet of you na 🤗

thankooo chooooooooo muchhhh🤗

em really really glad u liked it na betuu

but no na

you'r just saying that

em not a good writer at all na

I just love writing

acha will continue abhi na

love ya

tc🤗

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever
res EDIT

Lina, better finish this ff, varna... (my dhamkis are the worst so don't even think about not finishing this ff 😆). I am soooo excited for this ff. Hey! You're using the title I told you! But you really didn't have to use it. Anyways, I am definitely excited for this ff, and the beginning seems really interesting. Really looking forward to it! 🤗

by godzzz itni dhamkizzz😆😆

awww thankoo choo much na Nikzz

really love the title you gave me na =P

thanks a lot for such beautiful comment

will deffi continue na 🤗

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sizzlingsehr

wow mayur story ne to dil jeet liya mera yrrrrr
🤗🤗🤗🤗
👏👏👏👏👏👏
brilliant amzing superb yrrr mom
loving mayur story more
eager to read it mor na
m impatient cant wait yyrrrrrr
update sooon
sajan story is also amzinggggggloveed it

and gunur
i always knew its your fav na😆😆😆😉
so u kept it scret
very bad mom

cs to BY GOD mast tha yrrr
and icons bhi yrrrrrrr
and mayank and nupur character seems to b differentand intersting yara
now dont make me wait more na
b fast yrrrrrrrrr
i cant waittt

btwi thnk m first on ur pm list naaaaa😳😳😳😳😳