jab milengey dil..(a mjht ff)(updated pg 31)

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aashi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

hey dear nice concept and also love ur first update please do continue soon and thanks for pm

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deepti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hi nisha!!!!!!!
congo for ur new ff!!!!!!
awesome cs!!!!!!do continue soon!!!!!!!and thanx for the pm!!!!

luv
deepti

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey dear!:):)

Nice concept n really interesting plot!

luking forward for the next updates, guessing the girl to be gunjan, n the guy was samrat...at the start

Pretty curious to know about the Mayur track

do continue soon n yup add me to ur pm list:)

Luv

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nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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so here goes my PART 1 of the precap.

MAYANK'S CLASS:

Shukla sir: Good morning students!

Students:(They continued to talk to each other)

Shukla sir: bad generation!doesn't respects the lecturer.Fine,coming back to the topic?

EXCUSE ME SIR!

Shukla sir:Now what?

Students: (All look towards the entrance,they see a beautiful girl in salwar kameez with her hair
one.)

The girl: Good morning sir!I am nupur Bhushan and i am the new transfer student.

Shukla sir:Come in.Take ur seat.

(Nupur goes and sits near mayank)

Nupur: hi,I am nupur.

Mayank: good for u!

Nupur: (in a loud voice)you...

Shukla sir:Do u have any problem?

Nupur:(Stands up nervously)No...sir

Shukla sir: It seems that ur hanging very well with my student mayank.so students,mayank will
show the college around to nupur.

Students:(shocked)

Mayank and Nupur:What?(Look at each other)No sir..

BELL RINGS..

Shukla sir: Because of u i lost my period.Now have a good day.

Nupur: Hey listen!Mr.good for u..

Mayank: No,you listen.I have other works to do,so....

HE SEES UDAY PASSING BY.

Mayank: Uday!come here.

Uday:(Scared)yes mayank.

Mayank: this is nupur.

Uday: Hi,nupur.

(NUPUR SMILES)

Mayank: Do the introduction later.Now uday will u mind showing the college to nupur?

Nupur: Why?I am not a kid.I will look around myself.

Mayank:Why?I don't want to get any scoldings from shukla sir,so u go with him.

Nupur: I won't.

Mayank: u should.

Uday: 😕 Listen guys if u have finished ur talk shall i say something?

Mayank and Nupur: What?

Uday: (scared)I am hungry.So i have to go, bye.

Mayank:But uday!

Uday: (Takes nupur's hand and keeps it over mayank's)U show her.

Mayank and nupur:(look at each other and take their hands off)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is end of part 1.hope u liked it. 😉

Edited by nishi_sajan - 14 years ago

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

awesome update plz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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RICHA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

heyyyy
nycccc update
bt where were sajan...???
plzzz brng dem in ur nxt update

thnx 4 d pm
n
cont sooooon

Edited by ar4evr - 15 years ago

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nisha

@XSilentWishesX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ar4evr
heyyyy
nycccc update
bt where were sajan...???
plzzz brng dem in ur nxt update

thnx 4 d pm
n
cont sooooon

this is part 1.part 2 will screen their entry.

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deepti

@.VanishingDream

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

awesome update!!!!!mayur's meeting was nice!!!!!!
do continue soon nand thanx for the pm

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

nice start dear..pls continye soon..........................

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

haha nice nice!!

typical MN, their usual nok-jhoks😆

It was amazing!

do cont soon..!!n make longer updates pls:):)

thnks for the PM

Luv

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