MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was nice update

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

OMGG!!
Where Had You Hidden Your Writing Skills?!!
This Was To Good...👏
I Was To IN The Story!!
By God...
All The Four Seems Interesting Characters!!
Pllzz Cont Soon...
Cant WAIT More!! 😳

Originally posted by: mahakmev

it's osom dear

Originally posted by: ammykhan

wowwwww superb ff.Completely different concept.Loved it,Its really nice.Plzzzzzzzzz do pm me everytime you update this ff.Thx 4 the pm.

Originally posted by: sheebs_ratifan

wow beautiful waise maine zyada nahi thod hi padha kal phirse sar padhlunngi but really bohut achcha tha....

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

hey dear

great concept

n it's beautiful ff

i'm glad u pme

ur good at writing

can't wait ur next update

n don't say sorry

thank u so much 4 pme

n pme next time ur update 😃

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hey

its a cool ff n diffrnt to nt a love story likemost of us write na

i love nupur n mayank dialogues

n gunjun ...bili hai meray pechay🤣 wah bhi wah

sami is as usual cool dude...lovely lines u have written

lovely ff

do continue..n thanx a lot for pm

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwwwesome

thanx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing start dear..very unique concept.........awesome and pls continue soon.................................

and dear..ur pm is not at all a disturbance..k??????

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

aweosmeeeeeeeeeeeee ff loved it and part 1 was fanstastic continue sooon and sara dnt u sat that i never get distrurbed wid ur pm's continue soon n thanx 4 the pm plzzz pm me

lov

-madiha-