Arpuuuu *Reserved* 😆
If you make us wait for weeks, I am sure you can wait for my comment! 😉
*Unreserved!*
Reevz 🤗I hate you so much! 😛 (Though I love you more 😆, but still at the moment I hate you😆)
The reasons I hate you - you have written such an amazing part and now you are making me crave more! And I want the next part now and I am not going to get it *Throwing a tantrum*😭 *Stamping my feet* *Screaming I want it now!!!* 😆
Reason No 2 After you have written such an awesome part I can't hate you! And because I can't hate you I am going to struggle to threaten you to write the next part which means I have to find a new way to make you write the next part, which in turn ruins my personality which relies on threats and blackmail 😆 so here my confusing me in what to do. 😆
Reason No 3: Now I have to throw away my rotting food instead of throwing it at you 😆.
Reason No 4: I actually have to get you a gift to celebrate this part being up, it being awesome and you getting over your writers block! 😆 Which means I have to spend money I don't have
(P.S. Don't worry if you make me wait this long for the next part - trust me, my threats will be back just because at the moment I love this part doesn't mean the novelity doesn't wear off😆)
Ok now to what you have written.
Firstly I loved how you wrote the same scene from 3 perspectives Sid, Shilpa's and Avni's! I loved Shilpa's happiness in seeing Sid happy and her questioned justified.
Sid and Shilpa I can't wait to see a talk between them because whatever talk they have will be deep and is it going to make Sid realise something he should or shouldn't?
Avni's thoughts at the end, hmm..interesting I can't wait to see how she confronts Sid and questions him, I can't wait to see what Sid says to her. I can't wait to see where this confrontation will lead to.
Sid Jr having an aunt called Shilpa hmm...what does this mean? Too many questioned that need ot be answered ASAP!
I suggest the next part comes up ASAP or we shall see.....
(BTW Thanks its been a while since I have been able to write such long comments back to FFs😆, I miss those days!)
I can't wait to see what happens next
Cont soon!
P.S Nik Nak Loves you so here is a gift for you, I am giving it to you not throwing it 😆
Edited by nikita_88 - 14 years ago