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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI 😊
Loved the intro 😊
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interestinG!!!!

luking forward to it!!!

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thank u so much guys for ur overwhelming response nd support i'll definately update it as soon as possible. thanx once again
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Hi every1 first of all thanx a lot for ur Support nd comments here's d Part 1 of my Story hope u all will like it. pls feel free to criticise if u dont like it.😊

Part 1:


It was 11 am in d morning nd Geet is Getting ready. She's not at all happy nd no one dare to talk to her wen she had Bad mood Except her Younger sis Shilpa who came to her nd notices dat her Di is nt fine wid d guests coming today. She goes to her.

Shilpa: oho Di!! U look so smashing today. Is it because of d guest coming today?

Geet(while wearing her earrings): shut up Shilpa! U knw I m not in a mood of joke.

Shilpa: Breaking News!! Geet Malhotra is not in d mood of joke. Is it d impact of Maan Singh Khurana?

Geet: Shilpa...

Shilpa: C'mon Di. U r so lucky dat u r going to meet Maan Singh Khurana. U knw hw many girls Die for his one look?

Geet: Oh really, Den y dnt u marry him?

Shilpa: Kar leti Di but age difference bahut hai. isiliye. But dnt worry I'll be happy being her Sister-in-law.

Geet: Shilpa, dnt count hens before hatching of eggs, bcoz I m nt going to marry anyone. Allrite.

Shilpa: Di......

Their conversation interrupted wen their Mother comes inside.

Malini: Geet, u r nt ready yet? Dey will be here at any moment.

Shilpa: Mom Di is almost ready. Can't u see excitement at her face(teasing geet) hai na Di.

Geet: Shut up shilpa. (den turns towards her mom) nd Mom wo log Padma Mausi k Family frnd hai sirf isiliye main un logo se milne k liye taiyaar hui hoon. But dnt expect me anything further.

Malini: Geet, Beta y dnt u understand....

Geet: Y dnt u understand mom? Its my life nd I dnt want to marry anyone. M I being any burden on u?

Malini(getting emotional): ya u r very big enough to take ur decisions nw. who am I to interfere? Its my mistake only dat I think of my Daughter's better future. Fine just nw I m going to call dem nd tell dem nt to come as my daughter has her own life. Ok

Both shilpa nd Geet looked at each other den at their Mom. Dey knew that its nothing more den a trick of their mom nd gave"she'll never change" look. Geet comes to her mom nd hugs her.

Geet: Mom, I m sorry. But dnt say like dat. U knw na hw much I love u. Acha fine I'll meet dem nicely nd will nt do anything which annoys u. ok

Malini: really?

Geet: ya..

Malini: dats like my geet. I really love u beta.(hugging her)

Shilpa: nd mom me?

Malini: ha baba u also (hugging both of dem) acha Geet nw get ready fast. I m in d kitchen nd Shilpa pls come to help me.

Shilpa: oho Mom u knw I dnt like all dis.

Geet: Shilpa go nd help mom..

Shilpa: but di....

Suddenly Geet's Cellphone rang nd their conversation breaks.

Geet(Happily): I knw ye kiska call hai?

Shilpa: pata hai Vindhya Di ka. Aur waise bhi is waqt sirf wahi hai jo tumhara mood theek kar sakti hai. u carry on I'll go nd help mom.

Shilpa goes from dere nd Geet answers d call

Geet: Hi Di! Hws u? thank god u called. U knw hw much I was missing u.

Vindhya: I knw sweety. I know dat my little Sis must be nervous as she is Going to meet her Mr. right today. Hhmmm Maan Singh Khurana.

Geet: Stop it Di! Nw u dnt start. Already shilpa has teased me a lot.

Vindhya: ok Baba! But y dnt u consider him as ur Mr. right?

Geet: u knw d reason Di. I m not ready for d marriage. Nd moreover I m just 21 yrs old nw. dere r lots of thing to do. I have to set up my career, wants to get Shilpa well-settled nd every1 is dragging me to dis shaadi business.

