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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lody

It was realy funy part but I have one problem I don't understand indian word soo hope if u can make tha word by English plzzz hope that I don't make any think rong for asking u dear and thanks alot for pm


sure dear. thanx for liking it nd giving ur Suggetions
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Nice FF
Liked 1st part
Armaan n Maan's relation n Geet n Shilpa's relation was fab
Loved their sweet nok jhoks
Maaneet's 1st convo was sweet
Looks lik Geet is gonna kill Shilpa 1st n Maan 2nd for sure
Update soon n im in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice FF

Liked 1st part
Armaan n Maan's relation n Geet n Shilpa's relation was fab
Loved their sweet nok jhoks
Maaneet's 1st convo was sweet
Looks lik Geet is gonna kill Shilpa 1st n Maan 2nd for sure
Update soon n im in ur pm list


Thank u shoo Much dear ur comments r always sweet nd Inspiring nd definately u'll be in my PM list. thanx once again😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Akriti

nice starting
it was really enjoyable part..........just loved it
lyked Maan-Geet n Shilpa-Armaan's convo
eagerly w8ng for Maaneet meeting
pls cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Niana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really like update nxt part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice.. I am so loving this romantic side of MAAN.. and friend armaan is so cute!! pls add me to ur PM list.. i look forward to reading more.. of this FF.
I love Maneet..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏omg i loved this ff
it so awesome
do continue cant wiat to read da nxt part
can u plz add me to ur pm list
cant wait for da nxt part
brilliant 👏👏 part 1 was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi everyone thank u so much for ur Lovely comment on Part 1. i m really very much overwhelmed wen i read ur comments. nw here's d Part 2. hope u like dat too. Pls feel free to criticise if u dnt like it.😊

PART 2:


Geet is sitting quietly on d dining table waiting for her breakfast. Shilpa is sitting next to her. She notices dat geet is lost in her own thoughts. She knows dat Geet is angry on her as she has given her no. to Maan nd Even told him her class timings but she knew her Di very well. She knews that Geet can't remain angry for her long.

Shilpa(shouting): Mom Did u heard today's Breaking News!!! Geet malhotra is sitting quietly on dining table (Den looks at Geet)

Geet says nothing but gives an angry look to her

Shilpa: wat happen Di? Y u r so quite today? Lost in Jiju's thoughts.

Geet: shilpa u better dnt dare to talk to me rite nw. nd By d way y u r calling him Jiju?

Shilpa: y? he'll be ur husband so in that case I'll be her sister-in-law so ultimately he'll become my Jiju only na.

Geet: Shilpa enough! Waise bhi I m nt talking to u.

Shilpa: dats wat I wanna knw Di. Y?

Geet:Y? dnt u knw anything?

Shilpa nodded her head in no.

Geet: y did u gave him my no.?

Shilpa: ab itne pyar se maang rahe the. Hw could I refuse?

Geet: oh really! To apna no. dena tha na. y u have given mine?

Shilpa: Ae le.. Di he's marrying u not me.

Geet: oh thanx for telling me. Nd about my classes timings?

Shilpa: wo di he wants to meet u nd u knw arranging meetings for two love birds is my Fav. Hobby.

Geet: Shut up shilpa!

Shilpa: Di chill nw! he's only going to meet u only, He'll nt kidnap u.(den holds her ears nd makes an innocent face) Acha Baba I m sorry. Ab to kaan bhi pakad liye. Pls maan jao.

Geet(looks at Shilpa): u r really very bad. U knw dat I cant remain angry from u long. Datsy u do all dis. Mom is rite I had spoiled u a lot.

Shilpa(hugs her): oh Di! U r sweetest Sis in dis world. By d way where r u going to meet jiju.. sorry Maan today.

Geet: At coffee shop near our college.

Shilpa: wow! can I also come.

Geet: u better concentrate on ur studies. Ur exams r on ur head.

Shilpa: Pls Di!

Geet: shilpa no means no.

Shilpa(annoyed)

: k fine. But next time I'll definitely accompany u.

Geet(to herself): Next time aayega tab na.

Shilpa: u said something?

Geet: huh.. no. c'mon had ur breakfast fast. I'll drop u to ur college.

Shilpa: k di.

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On the other Side Maan nd Armaan r also having dere Breakfast nd discussing about Geet.

Armaan: So d gr8 Maan Singh Khurana is going for his First Date ever.

Maan: its nt a Date Armaan.

Armaan: ofcourse it is. Dis is d first time wen u r going out wid a girl. So wat would u call it?

