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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome parts
loved it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...

awesum update...

cont. soon....

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Hey Sweety,
I hav jus finshd readin all da prts n dey r jus AWESUM!!!!!! 😛
Cant wait till da nex upd8!!!!
Plz upd8 quick na!!!! Lol!! Take ur tym!!!
Plz do cont sooooooon..........
Luv
Alisha
xx
P.S. PLZ DO ADD ME 2 UR PM LIST!!!!
FANX!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Part 6

"Nahi guys I dont think hume aisa karna chahiye. Pehli baat to ye ki hume nahi pata ke wo dikhte kaise hain...." Nikita said

"Arre! Usse pehle hume ye bhi nahi pata ke kitne ladke hain aur kitni ladkiyan. Agar galti se humne kisi patient ki ragging kardi to?........" Abhimanyu started.

"To uske theek adhe ghante baad resignation letter hamare haaton mein hoga." Rahul finished it.

"Arre yaar! Tum log darrte bohot ho!" Muskaan said.

"Mujhe to abhi abhi daant padi hai. Agar maine kuch aur kiya to pakka resignation letter milega. Tum logon ko jo karna hai wo karo. I'm not into this!" Riddhima held her hands up.

"Kya yaar! Spoiltsport kyun ban rahi hai?" Anjali asked.

"Samjha karo yaar! Agar Dr. Kirti ne mujhe pakad liya to main kal se Sanjeevani mein nahi dikhungi."

"Ok. Chal lets plan. Hamare paas sirf 1 ghanta hai." Anjali and others soon immersed themselves in their planning except Riddhima and Rahul.
***********

"Uh!!!!!!"

She was about to fall when two arms caught her and held her in their firm grasp. [cliche I know] 😆

Her files fell down while the papers in them took their own sweet time to take a look at the surroundings and scatter themselves around the couple who stood in the most watched pose.

She opened her eyes and looked in the black eyes which were boring into her own brown ones.

"Uh! Excuse me." She said politely.

"Oh sorry!" The person left her and down she fell!

"Oww!"

"Oopss! Sorry again!" He held his hand forward with an apologetic smile.

She looked the hand and then at the person.

"I dont bite you know."

"But I do."

She said and stood up on her own.

"You know, stop quoting 'Mahi Way'. Think something original."

He said and running a hand through his hair.

"Shut up Sid!"

"Oh come on Tamanna! Seriously you should stop watching so many serials and quoting them."

"Ugh!" Tamanna began picking up the papers and putting them in a file while Sid watched her with an amused smile.

"Idiot! Help bhi nahi kar sakta." She muttered under her breath.

"Lekin tum hi to kehti ho na,'I dont need your help.' Phir kyun mujhse help ki umeed kar rahi ho?"

"Hunh!" She stomped her foot and went away.

He followed her and gave a thumbs up to someone.
***********

"Yaar! Ye to apna hi popat ho gaya. Ye dono to ek dusre ko jaante hain." Atul said.

"Koi baat nahi. 2 aur bali ke bakre ya bakriyan abhi bhi baaki hai." Anjali said.

*Flashback*
"Umm excuse me kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain Dr. Kirti kahan milengi?" A handsome guy asked a girl who was checking some file.

"Aap?" She raised her eyebrows.

"Main naya intern. Dr. Siddhant Modi. Panchgani Sanjeevani se."

"Main hi Dr. Kirti hun. Aap 5 min late hain." Nikita hid her smile and said in full authority.

"Late? Nahi ma'am main infact 10 min jaldi aya hun." He was bewildered.

Was her watch slow or something?

"Aap 1 senior doctor se behes kar rahe hain?"

"Sorry ma'am..."

"Aapko iski saza milegi. Yahan se jo bhi pehla insaan aayga usse aapko girana hai. Dhakka maarke, trip karke kaise bhi. Bas girana hai."

"Ji?" He asked stupidified.

"Ji haan."

*Flashback ends*
************


"Hey beautiful! Kya tum mujhe nurse station ka raasta bata sakti ho?"

She looked up at the tall man with good built n a no. of tattoos.

"Ugh! Disgusting!" She muttered eyeing them.

"Kya kaha?" He raised his eye brows.

She saw aqua blue eyes looking deeply into her green ones with a question in them.

"Nurse station jaane ke liye yahan se left lijiye aur straight jayiye." She said irritated.