Vindhya: Geet no one is dragging u to dis. Its ur life nd decision will be urs only. Nd who said that u r going to marry him tomorrow only. Just meet him once that's it. May be he'll understand u wen u'll tell ur problem to him.

Geet: he have to otherwise I had a Back up plan.

Vindhya: Geet u r nt going to use any of ur plan got it.

Geet: but di...

Vindhya: For me.. Pls.

Geet: ok fine u know I can't refuse u.

Vindhya:Dats like my sis. nw just cheer up nd meet him ok.

Suddenly Shilpa calls from outside tells dat dey have arrived.

Geet: Acha Di I'll talk to u later. Dey have came.

Vindhya: ok sweety Bye. Nd remember wat I said to u. love u

Geet: love u too di! Bye.

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Geet's Mom Welcomes Maan, Savitri Devi nd Maan's Frnd. Dr. Armaan.

Malini: pls have a seat.

Savitri Devi: thanx, Malini beta Pls dnt be so Formal. We all r comfortable.

Malini: tats so nice of u Aunty. I m so glad dat u came.

Savitri Devi: Kaise nahi aate beta. We heard a lot about u nd ur Daughters from Padma. D way u managed ur family after ur Husband's Death is really remarkable.

Malini: yes Aunty, But it couldn't be possible without Geet's Support. She was dere for me always.

Mention of Geet's name has somewhere brought smile on Maan's face which is noticeable by armaan.

Armaan: Dude, Naam sun k ye haal hai Dekhega to kya hoga.

Maan(Muffled): shut up Armaan, its nothing like dat.

Armaan: dnt hide it frm me Dude, I can see clearly on ur face.

Maan: Armaan....

Shilpa Notices dat something fishy is happening b/w both of dem so she interrupts.

Shilpa: Any problem Maan ji... (actually she was going to call Jiju but got scared wat will happen if Geet Listens her calling maan as Jiju).

Maan: No.. no problem.

Armaan: no dere is a problem. Actually we heard so many praises of Geet so we are really dyieng to meet her. Right maan.

Maan(Giving his angry look): ya right.

Shilpa: Bus itni si baat. Main abhi Di ko leke aati hoon.(Den looks at Savitri Devi) May I Aunty?

Savitri Devi: ya Beta sure.

Shilpa Goes in to call geet. Armaan winks at Maan Den says

Armaan: Dude ur Sister-in-law is really Good. If she's like dat den I wonder hw will be Geet.

Maan: Armaan shut up!

Armaan: relax Dude m not taking ur Geet away.

Maan: Armaan.....

Den suddenly Maan Notices Geet coming. She was wearing Red Suit wid light matching jewellery. She wears no Make-up but yet looks beautiful in her simplicity. She's Holding tray of Tea in her hand while shilpa helps her by holding snacks. For a moment Maan was really blown away wen he first Saw her. Armaan First looks at Geet den at Maan.

Armaan: Dude Control. She'll come to u only.

Maan: huh!! No actually.....(realizing wat he was doing)

Armaan: Relax Dude!

Geet puts d tray on table nd turned to savitri devi.

Geet: Namaste Aunty

Savitri Devi: Namaste Beta. God bless u. Come sit besides me.

She goes nd Sits wid her.

Savitri Devi: So beta, Padma has told me a lot about u. U r doing Architecture na?

Geet: yes aunty. Final year after dat internship.

Savitri Devi: dats really good. So our company is going to have a Good architect.

Geet said nothing but smiled. She remembers wat her Di said to her "no blunders"

Savitri devi: Maan, Aap kuch nahi poochenge?

Maan: wo.....Dadi

Armaan(interrupts): Actually Dadi. Maan wants to talk to geet in alone. (turning towards Malini) So aunty if u dnt mind....

Malini: ya Sure beta. Geet y dnt u Show ur Room to Maan.

Dis is d only thing dat Geet hates wen someone comes to see a girl. But she has to do wat her mom says.

Savitri Devi: haan Maan, jayiye isi bahane aap log kuch baat bhi kar lenge.

Maan: ji dadi.

Armaan(whispers): All d best dude..

