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I hope this makes up for the late update!

Tum Mere Kon ho

Geet had woken up,just as she heard Maan leave the room,with all honesty she was hurt and angry.She knew Maan was protecting her,but he should have told her.This person was after her,he could hurt priya.No!Never!Geet decided to do some packing,after meeting this guy she would leave.She would be out of their lives,if this guy spared her.She was not sure where she would go.Actually this would be the best time to call up her friend in kolkata.Yes,maya would love company.She could find a job and what not.So geet got to work,she called up the bus station and asked for the next possible departure time.Next she called up her friend in Kolkata,she was estatic that Geet was coming.She voiced her excitment by telling her how much Mayank missed her.Mayank was Maya's brother.He was two years older then both geet and Maya.Mayank had always protected geet from any danger.Although at the time Mayank was only 8 and Geet was 6.Geet always liked Maya,but soon they moved away due to their father's job.
The day had passed by very slow for Maan,his thoughts went back to how Geet's mood had changed.While driving home,he realized that the man after Geet had not contacted him.Maybe he got scared and let the issue go!This made Maan smile,maybe the guy really did change his mind.If so,then it was a time for them to celebrate.When he got home,everyone was sitting on the table,well except for geet.Priya had come home with him.Maan watched as Priya went upstairs to greet her mother,what bothered maan the most was that she had isolated herself.

"Dadi,Geet aaj niche nai ayi?"

"Nai beta,Suba se na kuch kaya ya na peya hai."

"Well woh uska dost ara hai.Arjun.Usko invite kiya tha aaj."

"Arjun?"

"Haan Geet ka bachpa ka yaar."

"Ohh you must be jealous of him..haha"Vicky added.

"Nai jiii,meri geet ne usko hug nai kiya because woh kehti hai,ke abse woh sirf or sirf Maan ki hai."Maan said before sticking his tongue out at vicky.

"Mere bare main kiya baath ho rahi hai."Maan turned around to see Geet and Priya standing by the stairs.

"Heyyy Bhabiiiiiii aap ka koi hot dost ara hai?"

"Haan woh mere bachpan ka dost hai Arjun.He is the best person."Geet said as her eyes lite up.

"Oh theee best persoooon"Dev smirked looking at a jealous Maan.
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"dev..."Dadi said glaring at her grandson.

"sorry baba!"Dev said before hearing the door bell ring and rushing to meet his bhabi's childhood friend.

Arjun had brought geet her favorite flowers,with a box of chocolates.He had stood in front of the mansion for what seemed like a few seconds before a young man opened the door.Arjun could tell this was Maan's brother,but a more easy going version of Maan.The Man introduced himself as Dev,Arjun could tell he would like him a lot.It was only a few seconds walk to the kitchen and both the men had hit it off great.Dev and Arjun were engrosed in a serious conversation about the Indian cricket team.Geet saw them approaching and smiled.Maan who had stood awkwardly beside an unusually quite geet,watched a change in Geet's mood.Like the meeting the day before,Geet had opted out from hugging Arjun making Maan feel much better.Arjun glanced at geet,as they sat in the living room.Dadi had sent Vicky to find her medicines,,and so vicky had not met the new addition.As vicky came running to the room he looked at Arjun and smiled.

Arjun turned out to be a very humble person.Vicky had found his buddy who liked Aamir khan just as much as he did.Dev had found his cricket buddy,and Priya who had been sitting in between the adults had found another big brother.Arjun loved little kids,when he heard about what Geet had done for priya.He had silently cried and thanked god for sending someone like Geet in priya's life.The way priya expressed her love for Geet was amazing.He could not wait to see priya grow up and carry a relationship with Geet.The room had silenced for a few moments,but those moments made arjun sense the tension between Maan and Geet.When he had met them,they looked happy but today Geet seemed reserved.

"Geet kiya hua?"Everyone looked up at Arjun who was voicing there thoughts.

"K-uch nai"Geet said failing to lie to her friend.

"If you don't wanna share that is fine but I suggest you do not lie to me,because you never do.If you do though,those eyes of yours give you away."

"End of convo Arjun"Geet said looking away,anywhere but him.

"Maan,make sure you ask her.I know that look.I suggest you sort things out before her brain stirs up a storm."

