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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Rudhir ko alpna ke saath masti karna accha lagta hai. usne alpana ke face ko pura raang dala...aur phir keh ne kaga ki holi hai!!
Honeymoon ki baat sun kar Rudhir aur alpana dono hi tensed ho jate hai. And in his nervousness he starts blabering in front of his parents without relaising that he is embarassing both himself and alpana. But in the end he finally convinces his parents that they do not need to go on a honeymoon.
alpana finds out from Rudhir's mother that he likes pudding and so she is making it for him. She is surprised to see Rudhir behaving in such a childish mannar. But the whole scene was very cute
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part dear but short one for me!!!
the way he made her his canvass n paint her jus love him for dis.
so they had their cute fight though it only have a little pinch of it.as for now they really act like a sensible couple though who knows how to deal wit arguments.yaar they must hav their honeymoon na ...like the silence b/w them a sweet n loveable silence...
pls cont soon dear with a long part this time
bye tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing and very good concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆u know, i was eager to read ur fics😃😃(of course, u know me very well🤗🤗) Sometimes i wonder that how did u find out that among all ur frnds i'd be the one who'll be soo much interested to read😲Shocked(may be u know me better than myself😉😉)and the interesting part is i actually love ur fic.😆😆😆 At first i was curious why r u soo much affected by all these things, reading fics and also writing fics,😕ConfusedConfused i actually didnt find any meaning of these at first(dont hit me laterOuch). when u started telling me the stories, i actually started liking it and i can still remember ur expression when u told me that u want me to read ur fics, that made me really curious!😃😃😃 So i read ur fic when i got the first chance. And now i know why did u suggest me to read, u know me soooo well!😊😊 u knew that i'll love the stories and no wonder i actually do! i could see Rajeeve in the place of Rudhir. this role is too perfect for him, it goes with his personality. It also proves that u know him very well and u truely like him......or i'd say.... love him!(who knows that better than me). Stop blushing☺️ and showing all ur teeth😃 after reading this!.......well, there is no point........u cant stop smiling and blushing😆😆, i know that. i am writing this because u wanted me to comment on ur fic but may be i couldnt do that job properly.......i think i've commented more on u than ur fic. but i've already told u what i feel after reading ur fic. so there is no point of saying that twice. its not good to hear the praises again and again🤪Silly. all i wanna say is keep writing like this👏👏Clap..... ur really goodClapClapClap.....oops! i've praised u againD'oh.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
both their convo for the pudding was sooooo chweeet really loved it
cont sooonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Suru se suru karte hain...okay...??? Hehe....of course...😉toh achhi bachhi...pakkne k liye taiyar...???😃 Jee Bilkul Lioness....😳😉