Maan gave him a angry look nd Armaan again winks at him.

Geet gestures him to come while Maan follows her.

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Both were in Geet's Room nw. Maan Notices dat her room is well maintained. He saw d books arranged well at rack nd some novels lying on tables. He also notices Shields nd Certificates on d walls nd Shelves.

Maan: Nice Room!

Geet(to herself): Soch kya rahi hai Geet! Bol de isse acha mauka fir nahi milega.

Maan: u said something.

Geet: ya, I want to say something to u.

Maan: I guess for dat only we are here.

Geet: no its nt abt wat u r thinking. Actually......

Maan: ya say it.

Geet(closes her eyes nd say it at once): I can't marry u. pls pls pls reject me. Give any of d excuses but pls refuse from dis marriage. Pls.

Den she opens her eyes nd saw Maan standing dere Confused nd Shocked.

Geet: listen I dnt want to hurt u. but I can't marry u.

Maan: do u love some1 else.

Geet: No!

Maan: den is ur Family is putting any kind of a pressure on u?

Geet: No not at all.

Maan: den wats d problem? U dnt like me?

Geet: nothing like dat. Actually I dnt want to marry anyone.

Maan: y?

Geet: because I want to support my Family. My mom has faced lots of hardships in her life nd nw I wanted to do something for her. But if I got married den I'll get stuck up in my married life nd I can't able to do anything. Datsy I m saying to u dat pls reject me.

Maan Smiles by seeing Geet's innocence nd Concern towards her Family. He thought that Padma aunty is rite Geet is different from other girls of her Age.

Maan: but there must be a reason to reject u nd y should I reject u? u can also reject me.

Geet: ya I can But I dnt have any reason to reject u.

Maan: nd u think I had?

Geet: ya ofcourse, u had many reasons.

Maan: like?

Geet: like u can say dat I m nt ur types or u dnt like my behaviour or our standards doesn't match etc. etc. say anything but pls reject me.

Maan: ok fine dnt worry, I'll definitely help u.

Geet(smiles): really? thank u so much. U dnt know hw much relieved I m nw.

Maan says nothing but smiles

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Outside d room Shilpa tries to Hear their Conversation wen Someone Taps at her shoulder continously. She gets irritate nd Turned to look back nd get surprised to see Armaan over dere.

Armaan: What r u doing here?

Shilpa: y? its my home I can stand wherever I want. U r d guest wat r u doing here?

Armaan: oh yes rite. Ur home by d way does Geet nd Maan knows dat u r trying to listening their conversations.

Shilpa(Scared): No, pls dnt tell to Di otherwise she'll definitely kill me.

Armaan: Relax I won't say anything. Actually I had Came for same purpose for which u came.

Shilpa: really?

Armaan: yup. By d way what do u do?

Shilpa: oh me I m a Medical student nd trying hard to get my internship in sanjeevani.

Armaan: y only Sanjeevani?

Shilpa: because it s d best Hospital nd I heard d doctors over dere r very good.

Armaan(obliged): I knw... thanx.

Shilpa: wat?

Armaan: nothing. Dnt worry u'll definitely get. Nd if u want I'll do recommendation for u. I knw many senior doctors over dere.

Shilpa: no thanx. I m Geet Malhotra's sis nd her sis doesn't need any kind of a recommendations.

Armaan: dats good. I like ur confidence.

Shilpa: thank u.

Armaan: By the way Shilpa don't u think dey r taking too much time.

Shilpa: ya, I think I should go nd call dem.

Armaan: can I also come?

Shilpa: ya sure.

Shilpa shows him d way while he follows her

Armaan(murmurs): Interesting.

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Maan nd Geet came outside d room every1 is very keen to knw wat happen between dem. But Geet is relaxed because she knews dat Maan will reject her.

Shilpa: kya hua Di? U look so Happy. Lagta hai Maan Khurana ka asar ho hi gya.

Geet: dnt worry my sweet sis. U'll came to knw Soon.

Savitri Devi asks to maan

Savitri Devi: To Maan Geet Kaisi lagi aapko? Agar aap chahe to ek-do baar aur mil sakte hai.

