Wishful Thinking -2 Upd - 01/27 pg 80 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Ah Dol..no offense taken just..a preference.i used to called at Work..

everyone addressing one another by initials.. you can call me that too..just that every time you would i would think..VT Station..in mumbai... even if it is now called CST...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
i loved both ur versions vrush.... awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
both versions were awesome!!! Love it!!! the way u describe their feelings, just too good!!! And yeah congrats on the new thread and OMG never knew u wrote sooooo much!!! Guess i have a lot of catching up to do!!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
sigh....di will definitely read ur scenes....both of them i promise....just gonna get some rest!! tired di.....really am.....annoying/tiring day

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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Hiiii...thx soooo much for sending me da PM.....OMG wat an update!!!!👏.....how did u do it????.........to be honest i loved both da episodes...brilliantly written......ur descrp of their emotions👏...cudnt be better!!!...i loved da way u wrote abt geet's feelings wen maan kissed her in 1st update...awesome...n dats exactly wat we cud see in her eyes!!!

Ok now 4 da 2nd one.....i agree dat da 2nd is more realistic....coz geet may try to stop maan...n his feelings after he leaves geet standing there r also very realistic...or maybe i'm convincing myself dey r coz i still want maan to have sum part of his brain working!!!....i feel dat since dey hav shown maan saying dat he will support her always just seconds b4 her confession....maan will eventually support her but for now he needs to get away...n also u wrote abt maan's reacn wen he pushes her n den curses himself for being so harsh on her...i think dats wat wil happen....coz he just loves her tooo much n even wen he punishes her...he will feel da pain more!!

Also i feel dat whatver maan does to vent his anger...he may do it at da outhouse n not in his own house coz there others will also see his reacn...i mean dadi n dev ...dont know if i'm making sense...but i'm actually speechless at da way u have written both da versions!!! bravo!!!!👏...keep it up!!! n keep me posted!!!....thxxx a ton once again!!!!
love,
imraana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hey Vrush the Whole Index is Updated Right????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanditasingh

i'm totally dumbstruck ....no words that can rightly state my state of mind after reading this....
i agree with Viji this part is more realistic in more ways than just one...

firstly Maan - everything he can possibly feel is emoted well in words in this part...and I too feel he will head to destroy his den first...which now happens to be Geets home.....which he called their home ...ref HP

Geet - yeah she can never give up her fight...fight to do the right, and here it was to make him hear it all then punish her if he wants...not for the half truth .....i want her to start packing...trying to move away from him ...a distance for a while will do good...Maan needs time...he deserves that time only then we will see Maan Singh Khurana , the true man that he is

Dev 's angle ...
Nargis is a genius
to have suggested that.....coz i don't want Geet to meet him in her present state.....all broken & shattered....nor Maan who too is in same state but his hurt is fresh and deep ......
NT - i want her back...hell i want to know what is she upto, she can't just walk out...its totally not her
why did she do it then.....to hit back hard for sure
............................................now counting hours to know what the CVs and Nissar has is store for us...if its even half of what you presented.....i'll be content



Nandu...I will take a bow.....thanks!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I was wondering where were you.. such an ending on Friday's episode & no updates from you... not realizing that ud already reached 147 pages...
Congrats & keep up the good work!!1

-Kads

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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Vrush plz cONT..with both....i loved both parts......i wud love to read hw u develop..em......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Vru 2nd version was amazing too, u captured the emotions perfectly the despair, the sadness and anger

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