holi k din subah ka scene...ha ha ha...!!! rudhir rango ki plate k sath...!!! sahi make-up bhi kiya us ne Alpu ki...par sahi jagah par us k ankhen hi nahi hati...!!!Hehe....he sure knws the right things....😉😆 ofcourse...alpu k honthon se...aur voh bhi us ki smile k liye...lovely scene......kuch karte karte rukk bhi gaya...ha ha ha...😆!!! kam se kam rudhir ko yeh toh pata chala ki alpu us k sath khush hai...!!! jaise hum is fic k sath...😃 Ohh...really? Tab to pakane me aur bhi maza ayega....coz now I knw....u r happy wid the pakaoing!! 😆😳 Waise....thanks yaar!! 😛
bichari...alpu...radhir ko kitna achha samajh rahi thi...!!!Arre....achha HAI yaar....😉...thodi masti kar li to kya hua?? Haq hai uska....hai na? 😉😆 uth kar use sote hue dekha...toh hamari tarah voh bhi khush ho gayi thi...!!! par phir khud k face ko dekh kar rudhir ka naam le kar chillayi...!!! ab yeh toh hona hi tha na...!!! raj paas ho toh koi kaise khud ka naam le sakta hai...voh toh raj ka hi naam le sakta hai na...!!!Bilkul....and hum to yaha bina kisi wajahs e bhi Raj ka naam pukarte rehte hai....uske paas to phir bhi wajah thi...😆 haan...alpu chahti toh pyar se rudhir ka naam le sakti thi...par us ne aisa nahi kiya...khair...😆 To kya hua....hum yaha aye din pyar se usika naam to pukarte hai....😉😳
lo...pahle joker ko smart kaha...(sayad raj ko apne film JOKER ki yaad aa gayi thi...Raj ke saath saath MUJE bhi yaad ayi yaar...😆...am desperate for ONE PROMO 😳😆)...phir alpu ko normal insan kaha...jo ki bilkul khaash nahi hai...!!! hmmm...yaar...rudhir toh jhuth bhi bolta hai...😆 Yeah....kabhi kabhi bolta hai....😉...taki apni cute Alpu ka cute face dekh paye...😆😳
aur rudhir ne anjane me hi bilkul sahi kaha...ki voh zindagi bhar use nahi chodna chahta...ha ha ha...chalo der aaye durust aaye...!!! anjane me hi sahi lekin kuch toh khaash nikla na...😉 Hmm....wo to anjane me kitna kuch keh jata hai....😆😉
rudhir apne maa ko kitne achhe se janta hai...'hum na soch rahe the'...isi baat se pata chal gya use ki...koi tufan aanewala hai...ha ha ha...😆 Yeah....coz usually uski maa aise baat start nahi karti na....😆😆...again wo apni Maa se bahut close hai....Dad se jo nahi hai...😆
yeh rudhir ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai kya...??? alpu k samne hi apne mom-dad se honeymoon par argue karr raha hai...ha ha ha...aur kya kya bakk raha tha...alpu ki halat kharab thi...ha ha ha...alpu ki taraf dekha bhi nahi...argue karne me hi BG raha voh...😆 Yup....ek baar Alpu ke chehre pe AWKWARDNESS dekhi to dobara mura tak nahi...went on blabbering!! 😆
lo...is arguments k piche bhi alpu ka matter bhi hai...!!! voh awkward feel na kare...isiliye rudhir yeh sab kah raha tha...voh bhi apne parents se...!!! yaar...dekha jaye toh rudhir kuch jyada hi care karne laga hai us ki...!!!Didnt u want that ha?? 😉😆 par yeh fair nahi hai...kyoun ki dono k bich deal hua tha na...ki dono apni lyf khud jeeyenge...ab kya ho gaya...rudhir jee...kuch toh boliye...😆 Arre....usse bolne ko mat kaho....dekha nahi kya kya bolne laga....out of irritation mostly!! 😉😆
toh...in dono k bich ab choti moti nok-jhonk bhi suru ho gayi...!!! chalo achha hai...pyar ki pahli seedhi...😉 Yeah...pyar hai to takrar hona banta hai....😉😆😳
pudding...par bhi jhgada...!!! rudhir ka dail bilkul meri tarah tha...!!! main bhi mom se yehi kahti hun...!!! par alpu ne kitchen se nikala...bolte hue...meri mom thodi violent ho jati hai...ha ha ha...!!! sherni ki mom hai na...aadat hai...😆 Hehe....maine bhi apni hi dialogue ko Rudhir se bulwaya.....😳
haiiiiii...kya scene tha...jab alpu...pudding le kar aayi thi...rudhir k liye..!!! matlab...pudding ka pura scene hi AWESOME tha...😃 Aweeeee......thank you thank you....that was my USP scene of this part....mujhe iss part me uss scene ke alawa kuch khaas achha nahi laga....😆
arre vaah sumi...tum toh kavi ban gayi...!!! dekha maine toh pahle hi kaha tha...ha ha ha...😆 Arre haan yaar....😆😆
rudhir n alpu ki voh full moon ki raat baith kar baat karna...voh scene bhi baht sweet tha...😃.Thank YOU!!! 😛..lekin alpu...kya kah kah rahi thi...rudhir ko...'DHI...' kahin pyar se 'Dhir'toh nahi...😛 Lets see...😉
...ab is ud k baat khatam karne se pahle main yeh kahana kaise bhul sakti hun ki...dono ka hath thaam kar ander aana...kita cute scene tha...aur chalo...kam se kam Alpu ko kuch toh feel hua...😉 Yup...its tym to FEEL....😉
simply...AWESOME ud Sumi👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Aweee...thanqqqqq soooo much Pri....😛
itna lamba comments padh kar agar galiya dene k bare me soch bhi rahi ho na...toh bhul jayo...!!! kis ne kaha tha itna achha likhne ko...ab likha hai toh bhugto...Arre....mujhe to thanks kehna tha....but as u said....BHUL JATI HU....😳😆😉 aur jaldi se next part post karo...😃 I'll be trying my best....😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part !! Thanks Vandu....😛

