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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
welcome back wow what update but i wonder who is after Geet finally they confess their love to each other that something amazing update pls cont thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Aww thank you so much for liking myyyyyyy story!WOW I will update soon inshallah!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet and priya
perfect little family
loved the khuranna family
so sweet
loved the way maan dev and vicky looks after geet
loved the last end
maaneet confesses finally
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
awesome update loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
dat wassss a veryyy good update thanks for the pm and do update soonn... thanks sweety! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Thank you everyone!you guys are sweet....enjoy the light romance before the drama starts!
In your arms

Maan rested his head on Geet's,and looked in to her beautiful hazel eyes.They were filling up with tears as they stood there,he knew what she was thinking.He knew she thought that she was bad luck,but to him she was his reason for moving on in life.Her rose like lips,slowly trembled and her tears set free."Maan maine kabhi apko bataya hai that ..Main apse bohot pyar kerti hoon."Geet said through,tears and Maan scooped her up in his hands and spun her around.He was so happy right now,no one could take this happiness away from him.He put her down and kissed her nose,and that is when Dev had walked in.Maan sighed heavily knowing the taunts that were coming their way.Dev chose to act more dramatic then usual.Putting his hands on his eyes,he said sorry a billion times.This made geet go red like a rose,ah even her blush was red as a rose.

"Geeeet,aap toh bohot besharam niklin!Office main apne boss ke saath ishq lara rahen hain!"Dev said dramatically.

"Dev"Maan said trying to be serious but the way geet's eyes widened he couldn't resist and smile.

"WOW!Aaj toh ap dono ghar ayen.. dadi , vicky aur maine... apko bohot tang kerein ge."Dev said before calling Vicky and telling him what was going on.

"Hmmmmmph maar gaye"Geet said hiding her face in Maan's chest.

"Hmmm Geet"

"Jab tumhe ase laal hoti ho na toh mera dil kerta hai ke"Maan said wishpering in her ears before moving his body closer.

"ke kiya Maan"

"Ke main"Maan said before capturing her delicate lips,and slowly massaging them with his lips.Moving his hands to her hair he gently pulled her locks to bring her more closer.Geet moved her hand to rest on his shoulder and slowly made her way to his hair.Maan loved the feeling of Geet's hand in his hair.Both the lovers pulled a part and maan said."Ke maine tumhe kiss keroon."Geet looked at him and let out a laugh through her tears.

Although what these couples did not know was that danger was right around the corner.

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At a cafe,that directly faced Khurana construction,a man in a sea blue armani shirt and faded jeans put down his cup.He looked up at the third room window of the Khurana construction where he saw his victim and her lover.With a devious smile,the Man turned around as his younger brother called him."Mohan" Arjun said,before coming to sit by his brother.Arjun was Geet's best friend since pre-school.He was not aware of his brothers intension,he was just here to meet her and see if she was happy.

Mohan was here for one sole reason,to erase the name of Handa,Geet was the last straw left.Why the hatred?Mohan's father was in love with Geet's mother,and one drunk night he forced himself on her but he just wanted her to be his wife.After that,a few days later the police had come to drag Mohan's father away and beat his father to death.Back then there was no trial for such doings,it was considered rape.Mohan's mother died from the shock of her father cheating on them and arjun and Mohan lived without parents.A few years later Mohan found out that Mrs Handa had gotten married after giving birth to Geet.Mr handa had accepted both of them,and they started a new life.As Geet grew infront of his eyes,Arjun had become close with the enemy.Mohan became revengeful and promised to get justice.When Geet was 8,he had sent goons and promised to have her removed from this world,but if she married Arjun he would let it go.The Handa's did everything in their power to get Mohan in jail,but later he had pressured them.One night as he got out of jail,he broke in to the Handa's place and shot Mrs Handa.Mr Handa had locked himself in a room and after awhile,Mohan broke through the room and killed him.Geet although was no where to be seen.He fled the scene as he heard someone at the door thinking it was the neighbours.Today he stood infront of the Company to kill her,to finish her.To make sure he felt satisfied.

