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Posted: 14 years ago

Tere Mast Mast Do Nain

Part 6:

Maan ang Geet are still hugging each other when Maan let's her go. Maan feels that something is happening to him but he can't regnonize what that is. Shaan and Khanak are dancing when the dj turns on a romantic songs and both start dancing on it. Suddenly Khanak's saree opens and Shaan holds it. Shaan gives the saree to Khanak for hold it and carries her in his arms. Shaan leaves her in his room.

Shaan: Tum apni saree thik karlo
Khanak: Shaan ..

Shaan closes the door and stands theire.

Khanak fix her saree but her blouse (dori) is still open and she don't regnonize it. She is about to go when Shaan stops her. Shaan takes his hand and touch her back. Khanak closes her eyes and Shaan knights it fast and Khanak turn back.

Shaan: I would not like you see going around like that
Kahank: huh?
Shaan: Tumhari dori kholi thi
Khanak looks and feel shy and kiss Shaan on the cheak as a treat for him.

Shaan: Are tum iss tarah jise bol jana aur mein tumhari help kar ke itni sweet treat leta raho ga.
Khanak: Shaan :)
And Shaan hugs her.

Maan and Geet is sitting near the bar and Geet thinks how will something happend between them. Maan ask Geet if she want to go on a walk for cold down her self? And maybe she will tell him something.
Both are going in a park and Maan then starts again with his chances.
Geet get's tear in her eyes and Maan stops her for going. He pulls her to him and holds her tightly.
Geet: Maan?
Maan: Geet kya hua , tumhe acha nhi laga mere saath time spend karna? Aur koi baat hai kya?
Geet: Aise koi baat nhi hai. Tumhe kyo aise lagta hai?
Maan comes near her and she looks down. Maan is about to kiss her on her neck when Maan's friends call him and says that come to the party soon. Maan and Geet walks again home.

Before enter the house Maan gives his hand to Geet.
Geet: ? ???
Maan: Hum dono ko friends hona chai hai.
Geet thinks finally she is so near..
Maan: Friends righT?

Geet: Sure =D
Maan and Geet get's inside and celebrate theire friendship. They dance on the floor and rocks the party..

Khanak says that she is tired she wants to get home now. Shaan get's angry on her for giving him so much time. Everytime she want to talk about school or go home. Shaan don't says this in a angry mode and Khanak feels that she maybe is doing like that. Khanak goes and holds Shaan's hand.

Khanak: Shantanu i'm sorry for not giving you time.
Shaan looks away and Khanak get's tears in her eyes for he is ignoring him. She start crying and Shaan get's worried.

Shaan: Stop it Khanak , I was just joking
Khanak: Shaan I tought that you are really angry on me
Shaan: Ohh .. Khanak you are so sweet. But it is nothing like that.

And both hug each other. Both goes and sits near a rock and sits theire ffor long time. Suddenly is start raining and they do not where they should go.

Everybody has gone home and it is only Maan and Geet at Khurana house.

Geet: Where is your family Maan?
Maan: In outhouse for here it was party na
Geet: ohh..
Maan and Geet start cleaning up after the party is over when suddenly Geet falls down and her saree get's wet.

Geet: Nhi yeh kya ho gaya
Maan looks back and turns back.
Geet: Meri saree
Maan: Geet go and change to something else. Tumhara sabh kuch dikhta hai
Geet: Mujhe bhi nazar aa raha hai, meri white saree uhh..

Maan goes to dev and naintara's room and gives naintaras nightdress to Geet.

She goes and change and comes up. It is a short nightdress near her knee. She comes out and Maan could not take his eyes off her. Maan start cleaning up and Geet helps him.

Maan is thinking what bet is that Geet get's so scared of.

Maan: Geet.
Geet: Yes Maan
Maan: What bet was you talking about before
Geet is holding a glas and breaks it. She is bleading from her hand.
Maan runs to her and get's angry for not taking care of her. Maan sees that she has tear in her eyes and asks her again.

Geet: Kaun si bet?
Maan is finished with her bandage and ask her again but she answer the same.
Maan get's angry and holds her tight to the wall and she tells about the bet between her friends and ect.
Maan is still holding Geet when he suddenly says

Maan: Geet I love you
Geet get's shocked to hear that , she is about to go when Maan holds her arm
Maan thinks * where did I get that from* and leaves her arm.

