MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111) - Page 10

Originally posted by: preety88

fabulous start....thanks for the pm...cont soon

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Awww love it!!!

And it's definately different from what I have read

so really excited for it!

P.S. I know it's your first ff

so don't be too nervous dear!

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

hi,

a brilliant start according to me...
a totally different kinda story...
hidden mysteries in earth...
it feels nice to read a diff kind one...!!
already waiting for next part ...
so you got to update soon..plz😊

divya

Hey Sara! 😃

u rock hon👏
I just lovedd it.... Ur imagination is gr8.

Well everyone gets nervous at their 1st try. but we need to make a start at some point in our life, and so u started writing. And believe me, u started it really well.

i liked the way u described the environment in the jungle. I was able to imagine a beautiful , serene, yet mysterious forest.

The way u described everyone's character, and their motive behind coming to that forest was also nice. I liked mayank's and gunjan's char more....

And coming to the mystery. hey , u really gotta update fast.. or i'll beat u.... bcoz watever u've written, has raised my curiosity as well as expectations.....

So buddy, nice work! keep writing... and UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!

Lots of Luv😳

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

sara wow wow u writing a new ff woohooo congo shongo for ur new ff anyways wat a concept so so unique n different never ever i have read dis kind of ff wow m so so excited to read it so so intrsting after reading da inro wow wow da entry of gunur was toooooooooo funnny hehehe n den sayank entry was also really nice n den awwwwww gunji hugged sammy hayeeee do sajan knw each other i mean he called her chaasmish n sweetheart etc etc n den majan talk heheh awesome poor sanu dey were bored lolz bt i loveee wat mayu said abt mystery n all so hmmm r dey searching something wat r dey searching its all mystery heheh do continue soon to answer our questions abt sajan n abt wat r dey searching ok n thnx a lot for pm n u never disturb me wid ur pm's samjhi dont ever say like dat

Originally posted by: amy00487

Hey Sara! 😃

u rock hon👏
I just lovedd it.... Ur imagination is gr8.

Well everyone gets nervous at their 1st try. but we need to make a start at some point in our life, and so u started writing. And believe me, u started it really well.

i liked the way u described the environment in the jungle. I was able to imagine a beautiful , serene, yet mysterious forest.

The way u described everyone's character, and their motive behind coming to that forest was also nice. I liked mayank's and gunjan's char more....

And coming to the mystery. hey , u really gotta update fast.. or i'll beat u.... bcoz watever u've written, has raised my curiosity as well as expectations.....

So buddy, nice work! keep writing... and UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!

Lots of Luv😳

Originally posted by: deepti_sajan

i liked ur concept!!!!
u never disturb me with ur pms!!!!

Originally posted by: saduf

its really nice ndifferent form other ffs

continue soon

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

OMG its fantastic amazing start and aur agar tum ney mujhe apni pm list main add nahn kiya to dekh lena BY GOD 😆 plz do add me in ur pm list

thx alot for the pm i dnt wanna miss reading this FF

Originally posted by: -Aastha_Mohit-

res...

do add me in ur pm list...!!!!