"bhai"Arjun said looking at his brother.

"Where does she work again"He looked at Mohan who pointed his finger to the third room,where he could see Geet.

"Woh rahi"

"thanks for finding her,she left without any goodbyes...I can finally meet her and see if she is happy.Wait is that the Maan dude she is gonna Marry.WOW Geet is hugging a guy"Arjun's eyes went wide,Geet handa and hugging guys.She only hugged Arjun but that was because they were best friends.

"waaqt bohot kuch badal deta hai"saying this,Mohan said he had something to do.

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"Dadi trust me,geet said I love you to him!"

"Sachi beta"

"Bhabi said that?"

"Haan,aur dono bohot hi kush the"

"Dadi aaj toh boht maza ayega,Aaj toh main badla leh ker rahoon ga Bhabi say.Then she wont call Amir Khan stupid."

"Acha mazaq ka limit samjhe ke tang kerna.I don;t want my bahu to be too shy."

"Dadiiiii"Both Dev and Vicky whinned.

"Tum dono ne suna na kiya kaha hai maine.

"Jii dadi!"They said before dadi left knowing they wont listen.

"Dev tumne kuch suna jo dadi ne kaha"

"Bilkul nahi"THey both said before giving each other a high five.

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"Maan ase kaam nahi hone wala!Tumhe pata hai na 2 bare projects ki tyari kerni hai!Chalo udher ho ke behto."Geet said as Maan sat there for 2 hours just sitting by her playng with her hair.

"Geetttttt"

"Maaan"

"geet acha 20 mins mera paas beht jao uske baad paka promise tum ja sakhti ho!"

"Nahi araam se kaam kerain aap,main woh table per ja rahen hoon samjhe"

"Main aaon?"Maan asked innocently,before getting a death glare from geet.

"Acha acha,main idher hi hoon"Maan said quitely.

At 2pm,there was a knock on the door both Geet and Maan looked up to see who it was.Adi came in,and told them that this Man said he was Geet's best friend.At first he was vary,could this guy be after Geet but it was only a doubt.Maan only felt positive vibes from the guy.He was exactly Maan's height,built with grayish/brownish eyes and short hair.As Geet got up she said his name excitedly and ran to hug him,but Maan noticed that Geet was hesitant.He knew she would not hug another man,because to her maan was her everything.She extended her hand for Arjun to take,arjun realized that Geet would not hug him and smiled.He knew she would dedicate herself to this man.He shook her tiny hands,and pulled her nose.

"Tummmm"Geet said with a smile before moving to Maan who had come to stand beside her.

"Main,kitni karab ho tum!Bataya bhi nai or bhaag ayi!I missed you my rattt"

"rat?"Maan said looking confused.

"Arjun do not start"

"Hello Im arjun,iska jiggery yaar!Aap Maan hain"

"Nice to meet you,or haan main hoon Maan.."

"Geet Handa rat se darti hai,isliye isko chirane ke liye maine iska naam rat rakha hai!"

"Arjuunnnnn dokhe baaz,tumne kaha the ke tum kisko nahi batao ge."

"GEET HANDA kisi cheez se darti hai!WOW aur woh bhi rats se hahahahaha"Maan said before laughing and arjun joined in.

"Haslo,haslo!Mujhe kuch hua na toh hasni nai ayegi"

"Geet pir wohi baath"Both the boys said

"tumhare saath bhi asi baathein kerti hai"Maan asked Arjun.

"Haan bilkul"Maan sighed before pulling Geet in to his arms.

"acha toooohhhhhh mujhe batao ge nahhhhhhhhii ke aap dono ki shaadi kab hai!"Arjun asked

"aae lo Maan,vicky or dev kaam the jo babaji ne eik aur banda tang kerne ke liye bejh diya haan?"gee said pouting while playing with his fingers.

"hahaha!Lagta hai..."

"Acha toh Geet main chalta hoon,kal dinner ke liye chalte hain..theek hai?"Arjun asked

"Sure Sure!Jo babaji ko manzoor"geet said before Arjun bid goodbye and left.