"huh?"Maan asked not knowing what he meant.

"Last time I saw that look was few years back,when she wanted to commit suicide."Everyone's head shot uo to look at Arjun.

"Arjun stop."

"No I won't because I would rather have you be angry with me right now,then having to lose you later."

"enough"

"bh-abi aap ne humhe bataya kyon nahi."

"It was not necessary."

"Let it go vicky,she does not trust us enough."Maan said feeling angry that geet hid something from him.

"Bhabi aapne mera dil tore diya."

"Toh pir babaji mujhe saza deinge.Jald"Geet said before glaring at Arjun and leaving.

"Th-at's not right,Maan is there something you guys are hiding.Is she leaving.Maan her voice is saying so much.Is she sad?"Arjun asked.

"Nai beta,tum loog usko space bhi toh nai deh rahe!"

"Bus dadi Maa!Bus!Woh poora din kamre main band rahi hai!Mere se woh ankhein nai mila rahi,aur aap kahe rahen hain give her space!What space!She was fine the other day before I asked her to go get something for me.DadiMaa,she was so happy when I told her I loved her.She was so happy...So what happen in those few hours that she pushed me away.Main asa kuch nai hone deh sakhta dadi maa.....Poori zindagi apne mujhe uske sapne dekhaye,pehle main samjhta tha ke woh sirf eik sapna hai.Aur aaj woh jab meri zindagi ban gayi hai,aap keh rahen hain give her space.I know your a women before a Grandmother,but can you not see she is not stable enough to be left alone.I rather die then see her cry!"Maan said as his eyes teared up.Arjun stood up and put a hand on his shoulder

"Maan,I know her for a really long time......She is one of the purest person alive.She is so selfless that it scares me.You know I traveled all the way here to see if she was okay!Today,you made me feel so much better..Your family is a type of family she needed.I can see the love for you guys.Priya gave her the opportunity to approve herself..You make her whole.I can tell my geetu does not show emotions.Yet when she does,she can not control them..Talk to her Maan before it is too late."Arjun said as he glanced at the rest of the Khurana's who looked really sad.

"Arjun I have to tell you something?Can I trust you"Maan asked,already becoming good friends with him.
"Hann zaroor pucho Maan"

"Arjun Geet ka koi dushman tha when she used to live with you guys"

"Nai,woh bohot peaceful larki hai.Uske peeche toh kite ashiq the but Miss Geet ko pyar se nafrat thi."

"Woh kyon?"

"Oh tumain nai patha?"

"Uske dad abusive the,geet tried really hard to save her mother."

"Unke papa ne geet ko toh nahi kuch kia?"

"Nai,Uncle Geet se behpana pyar kerte the.He would never hit her!"

"Arjun koi geet ki jaan lena chata hai."

"KIYAAA.Kon hai woh?Koi patha uska?"

"Nai humne bohot try kiya,magar mila nahi woh"
"Do not worry Maan,mein usko kuch nai hone doonga!woh meri behn ki tarah hain!"

"Bhabi arahin hain change the topic"Vicky said glancing at both the men.

"So Arjun,shaadi ke koi iraade"Dadi asked.

"haha Shaadi..hahaha.Dadi your funny."Dadi looked at him and shook her head in disapproval

"Woh,Maan I have to go meet my friend kal.Please tum Priya ko tuck in ker dein na raath ko.Patha nai kitni deir ho jaye kal"Geet said looking at Maan,when he nodded she silently said bye to Arjun and the rest of the Khurana and led Priya to her room.

"Dekha tumne!"Maan said

"Hmmm,Maan asa karo let me follow her tommorow with Dev."

"Maine bhi jana hai!"Maan said

"nahi bhai,she will know your following her,aur pir she will be more angry."