"Nahi! Tumne mere tattoos ko dekh kar 'disgusting' kaha na?" He asked in a detective style.

"Haan kaha to?"

"Tumhe modern cheezein pasand nahi hain. Haina?"

She turned away from him and was walking when he came to her side and said

"Aisa attitude theek nahi hai. Logon par bura asar padta hai. Miss......." He looked at her lab coat n found the id card and said

"Oh!Dr. Riddhima Gupta."

She snatched away the id card and pointed her finger at him.

"Listen Mr........"

"Armaan. Armaan Mallik."

"Jo bhi ho, jis kaam ke liye aaye ho wahi karo. Mujhe pareshan karne ki koshish mat karo."

She said and litrally ran away from there.

"Beautiful!"
*********
"Hehe dekha! Riddhima par uska asar nahi hua." Muskaan chirped.

*Flashback*

"Hello beautiful nurse! kya aap 1 favor karengi?" He winked at her.

"Kahiye." She blushed.

"Dr. Kirti kahan milengi?"

"Hum batate hain." The gang appeared from behind.

"Aap?"

"Hum yahan ke.....resident doctors hain."

"Oh cool! Hi! I'm Dr. Armaan."

"Hi! Hum aapko Dr. Kirti se milne ka rasta bata dengi, lekin hum nahi bata sakte."

"Kyun nahi bata sakte?"

"Wahan jo doctor hain. Wo hum sabki in charge hain. Wahi aapko bata sakti hain ki Dr. Kirti kahan milengi."

"Aap log kyun nahi bata sakte?"

"Rules hain. In charge doctor hi dusre in charge doctor ke baare mein bata sakta hai."

"Wierd! Anyways alright."

*Flashback ends*

"Bhaago!!!!! Hitler aa gayi." Atul said and they all ran away from the scene.
***********

"Interns. Jaisa ki maine aapse kaha tha hume 3 naye doctors ne join kiya hai. Inmein se 1 senior doctor hai."

She turned and introduced them.

"Dr. Siddhant Modi."

"Hi" He smiled widely. He had understood they were playing a prank on him and took it sportingly.

"Hi!" They smiled sheepishly.

"Dr. Tamanna Modi."

She smiled sweetly at them.

Oh o. They thought. 1 haath se nikal gayi.

"Aur hamare naye senior doctor........"

"Dr. Armaan Mallik!"

He grinned at them.

They were petrified! They had pulled the biggest prank on their senior doctor?!
*************
Part 7

"Ok. Interns aap sab mil lijiye aur phir apni apni duties resume kar lijiye."

"Dr. Kirti hamari duites?"

Tamanna aked her.

"Aap aaj se hi duties karenge?" Dr. Kirti was surprised.

"Ji."

"Ok, to Dr. Siddhant aur aap Dr. Anjali aur Dr. Abhimanyu ke saath Cancer ward mein honge aur Dr. Riddhima aap Dr. Armaan ko ICU mein assist karengi."

"Ji ma'am."

She left when.......

*Beep* *Beep*

"Aa gaya hero ka message!"

"Kya aaya hai?"

Da longest distance in da world is not between north n south. It is wen I stand in frnt of u n u ignore me.

"Wow! Tera Raj to yahin hain yaar!" Nikita said.

"Bas bohot hua! Aaj to main pakka use bata dungi ki main Simran nahi hun."

"Lekin tumhe uski itni chinta kyun ho rahi hai?" Atul asked.

Riddhima was speechless.

Everyone shrugged and went back to their duties.

Riddhima worked under Armaan but her mind was else where.

Unknown to her a pair of eyes were watching her and smirking.