Geet is not feeling good with Maan and is trying to get away from him. He says that she can go and sleep in Dev and Naintara's room and she goes there.
Maan goes to his room.

Next day when Maan's dadi and Naintara comes home they are shocked to see the house is clean and Naintara goes to her room. Maan is already waked up and is waiting outside of Naintara's room.

Naintara: Maan veerji aap itni subha jage hai? and laughs
Maan: Bhabhi who mein to..

And Geet's open the door. She change her clothes to her saree and comes out.

Maan: Geet yeh hai meri bhabhi Naintara.
Geet: Namaste
Naintara: Namaste , nice to meet you Geet =)

Geet: Same here.

Naintara force her to eat breakfast with them and she agrees. Dadi comes also down and is shocked to see Geet as Maan's friend.
Maan get's up and is about to tell Dadi when Naintara does it.

Dadi: ??
Naintara: Dadi maa yeh hai Maan hi friend Geet
Dadi: Geet ...?
Geet: Geet Handa
Dadi: Handa? Tumhare papa ka naam suraj hai?
Geet: Ji aap ko kaise patha?
Dadi: Aur tumhari dadi ka naam hai Anchal.
Geet stands up and is shocked how she knows that.
Dadi start laughing

Dadi: Don't worry, Anchal aur mein collage ke dost hai aur tumhare papa ko bhi mein janti ho . Ab to wo bhi Handa buisness ko samaltha hai. Aur uski 2 betiyan thi. Paar kabhi unka naam nhi pata chala. Waise bhi tumhari behen ka kya naam hai aur tumhari dadi kaha hai?
Geet goes and takes ashirwad first then start telling and all are having breakfast.

Geet: Meri behen ka naam hai Khanak , aur dadi to abhi London se wapis ae hai itna time hi nhi mila unke saath abhi.
Naintara: Khanak is also very nice name
Geet: ji eh..
Naintara: Your wish bhabhi aur Naintara
Geet: What do you want?
Naintara: I prefer Naintara
Geet: Ok Naintara
Dadi: So that's mean ke tumhari dadi abhi ghar mein hai
Geet: Ji dadi , I mean mein aap ko dadi to keh sakti ho na?
Dadi: YEs : you can call me dadi , dadi maa what ever you want
Geet: Thanks Ddi maa.

Geet has haved her breakfast when Maan ask if he can drop her home and Dadi says that she will also go with them.

Precap: Geet enters home and get scold by her papa and her dadi stop him .

Dadi maa enters and Anchal regonize her and are very happy and Khanak enters..

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Hope 'I don't write to much =///
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Posted: 14 years ago

ome gurl.....really loved it...

really nice..maaneet scenes

are really nice...do keep writing

and update soon.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww.. lvoelly... too cutee....
im blushingg..
grr88 paarrtt
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Posted: 14 years ago
I hope I did not write to much If you guys want I can make it shorter next time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
so simple...yet beautifully written...awsum....waiting 4 d next part :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice chptr luved it
keep it up
update soon!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
luv it luv it luv it
hahaha i can sense the rishta's cuming along
for sum reason
i gt this thought
ok maan is savitri's own g-son
and shaan is not real(though not differenttiated)
and suraj's daughter is khanak and geet is not real one
sooo it wont be case of like it was in ishq(97) that they choose maan for khanak n geet for shaan
that wud be hilarious n weird
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update... liked maneet scenes... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice FF saVni....plz add me to ur pm list.....as for the length.... dont worry we like long updates.......😳😆😆..... plz cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

luv it luv it luv it

hahaha i can sense the rishta's cuming along
for sum reason
i gt this thought
ok maan is savitri's own g-son
and shaan is not real(though not differenttiated)
and suraj's daughter is khanak and geet is not real one
sooo it wont be case of like it was in ishq(97) that they choose maan for khanak n geet for shaan
that wud be hilarious n weird

HHEHeeh
It is not going to be like ishq movie .. Because I don't eithar want that to happend

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