"Ok pir kal milte hain,theek hai?"
"theek hai"

That night Priya had come knocking on Maan's door and cried saying she heard mama scream from her room.Maan had rushed to her room and opened her door to find her crying in her sleep.He had made his way to her bed and asked her if she was okay but geet just hugged him.Maan had calmed her saying he was right here with him,and that priya was here too.Maan put her head in his lap and gently ran his hand through her hair.When he heard her breathing return to normal he had rested by her and went to sleep.The next day Maan had woken up to find her not their.He got up and rubbed his eyes and looked around for her,and found her drying her hair.Slowly he got up and walked over to her.He saw her struggling with the string on the back of her kameez.Making his way to her he gently stopped her hand and tied the string in to a bow,his cold breath tickled Geet.She closed her eyes and leaned in to him.Maan slowly snaked his hands on to her shoulder and turned her around.He looked at her with love and desire,and geet returned the feeling.Bending to give her a kiss on her head,he gently said her name.Geet suddenly hugged him,and held on to him
"I love you Maan"

"I love you too sweety.Tell me what's bothering you?"Maan said moving his head so he
could look in to her eyes while holding her.


"Kuch nai,let me just savour this moment in your arms."Geet said knowing that after today she would never see him

"Ok but sweetheart,if you ever need to speak to someone.You know where to find me.I would do anything for you."

"Anything"

"Promise me something"

"You will never leave Priya's side."

"Promise.She will be with me and you forever."

And you will always be in my heart.No matter what happens"Geet said before kissing his cheeks.

Maan felt happy,but something about her voice was bugging him.Maybe it was because she had nightmares these days,and she was scared.Hugging her tighter they stood there before Geet asked him to stay with him for a while longer.Not wanting to say no to her,Maan led her to her bed.He sat down and pulled geet in his lap,and started to play with her fingers.Maan enjoyed the feeling of Geet in his hands.

"So geet who is better.Me or srk khan?"

"of-course mera srk"
"Acha mujhe bhi deepika ziada pasand hai."

"she is too tall for you"

"Ya,he is TOOO old for you!"

"Age is just a number Maan"

"Ya height is just a number too"

"jao jao"

"hmpphh"

"Maan tumne pucha nai mera srk kon hai"

"are wohi bandar jo itna acha actor hai!"

"Nai Maan,mera srk sirf or sirf tum ho"

"Acha,toh pir eik baath batoon."

"hmm"
"mujhe toh deepika ki shakal bhi nai achi lagti!"

"Geet main raath bahar sooya nahi,mujhe thora sa soone do please."

"Uffo kyon nahi sooye Aap?"

"Tumh itna chila rahi thi,eik baath batao tumhari machine raath main bhi nai band hoti."

"MAAN"

"GEET"

"DUSHT"

"Miss mirchi."

"Khadoos"

"Shona"

"Sirf mere Dusht."

"Sirf meri mishti!"Maan said before both of them smiled.

Mid-day Get had bid Maan goodbye,and Maan had promised to come and talk to Dadi about their engagement.Upon leaving Geet went to check on priya,who had a slight fever and could not go to school.Dadi had told Geet not to worry and spend some time with vicky because she was right here with Priya.So geet went to see what Vicky was up too.The rest of the day both Geet and vicky spent playing cards and different games.At one point they even allowed a sick priya to play.
At night Geet had gotten ready to face the reality of her life.SHe had made her way to the place to blank caller had asked Maan to reach.She came only to find it pin quite,taking a deep breath she yelled out for him to come out.She turned around when she heard the man pull a chair out.She could only see his figure.

"So,I did not except my target to fall so easily in my hands.Since you are here let me tell you why you are here."

"Wh-o are you,I know that voice i just can not tell who."

"My Father loved your mother so much,he cheated on my mother for her.What did your mother do,turn him in.He tried to made love to her,but instead she tried to pull away and my father got aggressive.Your parents have lied to you for your life.Your my fathers daughter.He did not deserve to get killed for his actions,he was just loving her.He was just loving her but your mother left him for your so called father."
"my mom was raped?"geet asked in tears.

"According to her yes,you know something else.I killed both your parents.I killed your parents.A slow painful death!I threatened to kill you too!If you want mercy I want you to let me marry you?I want every part of you,I want to claim you and rape you so many times in revenge for taking away my father away from me.You wanna know who I amm Miss Geet Handa."

"I would rather die then marry you jerk,and yes so show yourself."She said before gasping as she saw Arjuns elder brother step out.

"Nice to meet you too.I am Mohan.Its so funny how you did not recognize my voice.You pratically grew up around me.hahahaha.So you choose death or marriage with me?"

"Death...You and Arjun decieved me!"How could you!"

"Hmmph Arjun does not know!"

