Wishful Thinking -2 Upd - 01/27 pg 80 - Page 8

Hey Vrush Guess what……My anxiety and anticipation was so high regarding today's episode that I was finding it hard to sleep….aur waise bhi now I have one more week credited to my account(Don't have to go for the exam until 18th)…Isliye excitement is more…….and coz I could not sleep…. i read 10 of your works straight yesterday night after printing them…Yes you heard It right….I printed them out….took them to bed and read the whole thing and drifted off to sleep……Maan and Maaneet will surely get me to the mental asylum one day……

Open your Heart -Wow…That was so dreamy….Geet blurting out the truth and a totally opposite scenario of Maan having the outstretched hands and Geet running away was what actually caught my pulse running…..Plus the sensuous Kiss the way you have described it in words Muaaah…….Those actions were totally Maan-ish…..Vrush you have made me fall in love with Maan all over again……Gosh the guy is so Romantic and Passioante…..

From Tomb to womb- How Much ever I appreciate this work of your….it will be an underestimation coz I have never read or experienced anything which touches a cord this deep in me earlier…. For many the life that is growing inside Geet…..that's taking shape inside her may be just a piece of Mass….But the truth is the moment a new form takes in you…its altogether a new life…but everybody has their own way of interpreting it…..Vrush the way you have captured the whole essence with so much compassion I would only say that this definitely would be the voice of a baby who had to go through all such tortures when still in the womb of its mother who has faced equal hardships….The emotions of an unborn child……Its said that the work of a person reflects his/her thoughts and outlook on life and trust me girl I am really proud that I found a friend in you…..Patha nahi I feel even established and well-known writers may not be able to pen down the emotions and words of an unborn child this beautifully…..I Loved it…

When you Say Nothing at all…."Now that's for asking me not to kiss you in public and calling me cutie"….Haila if just saying the above words Maan se Kiss mil jaaye….I am game for it……

Originally posted by: spln

i keep forgetting to make a mention of this (have forgotten that is, the previous two times) but your choice of songs makes me think your taste is - well, in genre, if not in theme - quite eclectic... the good way!
[i made a mental note to mention it this time for sure, when i scorlled down before the read and saw Green Day =) ]

anyways - coming to the part ... erm, so maybe i'm going to be the exception in saying this, or maybe not - but fitting this piece into big picture of the current plot, i see subtle, but not consequentially significant difference as an outcome to this version vs shattered dreams ... not in the long run, but only in the current big picture.

I know you insinuated Maan's incline to introspect eventually, and Geet's resolve to leave... but some where it seems like both versions indicate at least one show down before anything like that, or anything else for that matter can happen... so in a way, for me, these two pieces concur to a common conclusion...

what i mentioned in my previous comment on the other hand, is something that would give them no chance for a second showdown, before she leaves and/or Maan introspects... it my personal wish (and just that) to see them face this completely individually through its worse, and come through deserving of each other in fair sense... a second confrontation before hand somehow takes that chance away... it gives them space for correction/redemption/comprehension/realization or such courtesy each other ...

i dunno if i'm making my point distinctly, but if i am, then you know what i mean!

other than that - you're writing is forthcoming and well defining, as usual! =)

cheers,
nj

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hey NJ

About the music, i am always listening to music and mostly love 80's though as you can see i am not restricted to that, i have a bro who is twelve years younger and we together hear different genres... ranging from Heavy Metal to Rock ballads, i enjoy classical too and i found it interesting that you picked out my varied interest...i only use songs i know for i feel they will be apt of course. theme of most of the songs i use is romance so yeah common thread does run there...
but i usually wonder if anyone pays any attention to the songs i put for they are more an appendage than stand alone feature of the scene...to me either they add to the story or say further or are like a reply to the question the scene says.again..i donno..its like the symbolism that CVs use...do people get them?

coming to your personal wish, even feel they will individually come to terms with their pain, realisation..connecting the dot phase. I think Maan is too deeply entrenched in his pain to even listen to himself let alone anyone else even if that happens to be the person he loves for that person just told him something that according to him would make her out of bounds for him. Was that not the reason he let her hands go?

i feel Geet will leave...lets see..what happens..

i dont wan to write too much of what i am thinking here, can i send you a pm to consult if we can..come up with personal wishes...being written here?

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Wow rickks..you... read ten..so i have 7 more..to hear about from you...

i am waiting..give me a feedback whenever you have time..

i shall reply to everyone...slowly...i am trying to write as well..