Maan: nthing. I just need to clarify few things to her.

Armaan: o ya! Dude u can't hide from me I m experienced.

Maan: ya I knw the times wen u nd Riddhima goes around (Den suddenly realizes something) Sorry yaar, dnt want to hurt u.

Armaan(being serious): its ok Dude. I dnt mind. She's Happy in her Married life nw nd m happy in mine.

Maan: but u really loved her. Dnt u?

Armaan: ofcourse more den myself. But wat can I do if destiny doesn't wanted us to get unite.

Maan(consoling Armaan): Chill dude. U'll definitely get ur Ms. Perfect soon.

Armaan: like u got urs?

Maan: armaan nt again.

Armaan: ok fine. By d way ur sister-in-law is also not dat bad nd she's also studying medicals nd wanted her internship in Sanjeevani. So wat say? Me nd Her?

Maan: shut up Armaan. She's nt like other mumbai girls. So u dnt try ur Flirting on her.

Armaan: oho! d possessive Jiju. So much care for ur Sister-in-law.

Maan: Armaan its nt like dat.....

Armaan: Take it easy Maan! I was only kidding.

Maan: good for u.

Armaan: by d way where r u going to meet her today?

Maan: at d coffee Shop near her college.

Armaan: good. All d best.

Maan: Ammy! M not going for some kind of a war dat u r wishing me luck.

Armaan: taking a girl to a date is kind of a war only.

Maan: Armaan.. nt again pls.

Armaan: ok ok Fine. So u carry on. I need to go to Amritsar branch of Sanjeevani. See u in d evening.

Maan: k bye!

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It was 5:45 in d evening Geet Parked her Scooty at d parking Lot den checked her Watch. She realized that she is 15 mins. Late.

Geet(to herself): So wat? Its only 15 mins. Nd I m sure that he would also have not came yet.

She headed inside d Coffee shop nd was surprised to see dat Maan is already dere nd waiting for her. She goes to his Seat.

Geet: Hi!

Maan: Hi! U r 15 mins. Late.

Geet(murmurs): Is he kind of a Timepiece or wat?

Maan: u said something?

Geet: huh.... no, I m sorry. Actually I got stuck up in d traffic.

Maan: its ok. Pls have a seat.

Geet: thanx. U said that u want to talk something important to me

Maan: ya We'll talk but y not have some Coffee First. I knw u Love d Coffee of dis shop.

Geet: Ya. Dis also has been told by Shilpa only.

Maan: ya

Geet: as expected..

Maan:wat?

Geet: nothing.

Maan calls d waiter to take their order.

"Black Coffee" dey both said together den looked at each other in surprise.

Maan: Actually I like Black Coffee only.

Geet: same here.

Maan(to waiter): Two black coffee. (den turned to Geet). Geet I knw u must be very angry on me as I haven't done wat u have said to me. For dat only I called u over here as these things we can't discuss on call.

Geet: ya, I too wanna discuss it. Nw will u pls tell me y u didn't reject me.

Maan: Relax Geet! I m coming to dat point only. See I respect ur Concern towards ur family nd trust me I dnt want to hurt u.

Geet said nothing but looked at him.

Maan: Geet, usually d girls of ur Age Doesn't want to get married because dey had some kind of Affair wid someone else or their family is putting pressure on dem. But u r d First girl who don't want to get married because u want to support ur family. U didn't care for ur Happiness but u care for ur family. Nd I really appreciate dis feeling of urs.

Geet: wen u know all dis den y u didn't refuse.

Maan: because I want to help u Geet.

Geet: oh really! Hw?

Maan: see if I would have rejected u den dere is no guarantee dat d other guy who'll come to see u will reject u too.

Geet: So?

Maan: So like dis u r engaged to me nw dere will be no more proposals for u nd I understand d problem of urs so I won't force u for Marriage until u set-up ur career. Moreover like dis u r helping to me also.

Geet(surprised): I m helping u? hw?

Maan: See like u I also dnt want to get married. But my Dadi is forcing me to marry nd I can't refuse her as I love her so much like u love ur Mom. Yesterday in ur Room I was about to say to u 'to reject me' but before I could say anything to u, u already said me to reject u.

Geet: go on, I m listening.

Maan: See we both dnt want to get married. But we both r doing dis for our Family. So its better we both get engaged jst in front of our families. Nd I Assure u dat our relation will never lead to Marriage.

Geet: u have assured me yesterday also.

