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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG.......i just loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee your ff. i don't know how to explain .i was so lost in the pain of maan.its awsome.loved it by the core of my heart.and really thanks a million for the pm.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Buh Thank God .. she is still alive .. lovely update !
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Posted: 14 years ago
MUSKSS!!! I was desperately waiting for this and it turned out so beautiful, thanks a tone for the awesome update, made my day!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx for the heart attack muski di. but i love for not doing anything to geet. and yippee let's see what maan does. and that family dinner can't wait till next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for late reply sweety....it was lovely updatešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ and at last geet is safe and ohh poor soul maan he cried so much...plzz make him happy in next part...i cant see him crying.

Love you,
Vinithaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
i knew u couldn't do that to us, geet had to be safe and sound
I think u portrayed maan's emotions amazing, his sadness and then elation at seeing geet alive
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg muskan u made me cry like a big loser!! I was a little apprehensive with what to expect from the part.. I was sooooo hoping geet survived bt felt really worried bout wot could happen but u just twisted it again! This was undoubtedly one of my fav parts til date! I feel so relieved and so overwhelmed by this amazing revelation tht geet has survived! Gosh I wanna hug and kill u at the same time!! I was so upset in the last part bt didn't cry, and this time round I actually did- out of sheer excitement n happiness tht geet is still with us lol aww muskan I can't tell u how happy I am!! Simply beauitful part.. Beautifully written as well, I must add. Loved the way u described the entire situation from the rain in the beginning, to maan's actions and feelings. The atmosphere, the flow of the scenes... wonderfully put together muskan. I love this ff and I can't believe how well u'v done this all..! After the twist I was expecting tons of rona dhona from my side.. but am so glad the rona dhona is for a good reason 😳 šŸ˜† Muskan... Hats off to u hun! Amazing part!xxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - mujhe kuch nahi karna..mujhe sirf tumhe dehkna hain ..tumhe mahesus karna hain
har pal ..har lamha..

part 102

maans phone kept ringing...
geet - maan aap ka phone
maan - rehna do..
geet - aap mujhe dararahe ho..kya huva hain?
sab kuch teehk hain na?
maan realized she was getting worried seeing him like this..he composed himself
maan - I was missing u sweetheart..(his tears rolled down..he looked away)
geet - main to ghar main hi thi..


maan - tumhara phone bhi nahi laag raha..tha..so ..
geet - not sure..I have been trying to call my friends too..it said some network problem
geets phone rang..she got worried..she never gets calls this late..but she was not sure
how maan would react she spoke on phone now.. she ignored the call..
maan - tum baat karlo main change kar le tha hoon..

maan pushed his hair in relief & he answered his phone call it was from the hospital
doctor - it is a good news the body is not Mrs. Khuranas
maan - thanxs for ur help..she is fine

maan called the IG & informed him..she was fine..
how many times he had to himself..she is fine..she fine..she is with me..next to me.
he just wanted to say that again & again & again.

geet saw the call was from smriti...
geet - hi smriti..
smiti's father - nahi beta hum smriti ke papa bole rahe hain
geet - namaste uncle ji
uncle - namaste beta..thanxs beta...thanxs a lot
geet - ji its alright(she thought it was all about the lehenga)
uncle - god bless u..thanx GOD u guys did'nt go to Chandini Chowk today
geet - ji(she wonderd wat was all that)
uncle - smriti ne khaha ki tumhare wajah se aaj ..they cancelled their trip to chandini chowk
thanxs beta ..agar tum nahi hoti to...(his voice was heavy..he gave the phone to smriti)
geet - yeh aap kya keh rahe hain
smriti - thanxs geet..
geet - kya huwa?
smriti - tumhe news nahi dehka?
there was a major explosion in chandini chowk today..55 people died & many injured
geet was shocked & said bye in faded voice..
she ran to maan & hugged him from back..
she looked really shaken & moved..
geet - aap chandini chowk gaye the ?
maan turned & cried into her..sorry maan..she cried ..
she knew wat he would have faced in those few hrs..his eyes said it all when he walked in
she tried to make him feel light..
geet - aap ko laga ki main..
maan - geeeeeet(he closed her mouth with his hands)
geet - aap ko laga ki itne jaldi aap ka picha chod doongi
maan was too emotional to say anything..he looked aaway..she kissed the end of his nose & got his dinner
after the dinner..maan went into the study ..
maan got a impt mail & got held up....
geet came & stood at the door..she peeped in twice urging to say some thing & walked away
maan looking into his laptop..dressed in his vest & tracks...
maan - geet kuch kaam tha
geet - ji woh
maan - umm..
geet - kal janamashtami hain
maan - umm
geet - I wanted u to fast..(she closed her mouth as if she spoke too much)
maan - ok (he continued working)
geet - nahi..woh!! I usually fast for krish..but ..after his accident I thought ..we both should
maan - geet maine khaha teekh hain...tell me wat to do tomorrow(he was still looking at his laptop) u don't have to explain anything..I am fine with fasting..
geet babaji..yeh to man gayai..she still stood at the door wondereing
maan - kuch aur bhi kehna hain?
geet - nahi..
maan - phir yanha kyun khadi hoo?
geet - main aap ke ghar main kanhi bhi kade nahi ho sakthi kya?
maan - nahi geet mera matlab yeh nahi tha?(he looked at her)
geet - kya matlab tha?(she turned clutching her duppata)
maan - tum aise kadi raho ghi to main kaam kais karoonga(rolled his eyes..knowing wat she wanted)
geet - kyun maine to kuch bhi nahi khaha (moving her head..shaking those ears)
maan walked to her..tum kabhi kuch nahi kah thi..


