OS - Kahin toh hogi woh...updated part 3 pg 12 - Page 2

Wow!!

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

JUST WOW

Thanks so much. I will continue. 😊

Originally posted by: desigurl953

really touched my heart...and really dont ant this to happen

Thanks...this is just my imagination, not my prediction😊

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

I know it's an OS but please write more...sounds greedy but .....please dont stop it like this...

I usually don't stop abruptly...😊

Originally posted by: ansah

oh it was so beautiful have tears in my eye...so beautifully described

i think i am being greedy but u should think of contuning it..... 😊

Believe it or not, I was tearful myself by the time I finished this piece. I will continue😊

Originally posted by: -Premeena-

please do continue... dont leave them unhappy...!!! make them meet at the dargah woww... that would be awesome..!! pls dont make it sad...!!

Wait for the next part to see where how when why they meet😊

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

wow, it was just sooo wonderfully written, really touching!! loved the way you incorporated the song and yeah that is the perfect way to get Pari back, loved it!!!! 👏

It was the song that inspired me and I decided to write on it. I have no idea how Pari came into the picture...I myself didn't realize when I brought her in. I did not intend on doing so initially. 😊

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Wow!!

beautifully written and gratefully received!!

absolutely wonderful ..

I have added you as a buddy .. in case you decide to write again .. although i think you should continue this OS as a ff!!

thanks again!!

Uzma xx

Thanks so much. Look out for the next part either tonight or tomorrow 😊

Originally posted by: Sananya09

Omg yes yes yes! 😃 Your continuing! Haii your so nice 😊
*Does the mini happy dance while sitting down* 😆 Thank you!! & Btw if you didn't infer from my comment -- Your OS was greaaattt! 😃

I got that bit 😃
Thanks so much..it means a lot to me. Really! 😊