Originally posted by: Puri_2711
hi 😃😃😃.............. mujhse pehle update kar diya 😆😆😆........... i'm lagging behind ..........don't worry will catch up soon..........😛😛😛...........Koi baat nahi Puri....iss baar aap mujhse bahuuuut aage hai....😆....I still dont knw if I'll be updating now....and if not now....then no chances till Tuesday night....😆😆
part par comment bhi karna hai........😛............... ab sweet part par kya comment karu....... Rajeev..oops i mean Rudhir ki tarif hi karti reh jaungi 😳😳😳................Arre....mujhe wohi to sunna hai na....havnt I told u main issi liye fics likhti hu taaki apni hero ki khuuuub taarif sun saku....😉😳
so, part was as usual awesome 👏👏👏....Thank you!! 😳😃... it was very sweet & simple........ but rudhir takes the cake.............😍......Hehe....thats obvious on ur part...😉😉...waise for me also....its the same....main hamesha uske hi scenes likhti rehti hu....kya karu....dil se majboor hu...😉😳😆........ kash kisi din main bhi bimar padu...................& he takes care ....... 😳😳😳......& he doesn't need to call doctor woh medicines khud prescribe kar sakta hai 😳..........Well sure why not....even if he prescribes anything wrong we dont mind...hai na? 😆 Lekin dont wish to get sick Puri....coz apni itni achhi kismat nahi hai jo Rudhir aake care karega....😆
waise is baar ur express speed thodi slow ho gayi 😆😆 😆......... which is good..... 😛😛😛........I told u....pehle ki obvious cheezon ko skip karungi....the main aspect is their falling in love....cant jump that na....😆😆
dheere dheere they r coming closer 👏👏👏................. their relation is progressing nicely 👏 Am glad u like the gradual liking....😛😳
ab jaldi se pyaar ki ghanti baja do.......... so we can have lovey dovey moments 😳😳😳.....Yeah yeah....thoda sa sabr karo....that'll happen soon...😉....... bahut time ho gaya........ when u wrote a romantic part......... 😳😳😳.......... adil ko toh rokmance mein time lagega........... but rudhir toh romance shuru kar sakta hai 😳😳😳....Hehe....lets see who does the romance first...😉....waise sach me Adil ke first ane ke chances kam hai...😆...will take on Rudhir soon then....😳😉......make them go 4 a romantic date shate ...............................spread romance in the air 😳 Sure sure....16th is coming....the date itself is beautiful....just like romance...😉
will wait 4 next part ................ update soon I knw this is not soon....😆...yet I'll be doing that....ASAP. 😆😆 😃
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