Maan: dobara milne ki koi zarurat nahi hai Dadi (den looks at Geet who is smiling) Geet Mujhe pasand hai.

Every1 is happy to listen except Geet who is in Shock. Shilpa Hugs Geet in happiness.

Shilpa: oh di I m so happy. Main abhi mithai lati hoon.

Armaan congrats Maan nd Savitri Devi hugs Malini who is overwhelmed in tears. Geet can't handle dis anymore. She quickly runs inside.

Savitri Devi: I guess she got Shied. Dnt worry let her go.

Maan knews very well y geet has gone inside nt because she was shy but she is angry.

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Geet is very angry. She throwed her Duppata away remove her earrings nd jewellery in Frustation.

Geet(in anger):bada besharam insaan hai. itni request kari, itna conveince kiya fir bhi nahi mana. In ladko ko seedhi tarah se koi baat samajh nahi aati. Babaji yeh kahan fasa diya aapne mujhe. Life mein Pehli baar lag raha hai ki Di ki baat maan kar galti kar di. Isse to acha hota ki maine apna Backup plan use kar liya hota.

Her thoughts were distracted wen her Cell phone rings she thought it would be her Vindhya Di but surprised to see an unknown no.

Geet: Hello!

Other side: Geet!

Geet: ya whose it?

Other side: its me Maan!

Geet puts her hand on speaker nd murmers to herself: Iski itni himmat ki itna hone k baad ye mujhe call kar raha hai. but ise mera no. kaise mila

Maan: hello Geet u dere?

Geet(realizing dat she's on call): ya, I m! anything important?

Maan: ya, I knw dat u r upset on me as I haven't lived up to ur expectations therefore I have taken ur no. from Shilpa. Actually I wana talk to u. so can we meet tomorrow.

Geet(again murmers): hadd ho gyi hai, yahan mera dimaag kharab ho raha hai aur ise Date ki padi hai.

Maan: geet.. u dere.

Geet: ya, umm I m nt sure I have my classes tomorrow.

Maan: dnt worry we'll meet after ur class at d Coffee Shop near ur college. If u want I can come to pick u from dere.

Geet: No!! I'll come by myself.

Maan: k den u'll be free by 5:00 so we'll meet at 5:30.

Geet: hw do u knw dat I'll free by 5:00?

Maan: Shilpa told me.

Geet(cursing shilpa): Shilpa tu to aaj gyi.....

Maan: u said something.

Geet: No.

Maan: k den see u tomorrow at 5:30. Bye!

Geet(in frustration):Bye!!

She cuts d call. Nd again murmurs to herself.

Geet: Coffee shop pe milna......... baat karni hai...... isko kya lagta hai jo ye chahega wahi hoga..... bilkul nahi..... Agar ye Maan singh Khurana hai to main bhi Geet Malhotra hoon..... Aur mujhse koi zabardasti nahi kara sakta...... dekhti hoon ki kal ye mujhe kaise reject nahi karta.....

Precap:

Maaneet's First unofficial date


Hey guys hope u like d Part 1 of my story. Pls do leave comment nd press d like button if u like it.

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was sooo enjoyable...hahh i also liked the parts of shilpa and armaan!!wanting to listen to their talks!!
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Originally posted by: crazzy-girl

it was sooo enjoyable...hahh i also liked the parts of shilpa and armaan!!wanting to listen to their talks!!


thanx a ton dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooooooooooooooooooooooow I Just Loved it
Thats Awesome
Simply Superb
Loved Maan-Geet and Armaan-Shilpa conversation
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanq so much for the PM
Pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it! It was amazing! can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was really a very enjoyable update 😊
Great work👏
Loved every part of it 😊
Shilpa is too sweet, so is Armaan 😊
Eagerly waiting for their coffee shop meeting 😊

Thanks for the PM 😊
Hope you update soon..... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was realy funy part but I have one problem I don't understand indian word soo hope if u can make tha word by English plzzz hope that I don't make any think rong for asking u dear and thanks alot for pm

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