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Maan and geet went to pick up,their daughter priya.Today priya would be really happy,because soon they would be a family.

When Maan and Geet got to the school,they both got out and went to find priya.Upon seeing her mother and father,she ran to them crushing both of them in a hug.Geet bent down and took her lunch bag,from far a teacher was observing the scene and knew this was the famous Geet and Maan or like priya said it "maan ki Geet" and Priya's maneet.She made her way over and greeted they young couple.Priya stood in between Maan and Geet holding there hands and giving her teacher an award winning smile.After the teacher had commented on their talented girl,she left.Maan bent down to Priya's eye level and said"woah meri beti itni smart hai!"Priya laughed before giving him a kiss and telling her parents how good they looked together

"Geet priya tumhari copy hai"Maan said 30 mins later as he pulled a sleeping priya out of the car.He held her in his hands and put his hands to support her back and neck from falling.

"woh kyon?"

"tumhari taraha itni bari baatein kerti hai.Dekha nahi tha kaise keh diya that we look good"

"Shukar hai Baba Maan singh Khurana pai nahi gay!"

"Geet"

"shhhh meri shona uth jayegi!"

Tum mujhe kyon nahi itne pyar se bulati"maan pouted as he went in to the house.

"Woh bhi keh deingi bhabii aap wait na karein" a smirking Vicky and Dev said while dadi smiled.

"wooh Geet mera phone gari main reh gaya hai,main lata hoon"Maan said😆

"nahi nahi main lati hoon"Before Maan could response she was gone.Leaving poor Maan to take the taunts.

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Geet smiled and opened the car in search for Maan's phone.As she found it,she accidently clicked on Maan's text message and read the context.It was a new text message.Geet felt her legs shake from the anixety,she was right someone was watching her.She quickly deleted the text,and promised to solve the problem,and follow directions from the Man.Closing her eyes,she prayed for the safety of her loved ones and made up her mind.No one would hurt the Khurana's,even if it meant getting herself killed.

"Meet me in two days,at the warehouse 20 miles from your house.No funny bussiness or your lover will definatelly die this time.I will wait for you at 5pm....If you do not show up,I will kill her"The words from the text message rang in her mind.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
By the way guys,I had someone msg and tell me that I dont reply to every single comments and that i shouldnt really feel tht happy cause my stry isnt that good. I felt bad because I feel like I'm being rude and ignoring you guys..Although I promise that,that is not the case.I have so much things to do that I do not find the time!So im sorry you guys if you want me to reply to your comments!I love youuu guys loads,and I read your comments everytime I have free time.......I did not know that I was being rude,so I am really sorry. About my story,I write what comes to mind.I may not be a great writer,but we don't have to be!Writing stories,fanfiction is a way to express ourselves.Its not an essay writing competition.Cause if it was,I do not write my essays this way,Im known to write good essays!Atleast thts wht teachers say.Im a essay writer not a story writer....I come here to write for fun!I was dissapointed someone would make a comment like that.Hence if you guys hate my story I will stop:) To my dedicated readers....Your support is appreciated,you don't always need words to describe how thankful you are.Mwah! -Noor
Edited by Noori93 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
so yu mean Maaneet will get saparete or Geet i'll die oh pls do something o my God she went through a lot she needs happiness now great update pls do cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
first of all, you are AMAZING writer. I seriously wait for your uppdates & I love your storyline. I wanna see MaaNeet marriage and then..their after marriage scenes :D
I loveee Vicky&Dev ;) they are sooo funnnyy. I lovee VICKY alotmore. because I hate DEV in the show ;(( lols..
want some bhabhi&devaar scenes. andd please nothing should happen to geet..
I m not liking this NEW friend of Geet at all..he betta not create probs between maaneet or harm GEET in anyway..
we need shaadi soon. PLEASE try to updateee this weekend...maybe a long one & filled with romance...
Updatesoon(:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'm sure geet will not confide in anyone..............awesome update...

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