Love Chronicles - OS #16 Page 85 (15.06.11)

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

that was perfect ending jaee...

amazing style of writing...

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

perfect ending dear! thnx for the pm 😊

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Hey Jaee, 😃
I was so waiting for this...
I knew the ending will be happy, I really liked Richard in this...
The way you portrayed Jenny was really nice, the way she lived in fears, and the way she got over it :)

the truth is that the culprits in such cases can easily escape the punishment and it's rare to see someone getting punished for their deeds these days

Yeah thats the harsh reality... all girls are not as lucky as her...

This was really nice, and i liked the flow.. ! Write more :)

Take care
Love,
Sam.. :)

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#584

wht to say...this is the stark reality indeed..but i loved the will power jenny gathered to fight 4 herself and gave troy his due...touching end...thanks 4 sharing such a realistic concept with us in ur own way... :)