Love Chronicles - OS #16 Page 85 (15.06.11) - Page 7

Awwwwww so sweet...I just loved it...
Specially the sindoor wala scene...And the dialogue 'aab lag rahi ho meri nupur' touched my heart.. 😍😍
Why the cvs dont show this kind of scenes...
Thnx so much for this lovely OS...🤗🤗

Jaee..... you just made me cry.... Nupur's pain was beautifully portrayed... and you brought Mayank back to what he is... a caring loving husband...

jaee....i jst read ur os-pain n repentance..........it ws vry touchin n perfect.....i really really want somethin lik this in d show.....this is d MN i love vich u showed in ur OS.....this is d love of MN vich i adore n respect vich u showed in ur OS.......bt unfortunately jin logo ne MN ko banaya vo log na hi MN ko ab samajh rahe hai n aur na hi unke pyar ko....

thnxx to my bestie who suggested to me read this os of urs.....u really really write wonderfully dear.....i cant tell u hw muchhhhh i loved this OS of urs.....realistic...beautiful...emotional n full on real MNish....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏......n i loved d endin d mst...tht ws somethin truly beautiful beyond limits......

thnxx sooo much for writin this OS n sharin wid us....plzz do write more n plz plz plz pm me abt them too....i hv found one more talented FF/OS writer in u,among many MN FF/OS writers....n i really want to read ur further stories.....😊

Originally posted by: -jaee-

😃👏Thank you everyone for liking and appreciating my work so much!!! Thanks to all the wonderful readers here ... without you guys appreciating our writers work; our writing is incomplete ... so thank you all of you!!! 😃⭐️

jaee GOD bless u dear
u r an amazing writer and we love u and ur writing
plz write more n more mayur os nad ff


take care

hi jaee

Jaee this is the sweetest os I have ever read! It's truly beautiful. Words fall short to describe how perfect it was and how good you are at depicting Mayank and nupur's emotions. I had tears in my eyes while reading it starting from the part when mayank says tumhaara mayank laut aya hai.
Kash aisa kuch show neon bhi hota! Do send your ideas to them. Maybe then they'll see the mayank that everyone else wants to see. I know for a fact this track won't go anywhere! MayUr are once again going to be used as fillers while SG have their moments 🤢 🤢
Thnx for the pm and keep writing more. Love each one you write. All keep getting better and better than the previous ones!

u r a GOD gifted writer..........its not u who should thank us...we should thank u 4 giving such wonderful piece of works....thanx a lot dear..pls do write more..love u loads...tc.......

This was an awesome OS Jaee!😃 The pain and anguish of Nupur was well portrayed here and so was Mayank's realization. Wish we could see something similar to this in the show too.