Maan: I tld u d reason Geet. Dis tym its d promise nd wen Maan Singh Khurana makes any promise he lived up to it. So wat say? Do u like d deal?

Geet: Deal?

Maan: Ya its just kind of a Deal only na u need my help nd I need urs we both need each other (directing his Hand towards geet) so wat say?

Geet(Thinking): not a bad Idea! He too didn't want to get married nd I also dat means dere will be no chance of Love nd all dat. I think I must say yes to him.

Maan: Geet wat r u thinking?

Geet: huh.... Nothing I think u r rite (gives her hand to meet his hand) I Agree wid ur Deal.

Suddenly Waiter brings Coffee for dem. Maan gestures him to go nd gives one cup to geet.

Maan( giving coffee): thanx geet for understanding.

Geet: no thanx to u nd sorry too.

Maan: Sorry for wat?

Geet: actually Yesterday I was so mad on u that even I dnt knw wat kinds of things I have thought for u.

Maan raises his Eyebrow to geet

Geet: dnt worry I haven't thought dat much bad wat u r thinking. But I couldn't able to understand one thing.

Maan: wat?

Geet: see I dnt want to marry because I want to support my family but u r so well-settled den wats ur problem?

Maan: I knw dat u'll definitely ask dis Question. I know I m well settled but I really dnt like dis Marriage nd all. I mean dere were so much problems after marriage u lose ur own privacy after dat. Therefore I want to stay away from dis.

Geet(not fully convienced): ok!

Then she thought "who cares its his Life d best part is dat I m nt going to get married" then she started drinking her Coffee.

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Shilpa is waiting for taxi outside her college usually Geet use to come to pick her up but today she told her to come by herself as she's going to meet maan. Suddenly she notices a bike stops in front of her. She notices dat it was Armaan.

Armaan: Hey Hi!

Shilpa: Hi!

Armaan: Wat r u doing here?

Shilpa: Playing Cricket. U want to play?

Armaan: wat?

Shilpa: c'mon Armaan wat else u expect from me by standing outside my college. Obviously I m waiting for taxi. Today Di will nt come to pick me up.

Armaan: Oh! Shall I drop u?

Shilpa: y? r u a Driver?

Armaan: ofcourse not.

Shilpa: den?

Armaan: see u r standing here alone nd its getting late moreover u r sister-in-law of my best friend so I have some responsibility towards u.

Shilpa: oh really

Armaan: yup! So come I'll drop u.

Shilpa was nt sure whether she should go wid him or not. She hardly knows him nd jst because he is Maan's frnd she can't trust easily on him.

Armaan: hey wat r u thinking? Dnt think too much. U knw u r very lucky dat I m giving u lift. U knw dere r so many girls who wants me to give lift to dem.

Shilpa: y? r u SRK?

Armaan: no, not SRK but not less den him also.

Shilpa: oh! Over-confidence ha!

Armaan: whatever u call it. Hey we can discuss it on route also its really getting late nw.

Shilpa: ok I'll come. Thanx

Armaan: u r always welcome.

Shilpa: wat?

Armaan: nothing.

He started driving.

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Outside d Coffee Shop Geet nd Maan both r heading towards Parking lot.

Maan: hey! Hw will u go home? Shall I drop u?

Geet: no thanx I have my Scooty. I'll go.

Maan: r u sure? Otherwise u can come wid me nd I'll ask driver to get ur scooty to ur Home.

Geet: no, dnt worry I can go.

Maan: k, as u wish. By the way thanx once again

Geet: oh pls! thanx to mujhe aapko kehna chahiye.

Maan: for wat?

Geet: For coffee nd helping me. So thanx

Maan: dnt be so formal Geet. I haven't done dat much dat u r saying so many times thank u to me.

Geet: k fine I'll nt say it again. (realizes that dey reached to d parking lot) See finally we reached. So I'll take ur leave nw. Bye!

Maan: Bye Geet!

Geet starting her scooty. Maan sees her, smiles den headed towards his car.

Precap:

Geet Giving Lift to Maan on her scooty.

hey Guys hope u all like Part 2. pls hit d Like Button if u like it nd do Leave ur Comment/criticism. Suggestions r always welcome.

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow...this is really good...please add me to the pm list...love ur ff

great update
don't tell me ,Maan's car is spoilt..hahahahahahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW thats Awesome
Thats Simply Superb
Loved it
The Precap is so interesting
OMG Geet giving lift to Maan on her Scooty😉
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanq so much for the PM
Pls Update Soon

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