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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

WOW.....awesome OS kanks👏👏👏
it was really touching,
loved it...
do write more and ALL THE BEST for your exam!!!!!!

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

awesome update

loved it

very touching

awesome pieace

thanks 4 da pm

ps good luck 4 ur exam

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Darn it, you logged off the minute I came on, not fair Kanky. Well lemme start doing my critic-writing 😆

So, what shall I say? Hmmmm *wonder into my brain*

Well I loved the concept that you chose. And how it's just a simple novel-like letter. Brilliantness. I also love how you showed the reality of love in this. You make every word count. If I had to read this out loud without even looking at the story, then I would've memorized it all. Every single word throughout gave meaning. So excellent job.

You truly show the actual human nature of life

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

All the best for your exams and that was very very very well written

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497410

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

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*Editing*

Heya Kankz!

Sorry for editing it after sucha long time!....
Hmm... coming to your OS!!

Its B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L!!

Each and every word in it is perfect!! ...... The emotions are penned down wonderfully!! ... You've grown so much as a writer... you should take up a career in this field ya!..

I was really having goosebumps while reading it!! ... It was Awesome!! ......

-Sharmi

Edited by -Sharmila- - 14 years ago

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

very well written

thx for the pm

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Awesom os...i loved it

beautifully written

do write more

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

i have no words to decribe

it was so heart touching os

it was awesome,blossom,foresome.mind blowing,

fantastic,fabulous👏

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

It was a beautiful piece of work ......loved it a lot !!

You know I'm having difficulty to pen down my feelings and thoughts regarding this one....but all I can say is that you've rendered me speechless dear !!! '

tc
Fatima