"You and your father deserve it!You moron,you made me think my parents commited sucide.I am happy your father is not here.My babaji gave him what he deserved.I wonder if your mom was raped,how would you like it huh?If your father abused you,I wonder how you would feel."Geet said as she saw Mohan taking his gun out.

"MAybe your mom deserved it,and maybe you deserve this"Mohan said before pulling the trigger,the bullet hit her shoulder and the second one hit her stomach.Geet started to fall down before she heard a faint voice calling her.

"GEEEEEETTTTTT NOOOOOOOOOOO"Arjun and dev had heard everything.They had followed Geet,Dev had told him that something was wrong,and so they had silently hid by the poles.Arjun had been frozen in place,his own brother.How could his brother even think that way?How could he think that raping someone was right?Arjun felt disgusted.He quickly looke at dev and said he had nothing to do with this.Dev was shaking when he called Maan.He had told him what had haapened and how Geet had come to meet the blank caller.Maan had told him he would be there in 20 minutes.Meanwhile back to the present Arjun had went to grab geet,while Dev had snuck up on Mohan and taken the gun away from him.
"Arjun listen to me"

"NOOOO..YOU ARE SICK!YOU SHOT A PERSON WHO I CARE ABOUT DAMN IT.DO U NOT KNOW THAT GEET IS MY TWIN SISTER."

"Wha-at?"

"YES,YOUR SICK FATHER HAD TAKEN ME AWAY FROM MY REAL MOM."

"No...that cant be true."

"WELL IT IS TRUE!GUESS WHAT YOU MESSED WITH THE WRONG PEOPLE."

"Arjun she is loosing blood goo take my car and rush her to the hospital."Dev said while tying Mohan to the seat.Mohan sat there frozen,arjun was not his real brother.
Maan had been driving as fast as he could,when he reached their he froze.He saw Arjun running out with geet in his arms.Maan parked the car and ran to Arjun,a person who was in tears.He looked at his geet who was breathing heavily and drifiting away from him slowly.Maan slowly started to fall to the ground,he could hear the police rush in to the farmhouse.Arjun had told him he was taking geet to the hospital.Maan had looked up and said he had some bussiness to take care off.He walked in to the farmhouse,only to find the blank caller being taken away.Dev rushed to his brothers side and told him that he was Arjun's brother.Maan had stiffened,sensing his distress Dev had told him everything that had happened.
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One week later....
"Maan you need to go home and rest.I am here with my sister."Arjun had said to Maan.The whole Khurana family sat in the room looking at a lifeless Geet.

When Geet had been taken in, the doctor had told him that he was luck that the bullet passed by Geet's rib cage.If it was anymore closer geet could have died.They had moved her from the ICU to her own private room.It has been a week and Geet had not woken up yet.Arjun was in no better shape,he kept on blaming himself.THe family had consoled him and told him that without him Geet would have been dead.Maan had sat by her side and cried.Both the men were cryong for the same reason,but had a different relationship with her.Arjun who was Geet's twin cried because he finally found his sister but in such circumstances.Maan cried because he did not want to lose his life....And the mother to his child...Priya.Priya had been the strongest,telling her dadi that her mother would be fine.Although even she was crying non -stop now.Mohan had killed himself by eating the posion he had in his pockets,the poison he wanted to give to Maan.

Arjun had been told by his mother about how he was not their child.Before the death she had told him about how he was brought in to the world.Yet she could not tell him the name was his real mother,she had told him that he had a baby sister.It was only the day that geet got shot that he realized that his sister was geet.All his life he hid this truth from his elder brother because he wanted Mohan's love.After a few years he accepted that he would never find his sister,and thats when he became closer with geet.He was shaken out of his thoughts when Maan had said that he wanted to go home and pick up a few things.

2 months....


4 months....


6 Months........

It had been six months and Geet was still out cold.The doctors had given them their decision.They said that it would be best if they pulled the life support off,after 1 month.They did not think Geet would ever get out of the coma.The whole family had been a mess.Especially Priya,Maan and Arjun.
Maan walked in to her room and sat down beside her,his eyes were filled with tears.His hands shaked as he brought geet's hand to his mouth and kissed it.

"Geet,please come back to me I am going to die without you."Maan said resting his head on her bed and slowly falling asleep.

