FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4 - Page 46

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!....
really love maneet scenes!...
good to see that geet is now ok!...
i think geet should consult maan about the job thing!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

sweet scorpio - thanxs dear..yah geet is just gettin there

maneet1985 - thanxs darling

sireesha. - MERA is my fav too

Sigma - glad u liked 104 & 105..
yah swimming pool was in my mind for quite some time
actually since the first time I showed maan swimming &
geet watching...I think part 5...finally got it in exactly
after 100 parts...

priya - yaar u r really busy off late..mujhe message nahi karthi..

sona - thanxs glad u read 104 & 105 togather...
right...lifestlye will change but lets see how geet manages that change

Starry_night - yah her friends are really cute..so it is becoming
difficult to write..their confrantation with Mrs MSK

shaz - thanxs dear

kashndsel4eva - thanxs dear

misbah92 - so sweet

thanxs u guys..for motivating me...
glad u all liking it...
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi, I am commenting for 2 parts together. You have so cutely explained how she worried about hubby's fasting and the way she took initiative in keeping him intact with some fruits. Her reluctance to hear Smriti's explanation of the anxiety of Ranbhir & their 1st kiss was understandable. The person in question is her BIL & her friends are still ignorant about her marital status. Iw as expecting her to collapse during the Pooja (@ lord Krishna's birth time) and thank god she controlled herself till she reached home. Yes it is really the torturous moment for the parents who lost their child. Maan did the good thing by allowing her to cry her heart out than consoling her. Did I hear Maan telling our Khushi will be back? So dear, are you planning for Khushi now or she is already in pipeline (Shimla cottage encounter)?😉😉😉

All in all 2 very good & Promising parts. But why on the earth she has to hunt for a job? Yet again you became merciless & brought some misunderstanding between them or what? Please yaar, enough of Geet's misery. Let her have some peaceful life for some time atleast. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

the spell she always had on him..would just pull him to indulge into
her arms & her touch..he hugged her & kissed her passionately..
geet smiled as if that is wat she longed for all the while..

part 106

he buried his hands in her hair, holding her head still.. his fingers flexed
against her scalp, sending tingling sensations down her spine,,
maans mouth angled over hers.. searing her with hot.. fast kisses...
he devoured her.. destructively... sucking her bottom lip.. nibbling on her top...
he touched his tongue to the corners of her mouth, then swept..across the closed seam..
the line where two layers were held togather, urging her to part for him..
they were forced to brake apart with the ring of his phone..
geet cleared her throat & voiced weakly
geet - i will get ur lunch
maan - umm..(answereing the call)

maan finishes the call & goes to his study..calls for geet ...geeeeeeeeeet
geet - ji..
maan - i have left my laptop in the office..get me ur laptop
geet - ji..
she gives him the laptop & walks out...
maan - pwd kya hain..I am sure it will be Maan Khurana(he smiled proudly)
geet - smiled & walked away..
maan tried to maankhurana..did'nt work
he tried maansinghkhurana..did'nt work
he tried maanskhurana still did'nt work
maan - geeeeeeet..geeeeeeeet
geet - ji
maan - pwd kya hain?
geet - maan khurana (maan smiled)
maan - I tried ..its not working..how do u spell it
geet - m-a-a-n-k-h-u-r-a-n-a..she spelled out
maan - I tried that...still not working
geet(smiles) - ur missing the attitude in maankhurana
maan - What???
geet - try maankhurana with an attitude
maan - geet pheheliyun main baath karna banth karo...
geet - maan khurana all in caps....
she touches end of his nose & smiles & goes to the kitchen
maan types MAANKHURANA..he smiles at her thought of maan khurana with an attitude..
kya karoo main ise pagal ladki ka...

this was the first time maan ever logged in her laptop...it openned with a backdrop of his
smiling face..he wondered were did she captured those pics from..
there was a dedicated folder on krishna's school work..he explored in detail & wondered
how much she is been working on his studies..
meanwhile there was a message from pooja...did u check the offer letters..
that caught is attention..he just checked the minimzed pages..that led him to the offer
letters from Bajajs, infosys & relience..
he checked the details
Bajaj's - Asst Marketing manger..
location - Mumbai
salary - 15lks per annum