Rudhir is damn cute...Kuch Kuch hone laga hai dono ko !! Hehehe ! Yeah....its been soo long without Kuch Kuch Hota Hai....😆😉
I liked this part...Thanks...😛Now go and also update your other fic jaldi !! Hehehe ! Hehe....I updated that earlier than my own expectation....😉😆

Thanks for the sweet comment Vandu....😛
Luv,
Vandu

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

loved it

superb
update asap



Hey Ritu dear.....glad u liked the part.....will try to UD soon....thanks for commenting!! 😛😃😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sumaiya Hello Dii...😛

Happy Navratri😊 Same to u Dii..😛
Nice part..😃 Thank you!! 😊😃
Rudhir honeymoon ki baat sunkar kaya kaya bolne laga tha..😆😆 he didn't even realize that he is embarrasing Alpana infront of his parents..😆😆😆 At that point he didnt realize anything but the fact that Alpana was uncomfortable...😆😆😆
but why were they so nervous??? Rudhir was continously blabbering and Alpana was so sure that he doesn't want to go with her at all..😆😆 but she didn't knew that he too was thinking on the same line..😆😆 Hehe....dono kuch zyada hi samajhdaar hai na....bas isiliye ye sab misconception ho gaya....😆...guess thats why two smarties dont go much well together....😆😆
Pudding scene was cute😃 Thanks Dii...😊
Rudhir was expecting that Alpana wud definetely share it with him but when she declined he got angry.. Alpana was laughing to see Rudhir's behavior..He was acting like a child who was deprived from his favourite sweet,,😆😆 Yeah....I think boys r mostly like kids....specially when he is soooo sweet as Rudhir...😳😉
These lines were really gud Ohhhh....thank you Dii....u liked the lines....jab likha tha tab mujhe khudko hassi aa rahi thi....but saying this u did make my day!! 😛
"Naa jane ye kya hai jisme khud ko bhula dena achha lagta hai

Khamoshi ko mehsus karna achha lagta hai

Anjaane khyalon me khoye rehna achha lagta hai

Bas aise hi ruth jana achha lagta hai

Naa jane ye kya hai jisme khud ko bhula dena achha lagta hai"👏👏👏

Rudhir was feeling so happy to sit with Alpana..I liked the way both were expressing their thoughts abt each other..such honest views😆😆 Hehe....thats true!! Am glad u liked the scene!!
They both thought that the other person is rude and arrogant..😆
They both r falling for each other..😊 Yup...its tym to fall...they hav been standing for long!!! 😆😆😳
Pls continue soon
Bye Sure Dii....thanks for the lovely comment!! 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

the up is reallyy cool 😊 Thanks Ria...😛
rudhir toh alpana ke kya haalt bna diya tha ke jisse dekh kar alpana kitne gussa ho gaye 😡ho ge he she was looking so funny 😆 Hehe....of course...he made her the perfect CLOWN!! 😆
alpana makes pudding for rudhir hmm 😃aur rudhir ko jab na milta haai tab he gets angry 😡rudhir ko aase naraz dekh kar alpana ko bura bhi laagta haai so she goes to rudhir aur usse baare pyaar se pudding khanne ko kaheta haai😳 par rudhir to attitude dekha raha par alpana jab "sorry"tab jaake rudhir maanta haai sach he is really Really wat?? Ria...😆😆....waise haan....attitude to janab me kut kut ke bhara hai....and Alpu is no less as well...😉😆
ab dekhte haai ki unke life romance kab aata haai jis ke liye main bekaara hu😳 Yeah yeah...its just knocking on the door...ye dono darwaza kholte hi sab chalu ho jayega....😆
plz cont soon aur pm me Sure dear....thanks for commenting!! 😛

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