Maan felt someone carresing his hair,and whoever it was felt like his only love,Geet.Slowly he had waken up,as he looked up he realized it was GEET all along.She had woken up!His geet was up.

"Maan,please come lay down by me."Geet had said as she felt the need to be held.

"Geet I am so sorry,If I did not hide anything from you,you would not be here."Maan said but Geet silenced him with her cold fingers.

"Shhhhh"Geet said trying to get up but she could not.Maan saw this and told her to lay
back down.Maan went to call the rest of the family.Everyone had rushed to the
hospital,except Arjun would not dare to enter.


Maan had silently sat by Geet while the rest of the Khurana hugged her.As they took their seat,maan took a deep breath and told geet who arjun really was.At first she did not believe him,but then she broke down in tears.Arjun was her twin brother,how could she not know?Suddenly she tried to sit up.

"Mama you can not get up right now."Priya said while looking at her mother from her dadi's lap.

Beta,I need too."

"Bhabi no you are staying in bed.

"Vicky please mujhe Arjun se baath kerni hai"Maan wiped away her tears.

"bhabi he is blaming himself!He wont come!"

"Please..."Geet said as more tears fell.

"Its okay Geet I will force him to come,how about we suprise him that you know your his sister.

"Haan please."

Dev had to pratically drag arjun in to the room.As Arjun entered he stood by the door not looking at Geet.Geet saw this and with the help of Maan she sat up anf looked at Arjun before saying what she wanted to say.

"Bhai,eik baath batoa.TUmhein yeh patha hai kon ziada bara hai..Mein ya aap."As Geet said this Arjun looked up shocked.

"Are,mera bhai mujhe hug bhi nai deiga"Geet said before Arjun ran to her and hugged her.

" I am so sorry yeh meri waja se hua hai.I should of protected you from Mohan.I should of known that Mohan was after your life.I am so sorry."Arjun said as he hugged her and cried his heart out.Geet silently cried with him.

"It's okay,I do not blame you,you understand.If you were not there I would be dead."

"You d-ont blame me."

"Ofcourse not"

"oooohhh thank you so muchh"

"Ouch Arjun,I know you love me but itna tight hug na karo ke meri jaan nikal jaye"Geet said to him before smiling

"Sorry"

"So arjun SINCE you are my brother.I want all those birthday presents you have missed"

"Hayyye"Arjun said mocking her

"Arjun,kitne karab ho tum."

"hahahahaha.Acha pehle tum sahi ho jao pir dekhein ge !"

"Sachi"

"Muchi"

"Maan I want my 6 months worth of kisses."Geet said before covering her mouth and turning red.

"Bhabi ap ko bullet kiya lagein hai,aap toh itni behsharam ho gaien hain!"vicky said before everyone started to laugh.

"Mama agar aap dono kiss karo ge,kiya pir mera eik chota bhai yeh behen ho jaye ga?Toh pir aap log hazar dafa karo kiss."

"Priya!"Everyone said suprised.

"What simple question hai,chalo Arjun bhai aap batao.."

"Uhh,I have to go."Arjun said running out.

"Dadi?"

"Beta..woh I have to talk to the doctor?"

"Dev bhai?"

Woh your vicky bhai does a better job explaining."

"Uh priya I would love to,but its your parents responisiblity."

"Maan main thak gayen hoon,tum batao na ise"Geet said before closing her eyes pretending to sleep.

"Papa?"

"Priya mein zara eik call ker loon"

"Ufff koi mere sawal ka jawab kyon nahi deh raha?"


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Posted: 14 years ago
the last part was awsome yaar..laughed my head out ..
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Gr8888888888888888!!!
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee the part.
maneet and family r together.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.



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Awe this part was just amazing loved the whole arjun being geets twin and awe the hospital scene was just too cute and funny especially how everyone avoided to answer priyas question lol anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part. But the best was priya u just love her
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice one.. luved the last bit.. priya is so cute.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaaaaaaaaaa geet finally came out of coma but really i was like this🤣🤣🤣when priya asked tht question
plzzzzzzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow i read all parts its really superb plz cont soon and can u plz add me in pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
arjun geet's brother?
whoa baby priya is too adorable
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it.
I love the way you portray emotions!

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