jab milengey dil..(a mjht ff)(updated pg 31) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
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Heyy Shweetu Sis!!🤗

A very interesting update, but who is this guy??😕😲
😲
and by God Nupur!! hmm, precap was spooky!😈

Mayank Ki khair nahi!!💔😭

😭And is Guy ko Jaldi se hatao, or else u'll be killed by me!! JK😆

Awesome Update jaanu!! Continue soon!! LUVEDD IT!!😃!!


Edited by SaJan-SoulMateS - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Awesome update.Please add me to pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hey nisha wat an update yaar dis time it was bit longer bt plzzz make more longer next time ok anyways ughhhh who came in between sajan m gonna kill him/her lolz bt der scene was cuteee n den hehe mayur mayu called nups cat lolz hehe n nups getting mad at da guy who knocked mayur lolz typical nups anyways da precap look intresting continue soon now
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
hi nisha!!!!!
awesome update!!!!!!
sajan's meeting was cute!!!!!
i liked mayurs scenes also!!!!
do continue soon!!!
luv
deepti
Edited by deepti_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ammykhan

nice update

loved it

continue soon

thx 4 the m



thanks 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SaJan-SoulMateS

res

*edited*

Heyy Shweetu Sis!!🤗

A very interesting update, but who is this guy??😕😲
😲
and by God Nupur!! hmm, precap was spooky!😈

Mayank Ki khair nahi!!💔😭

😭And is Guy ko Jaldi se hatao, or else u'll be killed by me!! JK😆

Awesome Update jaanu!! Continue soon!! LUVEDD IT!!😃!!




thanks rosh!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Heyyy Nishaa!!

Mann!! lovelyyy!!

N i wanna know.. whos that fellow??

That stupid person who came between OUR SAJAN!!

N btw lovely update!!

N precap seems interestingg!!

What will nupur do to mayank..??

n nupur ki toh aadat hain hi phisalna! ab isme uss bechare aadmi ki kya galati!!!!

LOL!

anyway.. super duper update!!!!

Today youu made it longer even!

Par abhi bhi kaafi nahii hain! aur lamba kar yaar! see do as i do.. make a word doc. keep writing whenever you have time!

anyway..

LOVED UR UPDATE!!!

Really nicee!


--Manjariii!!



thanks manjari.i wil make it longer 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ar4evr

heyyyy nisha
interstng update..
n whz dis person...??
nwaz cont sooon
n
thnx 4 d pm



suspense wait and see!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome ff......add me to ur pm list
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PART 3:

INTRODUCING THE COLLEGE BEAUTY,THE DIVA WHO HAS A BIG SECRET CRUSH ON OUR BOY SAMRAT-DIYA

Diya:(interrupting the handshake)hi sammy!

Samrat: hi candy!Gunjan this is diya my best friend!

Gunjan: hi diya!

Diya:(keeps a sad face)hi gunjan!so sammy shall we go out on a date?

Samrat: sometime later!

(Enters benji with a relieved face as he likes diya)

Diya: but why sammy?

Samrat: u see candy ! chashmish..i am sorry gunjan!i can call u chashmish right?

Gunjan: (shocked but she smiles at him)

Samrat: candy i thought of showing gunjan the college around so i will talk to u later!

Diya:but sammy!

Samrat:bye babes!shall we chashmish.

(Sajan leaves)

Benji:i am here,date pe chale!

Diya:my foot(she stamps benji's foot and leaves)

IN THE LIBRARY!

Mayank:(reading his book)

Nupur:(runs and comes)where were u i am searching for u everywhere?

Mayank:why r u intended on breaking my head more!

Nupur:(u read my mind😆)no u r mayank sharma !how can someone break ur head!

Mayank: ok!why r here?

Nupur:actually principal sir was looking for u!

Mayank:oh!

Nupur:Shall we leave?

Mayank:we?

Nupur: yup!u see i know where he is so if i dont come then how come u will come to know where he has come!

Mayank:stop it!i will come!

Nupur: u go i will follow u!(mayank sharma wait and watch wat i am going to do)

IN THE CORRIDOR OF EXCEL:

Samrat:so chashmish this is our classroom!

Gunjan:Thanks!

Samrat: u r welcomed!so i will leave see u after classes!

Gunjan:samrat...

Samrat:sorry babes..samrat never attends his classes...

Gunjan:(worried)ok bye..

NEAR THE PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE:

Mayank:Nupur u made me wait for five hours and principal sir has not yet come!

Nupur:wait mayank he will come soon...

Pune:wat r u both doing here?

Mayank:we r waiting for principal sir....

Nupur:(scared)

Pune:(laughs out loud)Wat mayank u know that today is thursday and sir never comes to college on thursday!

Mayank:(fuming with anger)nupur u...

Nupur:Shall i add it in the list of wat mayank sharma's mistakes...

Mayank:it was ur fault!

Nupur:no its ur fault u should hav remembered better!

Mayank:nupur humans make mistake!

Nupur:that's wat i am trying to say humans make mistakes...i als make mistakes..

Mayank:(understands the whole thing)

Nupur:(leaves angrily)

AFTER THE COLLEGE:

Benji:wat r u doing dude?

Samrat:waitiong for chashmish!

Benji:chashmish...

Samrat:her name is gunjan....😡

Benji:ok dude.so wat...

Samrat:nothing bye...

Benji:(leaves)

Samrat:(searches for her the whole college,later he enters the music room which was dark
and he accidentally pushes a table and down falls gunjan)

samrat catches her for the first time she was so close to him he could feel her,hear her heartbeat and gunjan she felt something different,she lost herself and samrat accidentally goes to kiss her when gunjan sees that she comes back to her senses and pushes him
and both r left embarassed

Samrat: looks at gunjan and h is really shocked by his behaviour

Gunjan:leaves the room feeling scared

Samrat:wat did just happen?why did i behave to her like this?wats happening to me why am i so concerned abt her?Oh freak i just have to ask her an apology!

Gunjan:wat was i doing i know him only for a day but why am i attracted towards him.i should ask him a sorry!she turns to go to him but she is shocked to see samrat)

Sajan:both look at each other with embarrasment and finally 'sorry'

Samrat:(smiles)it happens

Gunjan:u r right it happens!accidents happen in life so we should not mind!

Sajan:look at each other again they get embarassed

Samrat:(dude wat r u doing do something soon)hmmm friends?

Gunjan:haan friends!

They shake their hands with a sense relieve in their mind.

IN THE CANTEEN

Nupur:fuming with anger

Mayank:comes and asks sorry!

Nupur:one sec am i dreaming?mayank sharma and sorry!

Mayank:(embarrased)i am really sorry i shouldnt have been rude to u..

Nupur:yes u shouldnt hav been rude bcoz humans make mistake..

Mayank:exactly nupur and i realised it.please forgive me..

Nupur:(thinks for a while)ok friends..

Mayank:yes friends!

They shake their hands!

OUTSIDE THE COLLEGE:

Sajan:were walking silently maintaining distance from each other

Sajan: so...

Sajan:u say...

Both r shocked...

Samrat: i will leave.

Gunjan: i will also leave..

Samrat:bye.. see u tomorrow.

gunjan:haan bye.....

Sajan:wats happening to me!



They part their ways..

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PRECAP:in this crowd there r many relationship which has started blooming and which is there but we couldnt see it.wat will happen jab milengey dil...

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Edited by nishi_sajan - 14 years ago

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