Jaane tu mera kya hai, jaane tu mera kya tha,
Tu hi mera har pal, tu hi har lamha tha..
Jaane kaisi kashish hai, jaane kaisi khalish hai,
Kyu yeh saans thami hai, aankhon mein kyu nami hai..
Hai dosti humko yakeen tha, dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha,
Hai kaisa yeh dard naya sa, kyu dil lagta tuta tuta sa,
Janaa dil jaana, kaise maine naa jaana,
Ki pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa..
Janaa dil jaana, kaise tune naa jaana,
yeh pyaar yahi hai, haan jaane tu ya jaane naa..
Jaane tu mera kya hai, jaane tu mera kya tha,
Tu hi mera har pal, tu hi har lamha tha..
Hhooooo'
Hoti thi tujhse subah har din ki,
Tere dopher se sham ki dhun thi ,
Hoti thi raatein teri baaton mein khoye,
Tere khayalon mein hi jaage aur soye..
Tu jo nahi to kya raha..
Jaane tu mera kya hai, jaane tu mera kya tha,
Tu hi mera har pal, tu hi har lamha tha..
Jaane kaisi kashish hai, jaane kaisi khalish hai,
Kyu yeh saans thami hai, aankhon mein kyu nami hai..
Janaa dil jaana, kaise maine naa jaana,
Ki pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa..
Janaa dil jaana, kaise tune naa jaana,
yeh pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa..


She remembered all the times till now. When she first received the mis calls. Then the messages. All the memories came flooding back to her.

"Dr. Riddhima aapka dhyaan kahan hai?"

"Ji...?"

"Aapka dhyaan kahan hai? Aap abhi abhi pateint ki jagah mujhe injection deni waali thi." Armaan said.

"Sorry sir!" She apologized.

"Wow! Aapne apologize kiya? 8th wonder of the world!"

"Zyada udne ki zaroorat nahi hai Dr. Dhyaanleva! Meri galti thi isiliye apologize kiya." She fumed.

This guy was making her go nuts.

"Dr. Dhyaanleva? Hmm, nice name."

She walked off when

*Beep* *Beep*

Oh jaane jaana laut ke aana!
Hui khata ab maan ja!

Waise Simran ye tumhe gaana chahiye. Itne din ho gaye ab tak 1 bhi call ya msg nahi? Mujhe bhool gayi kya?

She messaged back.

I'm very sorry, but I'm not Simran. So plz dont msg me.

*Beep* *Beep*

Achcha mazak kia. Par hasi nahi aayi. Agar tum busy ho to bol sakti ho aise msgs karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.


She replied back.

Dekhiye. Main Simran nahi hun. Plz mujhe sms mat kijiye.

*Beep* *Beep*

Kya yaar Simmi! Ab tum mujhe gussa dila rahi ho. Khair chodo! Pata hai ab main Mumbai aa gaya hun. Tumse milne aaunga.


She saw the message and kept the phone. Let the 2 lovers meet and sort out the things. She thought.
**********


Ho gaya! I know main kuch ghante late hun par I was a bit busy. Mere FF ki yaad aayi thi kya tab? *raises eyebrows* 😆 chaddo! hope you liked the parts n a heart wrenching news......
Ye FF kal khatam ho jayega 😭
Mujhe aur mere FF ko miss karna haan?
Baaki ka emotional speech kal! 😆

Take care
Love,
Ashu

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
heyyy dear,
awsome parts
continue soon

first one to comment

&
😡yaa update longer part😡

😆


love
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Edited by Riddss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Heyyyyyyyyyyy TUTI FRUTI🤗

Sniff* sniff*😭😭main 2nd😭😭.....par chalega😛😆😆
Part was Great👏⭐️
Hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😍
AT LAST to armaan ki entry thik tarah se kiya☺️
I love u more for that🤗
he is really a DHEYAANLEVA☺️😳😳
eager to know what will happened next😛
Jaldi continue kar😛
Me waiting eagerly😍
Thanku for the PM

Love ya
Urs PP
😳
Edited by Prinnia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

hey ....

awesum parts....

AR meeting is nice....

yaar yeh simran naam ki ladki hai bhi ya nahi....😕

ya armaan pehle se hi ridhima ko janta hai.....???😕

waiting for next part to see if simran really exit or not..???😆

cont. soon...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hahahaha good parts
let the two lovers meet[AR]n soet out the things
thnks for pm
continue soon
TC
GAURAV
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great updates di 😃Oho ab toh mujhe aur bhi jyada lag raha hai ki armi ridz ko jaanta hai n simren koi bhi nahi hai😉 Kya😲Aap itni jaldi ff khatam kar rahe ho??But i understand time ka bohat prob rahta hai....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Hey Speedie!!

Awee I liked these parts!!
They r great but I have a feeling Armaan noes everything bout this!!
So sweet!!
N yeah Shilla's nicknams DHYANLEVA is soooooo correct!!
Uss ke alava mera dhyaan hota kahan hai??
Sorry for short but I love you!!

Jini

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