lekin tumhare yeh jhumke(he kisses her ears..geet turns her face in shy)..he slides her kurthi..

bendind down ..his breath touching her neck line & over her bulged portions ..further down
tumhari yeh kamar ke boonde..kisses her waist she tucks in her tummy...he bends further down
tumhare yeh payal..kisses her ankel she lifts that leg & closes her eyes..yeh mujhe se tumhari dil ka hal
keh dethi hain.. geet main..wo main..she pulls her leg away & goes to the bedroom
and lies on the bed hiding her face ..maan..wispers geet..tickling her senses
geet - aap ja ke kaam kar loo
maan - lekin tumhare jhumke to kuch aur he kehrahe hain..
& caress his cheeks & bites her ears..she removes her jhumka..
geet - yeh loo..inse pyar karloo..mujhe sona hain..
maan - mujhe bhi sona hain..& cuddles next to her..
geet - ummm..
maan - waise yeh tumhara ghar hain..mera nahi..
she turns into his embrace & sleeps like a baby..maan was very compossed
contented with his love in his arms, satisfied just to see her smile, pleasured
treasured her his life..alive..

maan walks into the hospital..& sees the doctor..
the doctor takes him to the morgue..there was a cold & damp feel..
maan wakes up panting looking for geet..he searched for her every where..
he pushed his hair..behind & got worried...he went to the gym, washroom
guestroom, krish's room...his heart started beating again when he saw her
in the kitchen..he hugged her...kanha challi jathi ho tum..he cried ..
geet - bura sapna dehka kya?
maan - umm!! (burring his face in her neck)
geet - main teehk hoon..aap ko pareshan karne ka liya
maan - tumhe jitna pareshan karna hain kar loo...bus humesha mera samne yun hi rehna
geet - Oh!! to main aap ko pareshan karthi hoon
maan - nahi ..nahi..bilkul nahi..
geet - phir aap abhi kya kah rahe the..
maan - mera matlab hain
geet(faking anger looking from corner of her eyes) - phir kya matlab hain
maan - tum jo bhi karthi ho..bus karthi raho..mujhe tumhari har ada pasand hain
(cuddled her)
geet(smiled) - aacha jaldi se ready ho javoo ..mandir jaana hain..
maan kisses her cheeks & goes to the washroom..
he gets ready & comes down geet was waiting with puja thal..

they drive to the krishna temple..maan prayed for her well being & also
thanked god to have given her to him ..again & again...
he realized how much he has been careless with her..her feelings..

they sat at the mandir steps
geet - we will have to come again at 11.30pm today
maan - why so late
geet - fast is till 12..midnight..birth time of lord krishna..
will u be able fast untill then
maan - ur questioning Maan Singh Khurana?
geet - nahi nahi...I am just concerned

precap
janmasthami...

thanxs guys..for replying to the ff & all ur suggestions..thanxs thanxs a lot
please do comment & press the like button
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

šŸ˜†Me 1st...hehehehešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...wel WOW another great updatešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...really lovely...Maan was trying to hide his feeling n pretended to be normal not to wori her anymore😳😳😳...I guess this is luv😊....Geet frineds and parents were so thankful to GeetšŸ˜‰...I like it...also when she come to knw abt it...luv it hu she confront him😳....he was asureing himself😊....she is wiv him fine...safe😳...love it...I really like when u include picxšŸ‘šŸ¼...trying to visualize ur FF to us😃.....I kind of didnt like it when he said go from herešŸ˜•,I was like...he was abt to die without her now he talking like this...bt u made clear point hereā­ļø....azamingšŸ‘...OMG!!! he got worid she nt @ home after bad dream😲.... kiya planning ker rahi ho MuskišŸ˜†...raat ki Baara baješŸ˜‰....hmmm.......1st tym ever The Maan Singh Khurana fast keri gašŸ˜†...Keep updating😊 ...u must be saying yeh larki pagal hai...PM se phile...post res ker diya🤣...hehehe...even u r so chuky🤪..u didnt told me update will be there in few minsšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...i abt to go 2 sleep😊...hehehe....waiting 4 next shot....😊😊😊😊

Edited by charmed ones - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ha... everything back to normal........loved it yaaar...will write a detailed comment later.. juzz got up from sleeeep..

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