Infosys - International client research manager
location - bangalore
salary - 18lks per annum

reliance - accounts & media incharge
location - delhi
salary - 16 lks per annum

maan was impressed at the offers & tried to get more details..
checked all the mails were dated 2 months earlier & she has almost missed the dead lines
pooja messaged again - geet decide fast..why are u stopping urself
these are like a dream job offer...I am sure ur future huby will not stop u from working

maan did'nt like that future hubby part..he closed the laptop & went to the kitchen
stood at the doorstep of the kitchen..she looked happy & she was arranging the food on the table..
he tried looking beyond that..she looked confused..Is she not picking the job because of me..
he worried..thousands of questions played in his mind..why did'nt she tell me about
all this..if she wanted to work..she could join Khurana's..its her own business..
why is she not ?? wat is it stopping her...?

geet - aap wanha kyun khade hain..
maan walks in & sits on the chair..lost in his thoughts
geet - kya baat hain..is there anything bothering u
maan breaks out of his thoughts..nahi I am fine
still wondering wat she wants to do..why is she still not comfartable
talking to him..about her job or wat she wants to do..
she still not able to share her feelings was worring him..
maan - while I was on ur laptop..pooja messaged..on skype
geet - umm..
maan - she is the same person whom we met in mumbai right?
geet - yah...she really drools at u
maan(smiled)..when are u telling them about our marriage
geet did'nt expect that question...there was little of concern in his tone..she felt that
she fumbled..ji wow..
maan - kya baat hain..tum unhe keh kyu nahi dethi..
geet cluctches her duppata & gets away up from the chair..


geet - i tried ..every time some thing happens & i am not able to say
i am so scared how they will all react...there are the only friends
I have..i don't want to do anything that would lead to any misunderstanding
maan - do u want me to talk to them..
nahi she said promptly..
maan smiled..seeing that hint of jealous insecurty in his wife's eyes..
he enjoyed that sight ..he could just love her again..for that innocent
feared face of hers..
maan walked to the washbasin to wash his hands ..geet gave the napkin &
rested her head on his arms..mujhe pata nahi woh loog kaise react karenghe
mujhe dar lagtha hain..
maan - don't worry main hoon na..& stroked her arms..comfarting her..

precap
maan getting angry about not deciding on her career

hope u all like the update & pics...thaxs for all ur comments...much waited for..please do comment...I love reading it
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar, The swimming pool was cool. and her convo with her friends and her dilemma about informing them all about her marital status and why she is indecisive about taking up a job. All have come out well. But I can't understand your precap! Jobs are hunting her (the way she the offers from many companies) but are telling she is hunting for job?

Anyways, let Mr. Khurana offer her the best post soon otherwise he will lose one able hand in his empire.

Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh muskaan,
the swim was so romantic.. and geet really has to tell her friends that she is married to MSK. i can't wait till they find out.. more soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiiiiiiii.....cute one... loved the way you r describing Geet....Now I am thinking of being Geet's Fan :D.. MANEET.. they r made for each other... Regarding the job hunt.. we all know that she will be working with Khurana Constructions...But I am wondering why Maan is not thinking about.. Did he forgot that she has done her MBA ??.. Or did he wants to be at home or may be due to that accident and all?... Waiting for the next update to know about Maan's reaction..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it mushky👏👏👏👏....i loved the way geet is jealous and not making maan talk to her fds😊...anyways i happy the truth is revealed to maan abt her job hunt....I think the precap is awesome...she should concentrate on her carreer....i know maan would make a decision....

Anyways it was romantic,fantastic update...

love------vinitha

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Posted: 14 years ago
One more Fab delivery from your side sweet heart !!!...👏 I like the way you are adding pictures...In the Janmashtami update it was perfect :)..

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Posted: 14 years ago
So, at last maan came to know her credibilities after redaing the offer letters from other companies. Till such time, he had completely forgotten that she did her project in his company and how good she were in analyzing the customer requirements etc. ow he is thinking why she didn't opted to work with him. But what she could have done when he wanted a 24/7 wife. Where will she find time for her official work? But 1 thing is sure that if she decides fats, the other needy / eligible person can start their work the fast. So allow Geet to decide fast on those offers. It would be better she accepts a job @ Khuran's as she knows the in and out of the company & its requirements and also she will get some time for her to work on Krish's projecta nd to take care of Maan.

Jaya

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